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专题十五短文改错模拟精选题Passage1(2016·山西重点中学协作体模拟)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。HavingagoodteacherdomeanalottousstudentsandIamluckyenoughtohavetheone—MissBrown,myEnglishteacher.MissBrownisacharmingladyalwayswornabigsmileonherface.InthefirstclasssheintroducedherandthenaskedustosaysomethingaboutourselveswithEnglish.Whenitwasmyturn,IfelttooshyandfearfulthatIdidn’tdaretosayaword.Shecameuptomeandsaid,“Don’tafraid.Youcanmakeit.Justhaveatry.”Atlast,Ididitquitegood.ShepraisedmeforthatIhaddone.NevershallIforgotmyfirstEnglishclassinseniorhighschool.答案HavingagoodteacherdodoesmeanalottousstudentsandIamluckyenoughtohavetheone—MissBrown,myEnglishteacher.MissBrownisacharmingladyalwayswornwearingabigsmileonherface.InthefirstclasssheintroducedherherselfandthenaskedustosaysomethingaboutourselveswithinEnglish.Whenitwasmyturn,IfelttoososhyandfearfulthatIdidn’tdaretosayaword.Shecameuptomeandsaid,“Don’tafraid.Youcanmakeit.Justhaveatry.”Atlast,Ididitquitegoodwell.ShepraisedmeforthatwhatIhaddone.NevershallIforgotforgetmyfirstEnglishclassinseniorhighschool.Passage2(2016·汉中市二次质检)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Smilingisauniversallanguagebutcangiveuscourage,confidenceandcomfort.IstillrememberhowupsetIamwhenitwasmyturntoreciteapoembeforeclass.Feelnervousandshy,Iforgotalmosteverything.Idecidedtogiveup,butallmyclassmates,especialmyteacherkeptsmilingatmeencouragingly.TheirsmilewarmedmesomuchthatIgotoverthedifficultyandeventuallymadeitup.Ithinksmilingnotonlymakesushappybutalsohelpbuildupourconfidence.Furthermore,theywillimprovetherelationshipbetweenus.Itissmilingthatbringsharmonyus.Onlywhenyousmileattheworlddoestheworldsmileatyou.Therefore,keepsmilingandshowyourbesttotheworld.答案Smilingisauniversallanguagebutand/which/thatcangiveuscourage,confidenceandcomfort.IstillrememberhowupsetIamwaswhenitwasmyturntoreciteapoembeforeclass.FeelFeelingnervousandshy,Iforgotalmosteverything.Idecidedtogiveup,butallmyclassmates,especialespeciallymyteacherkeptsmilingatmeencouragingly.TheirsmilesmileswarmedmesomuchthatIgotoverthedifficultyandeventuallymadeitup.Ithinksmilingnotonlymakesushappybutalsohelphelpsbuildupourconfidence.Furthermore,theyitwillimprovetherelationshipbetweenus.Itissmilingthatbringsharmonyus.Onlywhenyousmileattheworlddoeswilltheworldsmileatyou.Therefore，keepsmilingandshowyourbesttotheworld.Passage3(2016·临沂一模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。ThismorningIsawoffmyauntatrailwaystation.Thereweremanypassengerinthewaitingroom.Isawanoldladycryingsadbecauseshehadlostherticketandnotabletoaffordanotherone.Iwasthinkingabouthelpingherwhenamancomeuptocomforther.Thenheboughtheraticketwithhisownmoney.TheoldLadywassomovingthatshecouldhardlysayaword.Shegraspedhishandandaskedforhisnameoraddress.Butheonlysmileandsaid，“It’smypleasure.”Thenheleftawayquickly.Iwasgreatlymovedbysuchamanhewarmedotherswithhislove.答案ThismorningIsawoffmyauntatrailwaystation.Thereweremanypassengerpassengersinthewaitingroom.Isawanoldladycryingsadsadlybecauseshehadlostherticketandnotabletoaffordanotherone.Iwasthinkingabouthelpingherwhenamancomecameuptocomforther.Thenheboughtheraticketwithhisownmoney.TheoldLadywassomovingmovedthatshecouldhardlysayaword.Shegraspedhishandandaskedforhisnameorandaddress.Butheonlysmilesmiledandsaid，“It’smypleasure.”Thenheleftawayquickly.Iwasgreatlymovedbysuchamanhewhowarmedotherswithhislove.Passage4(2016·株洲市质检)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。HiLana，Iam61yearsoldandIamfromNewZealand.IstartteachinginChinalastFebruary.IdecidedthatIreached60yearsIwouldliketodosomethingdifferent.IwasluckytohavegotadegreeinEnglish,thathelpedmefindajobasateacherinChina.NowIworkwithtwoCanadianteacher.One,57,hasbeenhereforfouryears,andtheother,63,havebeenteachingherefor6years.HemarriedwithalovelyChineselady.TheChinesepeoplearehard－workingbutthestudentsaresowillingtolearn.Howaninterestingcountrytolivein!IfeelsaferherethananywhereIlived.Ihavefoundhertipsonteachingsousefully.Thankyou!Dave答案HiLana，Iam61yearsoldandIamfromNewZealand.IstartstartedteachinginChinalastFebruary.IdecidedthatIreached60yearsIwouldliketodosomethingdifferent.IwasluckytohavegotadegreeinEnglish,thatwhichhelpedmefindajobasateacherinChina.NowIworkwithtwoCanadianteacherteachers.One,57,hasbeenhereforfouryears,andtheother,63,havehasbeenteachingherefor6years.HemarriedwithalovelyChineselady.TheChinesepeoplearehard－workingbutandthestudentsaresowillingtolearn.HowWhataninterestingcountrytolivein!Ifeelsaferherethananywhe