高中英语 必修一Unit3 writing

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SectionⅣWriting原句1ItwasmysisterwhofirsthadtheideatocyclealongtheentireMekongRiverfromwhereitbeginstowhereitends.首先想到沿湄公河从源头到终点骑车旅游的是我的姐姐。点评句中的“Itis/was...that/who...”是强调句型,用来强调句子的主语、宾语、状语等。仿写①是我明天要去机场接我的朋友。______________________________________________________②昨天我在湖里看到的就是天鹅。(提示:天鹅swans)______________________________________________________ItisIwho/thatwillgototheairporttomeetmyfriends.ItwasswansthatIsawinthelakeyesterday.原句2Althoughshedidn'tknowthebestwayofgettingtoplaces,sheinsistedthatsheorganizethetripproperly.尽管她对去某些地方的最佳路线并不清楚,她却坚持要自己把这次旅游安排得尽善尽美。点评这个长句是由三个简单句合并而成:①Shedidn'tknowthebestwayofgettingtoplaces.②Sheinsistedit.③Sheorganizedthetripproperly.合并之第一步:句③中的内容即是句②中it指代的内容,我们可以用insistthat...将其合并(insist后接宾语从句要用虚拟语气)。合并之第二步:句①和句②之间存在“尽管……但是”的关系,故可以用although来引导让步状语从句将其合并。仿写①尽管他非常忙,但是他仍然坚持要每天做运动。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________Althoughhewasquitebusy,hestillinsistedthathe(should)doexerciseeveryday.②尽管他们很穷,但他们坚持每年都要捐一笔钱给慈善机构。(提示:捐一笔钱donateasumofmoney;慈善机构charity)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________Althoughtheyareverypoor,theyinsistthatthey(should)donateasumofmoneytocharitieseveryyear.原句3Adeterminedpersonalwaystriestofinishthejob,nomatterhowharditis.不管困难有多大,一个有决心的人总是尽力完成工作。点评“nomatterhow/what/which/when/where...”意为“不管……,无论……”,用来引导让步状语从句。仿写①不管天气如何,她每天都要步行十英里。______________________________________________________②不管他工作多么努力,他就是得不到提升。(提示:得到提升getapromotion)______________________________________________________Nomatterwhattheweatherislike,shewalkstenmileseveryday.Nomatterhowhardheworks,hecan'tgetapromotion.travelfarebefondofpreferdeterminedjourneyviewtempledreamabouttakeabiketripvalleyaltitudebeneath旅行费用喜爱更喜欢有决心的旅行风景庙宇梦想骑自行车旅行山谷海拔在……下面本单元出现的相关词汇:本单元出现的相关句式:1.Itis/was...that/who...正是……2.Once...一旦……3.Toclimbthemountainswashardworkbutaswelookedaroundus,weweresurprisedbytheview.上山很艰难,但是当环顾四周,我们惊讶于眼前的景色。4.Atonepointwewereso...that...在某个时刻我们如此……以致……5.Wecanhardlywaittoseethem!我们迫不及待地想要见到他们!旅行游记是记述游览经历的文章,是记叙文的一种。它是比较常见的作文体裁之一,主要有写一天的游历、写游览某个景点或某个城市等。旅行游记都要有一个清晰明了的顺序,即作者的游览路线。同时,游记还应突出作者对景观的独特感受,融情于景,使外在的自然风光与作者内心的特殊感受相结合,从而更强烈地打动读者。TodaywevisitedQinghuaUniversity.EarlyinthemorningwearrivedatthegateofQinghuaUniversity,①wherewewerewarmlywelcomedbyanoldprofessor,②whothenshowedusaroundthecampus.Inthelibrary,wesawsomeuniversitystudentsreadingattentivelyinthereadingrooms.Afterthat,wecametothelabbuilding.Attheendofthevisit,theoldprofessorgaveusalectureonscience,③whichinterestedusverymuch.