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中考英语书面表达备考指导阜阳实验中学英语组李继涛2014.11.28AnotherpopularideaisthatStonehengemightbeakindofcalendar.Thelargestoneswereputtogetherinacertainway.Onmidsummer’smorning,thesunshinesdirectlyintothecenterofthestones.Otherpeoplebelievethestoneshaveamedicalpurpose.Theythinkthestonescanpreventillnessandkeeppeoplehealthy.“Asyouwalkthere,youcanfeeltheenergyfromyourfeetmoveyourbody,”saidonevisitor.NooneissurewhatStonehengewasusedfor,butmostagreethatthepositionofthestonesmustbeaspecialpurpose.Somethinkitmightbeaburialplaceoraplacetohonorancestors.Othersthinkitwasbuilttocelebrateavictoryoveranenemy.(选自九年级第八单元课文--Stonehenge)AnotherpopularideaisthatStonehengemightbeakindofcalendar.Thelargestoneswereputtogetherinacertainway.Onmidsummer’smorning,thesunshinesdirectlyintothecenterofthestones.Otherpeoplebelievethestoneshaveamedicalpurpose.Theythinkthestonescanpreventillnessandkeeppeoplehealthy.“Asyouwalkthere,youcanfeeltheenergyfromyourfeetmoveyourbody,”saidonevisitor.Mostagreethatthepositionofthestonesmustbeaspecialpurpose.Somethinkitmightbeaburialplaceoraplacetohonorancestors.Othersthinkitwasbuilttocelebrateavictoryoveranenemy.假定你是王伟,你的英国笔友David来信问及你们学校在署假期间对学生的要求。请你根据以下要点给他回一封电子邮件。(2014年安徽省英语中考题)●家庭安全：小心用火用电,外出时关好门窗；●游泳安全：不独自去游泳，不去河、湖游泳；●交通安全:过马路要当心，不在马路上玩耍。提示词：electricity.(电)注意：1.词数80-100；2．请不耍逐句翻译，可适当发挥；3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；4.邮件的开头和结尾以为你写好，不计入总词数。DearDavid,Gladtoreceiveyoure-mail.Ourschoolhasmademanysafetyrulesforustofollow.Letmetellyousomethingaboutthem.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ithinktheserulesarenecessaryassafetycomesfirst.Haveagoodsummerholiday!解析：1.要点多并且分类别2.多是祈使句今天是父亲节。假定你是李华，请给你的美国朋友John写一封电子邮件，谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下：●表述你与父亲间的情感；（2013年安徽中考）●为父亲制作一张卡片；●帮助父亲做点事；●陪父亲散步等。注意：1.词数80-100；2．请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥3．邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数DearJohn,It'sFather'sDaytoday.It'saspecialday,isn'tit?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What'yourplanforFather'sDay?I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua要点分析：●表述你与父亲间的情感；●为父亲制作一张卡片；●帮助父亲做点事；●陪父亲散步等。解析：虚点：帮助父亲做点事；表述你与父亲间的情感；实点：为父亲制作一张卡片陪父亲散步等策略：1.以实代虚---写实2.增加限定语—定语，状语等3.增加例子—forexample,suchas4.增加原因---进一步说明5.加套语（词块）表述你与父亲间的情感Iliketodosomethingtoexpressmythankstomyfatheronthisspecialday.Iliketodosomethingmeaningful/specialformyfather.Reasons：Becausemyfatherismybestfriend.Becausemyfatherhavedonesomuchforme.BecausemyfatheristhepersonwhoIadmiremost.BecausemyfatherandIaregoodfriends.WhenImeetwithdifficulties,heisalwaysthere,readytohelpme.Justasthesayinggoes,“Fatheristhegreatestpersonintheworld.”例证：Examples：Iwillmakeacardformyfather.Iwillmakeabeautifulcardformyfathermyself.Iwillmakeabeautifulcardformyfatherandsaytohim,“Iloveyou,daddy.”Iwillmakeabeautifulcardforhim,withmythanksandbestwishesonit.要点：散步Iwilltakeawalkwithmyfather.Iwilltakeawalkwithmyfatheraftersupper.Iwilltakeawalkwithmyfatherintheparknearbymyhome.Aftersupper,Iwilltakeawalkwithmyfatherintheparknearbymyhome.Moreexamples:（平时写过的；有把握的）Iwillbuyabirthdaycakeforhimwithmyownpocket.Aftertheexam,Iwillgethomeearly,cleanmyhouseandcookhisfavoritefood.Iwillplaychesswithhimaftersupper,becausehelikesplayingchessverymuch.Iamsurehewillbehappy.whentheexamisover,Iwillhelpmyfatherdosomehousework,suchassweepingthefloor,doingdishes,wateringflowersorfeedingpigs.AndIamsurehewillbehappy.DearJohn,It'sFather'sDaytoday.It'saspecialday,isn'tit?Iliketodosomethingtoexpressmythankstomyfatheronthisspecialday,becausemyfatheristhepersonwhoIadmiremost.First,Iwillmakeabeautifulcardforhim,withmythanksandbestwishesonit.Then,whentheexamisover,Iwillhelpmyfatherdosomehousework,suchassweepingthefloor,doingthedishes,wateringflowersorfeedingpigs.AndIamsurehewillbehappy.Aftersupper,Iwilltakeawalkwithmyfatherintheparknearbymyhome.What’syourplanforFather’sDay?I‘mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.(94words)Yours,LiHua英语课堂上，老师要求学生就“与人相处”的话题展开小组讨论。请根据以下你所在小组的讨论结果，以“howtogetonwellwithothers”为题，写一篇英语短文。(2012年安徽中考)注意：1.词数80--100；2.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；3.文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校。SuggestionsLearntoshareRespect[尊重]othersCommunicatewitheachother......Mysuggestions....解析：有英语提示词的作文，但提示词少，字数不够How?解决方法：1.加“经典的废话”—常见的套语（词块）2.加例子—例证3.加适量的定语、宾语、状语等---细化;具体4.加格言、谚语等---进一步说明5.扩充建议—自主发挥，点到即可开头套语的引入开头一：Asweallknowitisimportantforustogetalongwellwithothers.Butasamiddleschoolstudent,whatshouldwedo?Ithinkwecanlearntogetonwellwithothersinthefollowingways.（38字）开头二：Asamiddlestudent,weshouldlearntogetonwellwithothersindifferentways.（16字）First,…Second,…Third,…Inaword,(inshort,allinall)加例子Firstofall,weshouldrespectothers.Forexample,wearen’tsupposedtotellliestoourclassmates.Second,weshouldlearntosharehappinessandsadness.sharesomefunnystoriesorsomeusefulbookswithourfriends.Third,wecancommunicatewithourclassmatesoften.Forinstance,wecanchatwiththemontheInternet.Inmyopinion,weshouldtryourbesttohelpthosefriendsintrouble.Justasthesayinggoes,“Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.”Inaword,wecangetonwellothersinmanyways.Asamiddlestudent,weshouldlearntogetonwellwithothersindif