初三英语作文教学课件总复习--钟爱华

ByZhongAihuafromQiaosimiddleschoolEnglishwritingskillsWhatdoyouusuallydoonweekends?Iusually…DISCUSSION:Whatwordsorphrasescanyouthinkofwhenyouseetheword“Internet”?downloadsearchforlatestnewsfastconvenientwatchgamesE-mailsendinformationInternetStepstowardswritingagoodparagraphStep1MakesentencesusingthewordsorphrasesdownloadsearchforlatestnewsfastconvenientwatchgamesE-mailsendinformationInternet1.WiththeInternet，wecangetthelatestnews.2.TheInternetisfastandconvenient.3.Wecanfindanddownloadinformationthatweneed.5.Wecanplaygamesonit.4.Wecansendsomeemailstoourfriends.Sentenceswepossiblywrite:StepstowardswritingagoodparagraphStep2Howtochangeitintoawell-organizedparagraphThestructureofacompositionTopicsentenceSupportingdetailsReason1Reason2Reason3ConclusionFindthetopicsentenceintheparagraphIlistentomusicwhiledrivingtowork.IlistentomusicwhenI’mthinking.IlistentomusicwhenI’mhappy.EvenwhenI’msad,Ilistentomusic,too.Ican’tlivewithoutmusic.Musicplaysanimportantpartinmylife.Musicplaysanimportantpartinmylife.Writeatopicsentenceforthereport.Abigproblem90%ofthecity’sriversarepolluted.Theairinthecityisgettingdirtier.Noiseisbecomingabigheadacheforpeople.Pollutionisbecomingaseriousprobleminthecity.1.WiththeInternet，wecangetthelatestnews.2.TheInternetisfastandconvenient.3.Wecanfindanddownloadinformationthatweneed.5.Wecanplaygamesonit.4.Wecansendsomeemailstoourfriends.WritethesesentencesintoaparagraphWriteatopicsentencefortheparagraphWiththeInternet，wecangetthelatestnews.TheInternetisfastandconvenient.Wecanfindanddownloadinformationthatweneed.Wecansendemailstofriends.Wecanplaygamesonit.TheInternetplaysanimportantpartinourlife./TheInternetisveryusefulinourlife.Conclusion:Wecan’tlivewithouttheInternet.HowtowriteagoodparagraphNowadaystheInternetplaysanimportantpartinourlife.WiththeInternet，wecangetthelatestnews.Itisfastandconvenient.Wecanfindanddownloadinformationthatweneed.Wecansendemailstofriends.Wecanplaygamesonit.Wecan’tlivewithouttheInternet.Connectthesentenceswithlinkwordstointroducesupportingpoints:First(Firstly),…Second(Secondly),…Third(Thirdly),…Firstofall,…Also(Inaddition),…Finally,…However,…Addlinkwordstothefollowingparagraph.1.Ofallthewaysoftraveling,Iliketravelingbytrainbest.______,Ineedn’tworryabouttrafficcrowd._______,thetrainsarefastandcomfortable.Youcanusethetimeindifferentways.Youcanjustsitandreadsomething,oryoucanenjoythesceneryoutofthewindow.______,youcanhaveamealinthediningcarorgotosleepinthesleepingcar.FirstSecondThirdFillintheblankswithlinkwords2.Schooluniformrulehasitsadvantages._________,wedon’thavetospendtimethinkingaboutwhattoweareveryday.______________,wedon’tneedtoworryaboutcompetingwithothersbasedonhowwelook._________,ithassomedisadvantages.Ourpersonalitycan’tbeshownifwewearthesameclotheseveryday…______________,sometimestheuniformstyleisold-fashioned.FirstofallAlso/InadditionHoweverWhat’smoreConclusionwordsInmyopinion,…Inaword,…Inshort,…Generallyspeaking,…Addlinkwordsorphrasestomakethesupportingdetailsbetter-organized:NowadaystheInternetplaysanimportantpartinourlife.WiththeInternet，wecangetthelatestnews.Itisfastandconvenient.Wecanfindanddownloadinformationthatweneed.Wecansendemailstofriends.Wecanplaygamesonit.Wecan’tlivewithouttheInternet.MyOpinionsabouttheInternetNowadaystheInternetplaysanimportantpartinourlife.Itisnotonlyfastbutconvenientaswell.WecandomanythingswiththeInternet.Firstofall,wecangetthelatestnews.Secondly,Wecanfindanddownloadinformationthatweneed.What’smore,wecansendemailstofriends.Wecanevenplaygamesonit.Inaword,wecan’tlivewithouttheInternet.(70words)BodyConclusion/OpinionTopicsentenceSupportingdetailsRightLinkwordsandsentencepatternsAgoodcompositionof“givingopinion”titleSummary中考模拟作文现在很多同学喜欢上网，但是老师对学生上网观点不一，请谈谈你对学生上网的观点。TeachersOpinionReasonssomeagreemakefriends，begoodforstudyothersdisagreewastetime,loseoneselfingamesI……RecentlyI’vehadadiscussionwithmyparentsaboutwhetheritisnecessaryformiddleschoolstudentstogototrainingclassesorhavetutorsonweekends.RecentlyI’vehadadiscussionwithmyparentsaboutwhetheritisnecessaryformiddleschoolstudentstogototrainingclassesorhavetutorsonweekends.写作注意的几个问题：1.尽量使用简单句，要牢记“避繁就简”原则，不要出现单词拼写和语法错误。2.把握要点，避免遗漏，注意发挥适度既不要多写也不要少写。3.注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连贯，适当使用连词，如：and,so,or,but,What’smore;What’sworse,notonly…butalso,neither…nor等。4.字体一定要工整漂亮。Homework假如你叫李明，上周你们班同学就“毕业前我们应该为学校做些什么？”为话题进行了热烈的讨论。请你根据下表提示，将同学们的建议用英语写一封信，告诉你的笔友David，并谈谈你自己的想法及理由。StudentsOpinionReasonssomeBuymakefriends，begoodforstudyotherswastetime,loseoneselfingamesI……