④Timepassedsoquicklythatbeforeweknewit,⑤itwastimethatwehadtosaygoodbyetotheprofessor.Sincethen,IhaveworkedharderatmylessonsthanusualandmadeupmymindtobeastudentofQinghuaUniversity.,结构分析:本文按照时间顺序完整记述了游览清华大学的过程,其中earlyinthemorning,then,afterthat,attheendof等时间状语使文章过渡自然,脉络清楚,文章的最后作者表达了对这次清华大学之旅的感受。亮点点评:1.时间状语(earlyinthemorning,then,afterthat,attheendof等)的运用,使文章条理清晰。2.使用定语从句,如句①②③。3.使用“so...that...”句型,如句④。4.使用“itis/wastimethat...”句型,如句⑤。游记通常为记叙文,在写作时要注意以下几点:1.一般应包括以下若干要素,即游览的时间(when)、地点(where)、参加人员(who)、交通工具(how)、在景点的活动(what)以及自己的感受(feeling)。2.常用一般过去时。但在描写景物或议论时,也可用一般现在时。3.文章结构要清晰,注意按时间或地点的顺序,将文章的要素有机地结合起来。旅游者线路旅馆服务交通票价格行李地图历史纪念品名胜去观光坐飞机/火车/船/公交车/小汽车/骑自行车著名的有趣的多山的友好的辉煌的昂贵的各种去购物raveler/touristroutehotelservicetransportticketpriceluggagemapgosightseeingbyair/plane/train/boat/bus/car/bikefamousinterestingmountainousfriendlysplendidhistorysouvenirexpensiveplaceofinterestavarietyofgoshopping必背词汇疲劳的舒适的愉快的玩得开心常用句式感觉自在的对……熟悉上车/下车经过tiredcomfortableenjoyablehavegoodtimebe/feelathomebefamiliarwithgeton/offgoby必背词汇enjoyoneselfhavefun1.TodayIpaidavisitto...withmy...今天我和我的……一起参观了……2.Therearemanyplacesofinterestin...suchas...在……有很多名胜,……3.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit,sowehadto...时间不知不觉过去了,我们不得不……4.Howglad/happy/excitedIfeeltoday!今天我感到多么高兴啊!【小试牛刀】请根据下列表格中的内容写一篇游记,介绍去年暑假你的青岛之旅。时间去年暑假旅行人员我和我的家人交通方式坐火车所见所闻1.充足的阳光和新鲜的空气令人舒适;2.我们在海边见到像天一样蓝的大海,在沙滩上享受日光浴(bathinthesunshineonthebeach);3.我和妹妹捡了很多色彩鲜艳的贝壳,我们也买了很多有趣的纪念品打算送给朋友;4.我们吃了很多美味的海鲜,住在一家干净、整洁且价格不高的旅店里。感受我们玩得很开心,我还想再来青岛。[写作内容]参考例文•Lastsummervacation,myfamilyandIwenttoQingdaobytrain.Therewasalwaysamplesunshineandfreshair,whichmadeussocomfortable.Wewenttotheseasidetoseetheseathatwasasblueasthesky,andbathinginthesunshineonthebeach,wasreallyanenjoyablething.Ialsopickedupalotofcolorfulshellswithmylittlesisterandwealsoboughtmanyinterestingsouvenirs,whichwewereplanningtosendtomyfriends.Weateavarietyofdeliciousseafoodandlivedinacleanandtidyhotel,whosepricewasnotsohigh.IhadfuninQingdao,soIhopetogothereagainifIgetachance.令人舒适的充足的阳光在沙滩上洗澡像天一样蓝色彩鲜艳的纪念品捡,拾定语从句很开心干净的整洁的旅店的价格定语从句新鲜的空气美味的定语从句许多去年暑假乘火车[写作要求]1.只能用5个句子表达全部内容;2.作文的开头已经给出,不计入总句数。参考范文:Last_summer_vacation,_my_family_and_I_went_to_Qing­dao_by_train.Therewasalwayssunshineandfreshair,whichmadeussocomfortable.Wewenttotheseasidetoseetheseathatwasasblueasthesky,andbathinginthesunshineonthebeachwasreallyanenjoyablething.Ipickedupalotofcolorfulshellswithmylittlesisterandwealsoboughtmanyinterestingsouvenirsthere,whichwewereplanningtosendto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