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宜山一中周小珠Gladtoseeyou,everybody!--Thewaystoimproveyourwritingactivitiessubjectsclassmatesteachers…busy/interesting/wonderful/colorful/fantastic…boring/terrible/so-so…TalkaboutyourschoollifePairwork:Whatdoyouusuallydo…?Whatdoyouthinkof…?What/Whoisyourfavorite…?Howareyougettingonwith…?Doyou…?…扩写练习：likesplayingsportshealthyhealthyHeisaboy.Heisa____________boy.Heisa__________boywho___________________.Ilikemusic.Ilike________music.Ilike________musicthat____________________.dancedancecanmakemeexcited仿写练习：目的原因Shealways______________________to_______________because___________________.relaxlistenstosomemusicmusicisfantasticrelaxstudybettergetsomeknowledgekeephealthyhavearesthavefungetgoodgrades…MissCoolMr.Ball仿写练习：Itis_____________for____to________________________.necessaryhimdifficult/easy/exciting/interesting/scaring/strangedangerous/difficult/wonderful/possibleimpossible/unbelievable/unexpected…Itis___________forchildrentoplayinthestreet.readbooksdangerousIalways____________to_______________because___________________.Itis_________for____to__________________.who/that引导的定语从句。Usethesesentencepatterns(句型)todescribe（描述）yourschoollife.Groupwork:activitiessubjectsclassmatesteachers…IamgoingtohaveatriptotheWestLakewithmyfriend.IwilldosomestudiestoimprovemymathbecauseIamalittleweakinit.Itisnecessaryformetodosomehousework,suchascookingbreakfastandcleaningrooms.找出用所学句型写的好句。ChoosegoodwordsandsentencestoimproveyourwritingstrategyCompare:BisbetterthanAin08省考试说明范文HowgladIam!Icandomanythingsofmyown.IamgoingtohaveatriptotheWestLakewithmyfriend.IwillalsodosomestudiestoimprovemymathbecauseIamalittleweakinit.Ofcourseitisnecessaryformetodosomehousework,suchascookingbreakfastandcleaningrooms.Isn’tmyplannice?beginningkeysentencelinkingwords连词endingIamgoingtohaveatriptotheWestLakewithmyfriend.IwilldosomestudiestoimprovemymathbecauseIamalittleweakinit.Itisnecessaryformetodosomehousework,suchascookingbreakfastandcleaningrooms.fluency流畅consecution条理Myhobbies(Beginning):___________________________________.(KeysentenceA):______________________.Ioftenreadinmyfreetime.Ireadmanykindsofbooks.AndIlikethestoriesthathavegoodendings.(KeysentenceB):______________________.Ilikeallkindsofmusic.Ioftenlistentothemusicprogramsonradio.AlthoughIcan’tsingEnglishsongswell,Ilikethemalot.(KeysentenceC):_____________________.Ioftenplayping-pongafterclasses.WhenIamdoingsports,Iforgeallmytroubleandworry.Ofcourseitisnecessaryforstudentstoplaysports.(Ending)_______________________________________.Canyouaddabeginning,twootherkeysentences,somelinkingwordsandanending?Practice:IamaloverofreadingTitle:____________totogeneral总specific分specific分general总Ihavealotofhobbiesandenjoydoingmanythingsinmyfreetime.Iamaloverofreading.Iamalsoamusiclover.Ilikesportsaswell.Inshort,Ienjoymylifeinschool.Readingbooks,listeningtomusicanddoingsportsareveryhelpfultomyhealthandmystudies.MyhobbiesBeginning:KeysentenceB:KeysentenceA:Ending:Mainpart(正文):KeysentenceC:(linkingwords)Makeanoutlineforthefollowingcomposition:三年的初中生活马上就要结束了，记下你的校园生活。题目自拟(80词左右)（2007衢州卷)Title:_____________Beginning:KeysentenceB:KeysentenceA:Ending:Mainpart(正文):Useoutline提纲toimproveyourwritingstrategyoutline提纲Title:_____________Beginning:Keysentence2:Keysentence1:Ending:Mainpart(正文):Accordingtoyourownoutline,usesomegoodwordsandsentencestofinishyourcomposition.WritingIalways…to…because…Itis…for…to…who/that引导的定语从句。评价:请对照下面这个表格评价同桌的作文。1.fluency流畅consecution条理:(YesorNo)Beginning()keysentences()linkingword()ending()2.Choiceofwordsandsentences:Thenumberofspellingmistakes()Thenumberofgrammarmistakes()Doeshewritegoodwordsorsentence?()3.Others:_____________________________A(13-15分):包含内容要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚．B(11-12分):基本包含内容要点，语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚．C(8-10分):内容包含部分要点，语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意．D(6-7分):要点不明确，语言错误多，影响意思表达．E(3-5):只抄了提示词，错误百出，不知所云．F(0-2分):白卷或文不对题．作者：________得分：________评价人:_________HowtoimproveyourwritingTips:1.Makeanoutline.2.Choosegoodwordsandsentences.Homework:我市英语教学网开设了“中学生论坛”，请你结合自己的初中生活和真实感受，以Agoodteacherinmyeyes为题写一篇80词左右的短文。(Youshouldmakeanoutlinefirst)