2014年中考英语写作专项训练

Writingpracticewriteashortcomposition检查预习Lifeislikeajourney,Everyonewillmeethisownproblems.Howtodealwiththem?WhenIwasinGradeone,Igetmyreportcard,anditisverybad.Iamverysad.Iafraidofgoinghome,becauseIdidn’twantmyparentsfeelunhappy.ButIhavetogohome.WhenIopenthedoor,IsawmymotherwatchingTVinthelivingroom.Thensheaskedmeaboutmygrades.Itoldsheaboutmygrades.Tomysurprise,shesmiledandtoldme,“Don’tworry,Ibelieveyoucangetgoodgradesnexttime.Youshouldbelieveinyourself.lateron,Istudyhardandlistentotheteacherscarefullyinclass.Iregardtheproblemsasthechallenges.andtrymybesttodealwitheverything.Irealizeifwefacetheproblems,don’tworry.Smiletolife5分Lifeislikeajourney,Everyonewillmeethisownproblems.Howtodealwith?WhenIwasinGradeone,Igetmyreportcard,anditisverybad.Iamverysad.Iafraidofgoinghome,becauseIdidn’twantmyparentsfeelunhappy.ButIhavetogohome.WhenIopenthedoor,IsawmymotherwatchingTVinthelivingroom.Thensheaskedmeaboutmygrades.Itoldsheaboutmygrades.Tomysurprise,shesmiledandtoldme,“Don’tworry,Ibelieveyoucangetgoodgradesnexttime.Youshouldbelieveinyourself.lateron,Istudyhardandlistentotheteacherscarefullyinclass.Iregardtheproblemsasthechallenges.andtrymybesttodealwitheverything.Now,Irealizeifwefacetheproblems,don’tworry.再现中考作文Task11.人称？2.主要时态？3.提示包括什么？2011年提示：在阳光雨露里，我．已长高、长壮!但这还不是全部，长大还应包括什么?是关心、帮助同学?是体贴、理解父母?是感恩、回报亲朋师长?还是……成长的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请以‘‘IAmNotaChildAnyMore”为题记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事，表明你已不再是一个小孩。IAmNotaChildAnyMore2012年TheBestMomentinMyMemory提示：生活中有许多美好的瞬间：当你经过努力取得成功的时候；当你帮助别人或得到别人帮助的时候；当你看到别人做好事的时候……请以TheBestMomentinMyMemory为题，写一件发生在你我身边的事，留下你记忆中最美的瞬间。2013年ATalktoMyself提示：在初三的学习和生活中，你有许多快乐，也有许多遗憾。在即将毕业之际，你想对自己说点什么呢？再现历年中考作文What'syouropinion?1.人称？------2.主要时态？-----3.提示包括什么？I三个一般主要围绕亲情和友情,学会关心身边的人和事。通过某一件事去感悟人生的哲理.要求：a.80~100个词.b.要求有一定比例的复合句,并且要会使用适当的过渡词,段落层次分明.c.作文的表达不局限于一种时态.写作要求写作要求Task2DiscussionThestepsofwriting1:认真审题，把握体裁；2:细读提示，确定时态；3:动笔书写，考虑词句；4.:核对修改，规范誊写；Task3叙事性写作模式：1（开头）2（叙事）3（结尾）开头——呼应（点题）——结尾Lovefrom……提示：在你的成长过程中，爸爸妈妈，老师，朋友给了你无限的爱，你肯定把这份深情牢记在心。请记述爸爸妈妈，老师或者是朋友为你做过的一件事，表达他们对你的爱。娃娃不哭！GroupworkWhatisparent'slove?exercise题目TheLovefrom...要求1.eightminutes2.80-100个词3.writeashortpassage4.report1、Mumisthegreatestpersoninmylife2、Mumalwayscaresmewellanddoeseverythingforme.3、Thankstoher(mum).Icanliveahappylifeallday.ndselflesslove短文范例LovefromMumMymotheristhegreatestpersoninmylife.Thankstoher,Icanliveahappylifeallday.（开头）IstillrememberwhenIwastenyearsold.Ireceivedmymother’sgiftthatwasawonderfulbook.Ireaditinmysparetime.Fromthebook.Ihavelearntthattheworldwasfullofloveandbeauty.Ialsoknewthatpeopleshouldhelpeachother,understandeachotherandloveeachother.Iwasverythankful.Becauseit’snotonlyabookbutalsomymother’sdeeplove.(叙事)I’dliketosay：“Mum,Iloveyou,Thankyou!”（结尾））Teacher’swordsforyou:（教师寄语）Weshouldbelieveinourselves.Becauselifeisalwaysfullofsunshine,thereisplentyoflovefromourparents,friendsandteachers.Wealsoshouldlearntoloveandunderstandeachother.homework“Thelovefrom……”HelpingothersmakesushappyEveryoneshouldtryourbesttobecomeapersonwhocanalwayshelppeople.It’snotonlyothersbutalsowe’llfeelhappy.Lastsummerholiday,Iwithmybestfriendswenttotheoldpeople’shome.Thereweremanyoldmenwhoneededtotakecareof.Themostimportant,theylookedlonely.So,wedecidedtocheeredthemupbyhelpingthemdosomething.Atfirst,wecleaneduproomsandyard.Lateron,wewashedtheirclothes,althoughitwastootired,wefelthappyandlively.Maybeweneededtodosomethingelse,however,wetalkedwitholdmenandtoldjokes.Ofcourse,wealsotookphotoswiththem,thentheseoldmensmiledtous,”Thanksforyoudoingforus,weallhopetoseeyouagainbecauseyougiveushappiness.”Finally,ourheartwerefilledwithlovefromkindoldpeople.Itwasreallyaneducationalexperienceforus.Ifwecouldhelpotherpeopleasfaraspossible,theworldwillbefullofloveandwewillfeelhappy.HelpingothersmakesmehappyEveryonecanmeetmanydifficultthings.Whenwecan’tdoitalone,weneedhelpfromotherpeople.Oneday,myfriendsandiplayedbasketballwithagirlwhowedidn’tknow.Sheplayedbasketballverywellandsheplayedveryhappilyasus.Maybeshewasn’tcarefully,whileshewasshotting,otherpeopleknockedintoherandshefelldown.Itwasbad.Ithoughtshegotinjuredbecauseshecouldn’tstandupbyherself,althoughwedidn’tknowherweunderstoodthesafewasimportant.Sowedecidedtosendhertohospital.Wetookataxiandwenttohospitalwithher.Luckily,thedoctorsaidshewasn’tserious.Atlast,thegirl’sparentscameandtheysaidweweregoodgirls.Wewerehappy.Afterthisthing.Iknewhelpingothersmakesushappy.Andithinkifpeoplecanhelpeachother,thewordwillbamuchmorebeautifulandlove.I’mluckytobeyourteacher.Thankyou.Bye