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Unit4Iusedtobeafraidofthedark.Talking3aWritenotesabouthowyouhavechangedinyourappearance,personalityandhobbies.Thentalkwithapartneraboutyourchanges.Appearance:tall,short,fat,thin,slim,strong,young,old,straighthair,curlyhair,longhair,shorthair,amediumbody…TalkingPersonality:humorous,outgoing,serious,funny,smart,friendly,shy,helpful,quiet,active,brave,unfriendly...hobbies:readcartoon/novel,sing,dance,playfootball/basketball…TalkingWhatmakesagoodcomposition?Discussion写作步骤•审题立意•定主人称时态•用词得当•检查修改写作时•找关键词•由词组句•组句成段•扩句成段ContentEverythingneededincludedwhichisrelatedtoyourview.(内容要完整)StructureGoodbeginningandending(好的开头结尾)Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped(结构合理,行文流畅)Properlinkingwordsbetweensentences（使用恰当的连接词）Writesentencesbyusingusedto:1.I/havecurlyhair/havestraighthairIusedtohavecurlyhair,butnowIhavestraighthair.2.I/sofat/thinIusedtobesofat,butnowIamthin.Writesentencesbyusingusedto:3.I/shy/outgoingandbraveIusedtobeshy,butnowIamoutgoingandbrave.4.I/readbooksonmartialarts/readbooksonWesterncultureIusedtoreadbooksonmartialarts,butnowIreadbooksonWesternculture.Writesentencesbyusingusedto:1.我过去是走路上学的。Iusedtogotoschoolonfoot/walktoschool.2.我过去喜欢跑步，但现在我喜欢打篮球。Iusedtolikerunning,butnowIlikeplayingbasketball.Properlinkingwordsbetweensentences（连接词）•first,second,third(themostimportant)•firstly,secondly,thirdly(finally),首先，第二，第三表示举例子：•forexample例如•Take…forexample以…为例•suchas比如•like像表示转折：•however(but)然而(但是)表示个人观点：•Inmyview在我看来•Inmyopinion我认为•AsfarasIamconcerned就我而言Writeabouthowyouhavechanged.Whatdidyouusetobelike?Whichchangeisthemostimportantone,andwhy?3bTrytowritethreeparagraphs.（总分总）Paragraph1:Generalintroductionaboutthechangesinyourlife.Paragraph2:Themostimportantchangeandhowithappened.Paragraph3:ToexpressyourownideasHowI’veChanged!Mylifehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.Iusedto_________________________.NowI’m______________________________.Thebiggestchangeinmylifewas__________________________________________.Thisisthemostimportantchangebecause____________________________________________________________________.HowI’veChanged！Mylifehaschangedalotinthepastfewyears.Iusedtohavesomuchtime,butnowI’mtoobusy.Ialwaysusedtogetupearlyandstayinschoolallday.BeforeIgotohighschool,Iusedtospendlotsoftimeplayinggameswithmyfriends,butIjustdon’thavethetimeanymore.Intheevening,IusedtowatchTVorplaycomputergames,butnowIhavetostudy.Ilovemusic,andmyfatherusedtotakemetoconcerts.ButIstillreallylovemypresentlife.ThebiggestchangeinmylifewasI’mmorebusythanbefore,becauseIwentintohighschoolandIhavemorehomework.