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九年级（上）Unit1第二部分高频话题写作指导我们的变化写作导图从云南近四年我们的变化相关话题书面表达的命题来看，此类作文命题角度如下：1.实现梦想的目标，心态的变化，如2012曲靖珍惜眼下；2.成长的经历，如2011大理成长。ChangealotStrongerandstrongerCookmealGothotwaterExample:motherwasillUsedtobeWeakandshortNowLearntounderstandCareaboutotherDeliciousbutsaltyCookmealTearsineyes写作范文详见：亮点句型速成常用句型：MyteachersandclassmateshelpmewithmyEnglish.MyEnglishisgoodnow.推荐句型：①Thankstomydearteachersandclassmates,myEnglishbecomesmuchbetternowthanbefore.②Withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,myEnglishhasimprovedalotnow.③IhavemadegreatprogressinmyEnglishwiththehelpofmyteachersandclassmates.常用句型：Ilikedplayingcomputergamesbefore.AndIplayeditalot.①Iwasinterestedinplayingcomputergamesbefore,soIplayeditalot.推荐句型：②Iusedtobeinterestedinplayingcomputergames,soIalwaysspentplentyoftimeonit.1.Iusedtobeabitshy,butnowIbecomeoutgoing.2.Daybyday,Igetonverywellwithmyclassmates.3.Mylifehaschangedalotinthepastthreeyears.4.IwasfatandshortbeforeIcametothemiddleschool.5.Now,IlikesportsandIoftenplaybasketballwithmyclassmatesafterschool.6.SoIbecometallerandstrongerthanbefore.7.Goodhabitshelpmetostudybetterandkeephealthier.8.Myparentsandmyteachersusedtoworryaboutme,butnowtheyarebothpleasedwithme.9.Iamwillingtocareaboutothers.（常用词汇见本书“话题词汇分类速记表”话题（一）个人情况、话题（三）居住环境）典例剖析（2011大理）IAmNotaChildAnyMore提示：在阳光雨露里，我已长高、长壮！但这还不是全部，长大还应包括什么？是关心、帮助同学？是体贴、理解父母？是感恩、回报亲朋师长？还是……成长的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请以“IAmNotaChildAnyMore”为题记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事，表明你已不再是一个小孩。要求：1.请根据所给的题目，用英语写一篇短文。词数不少于60个；2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。1.对自己的现在和过去作比较，以此说明自己已经长大；2.写出自己在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事情，通过事例来证明自己的观点；3.加以总结，再次突出主题。【审题指导】【范文点评】IAmNotaChildAnyMoreIama16-year-oldgirlnow.Ihavechangedalot.①Iusedtobeweakandshort.Butnow,②Iamstrongerandastallasmymother.ThemostimportantthingisthatIhavelearnedtounderstandandcareaboutothers.①从usedto可以看出作者在开头叙述的是自己的过去，说出变化；②这句话是形容词的原级比较，可以看出小作者句型掌握得很多，句子结构多样；ItwasaWednesdayevening.WhenIwentbackhome,noonewasin.SoIcookedthemeal.③Ididn’tknowmymotherwasilluntilmyparentscamebackfromthehospital.Theybothsaidthemealwasverydelicious,thoughittastedsalty.Aftersupper,Ifoundtheyweretootired.③本句采用了not...until句型，是文章的增分亮点。Igothotwaterforthem.Whenmymotherputherfeetintothewater,④withtearsinhereyes,shesaid，“Dear,youhavegrownup.”ItwasthefirsttimethatIcaredaboutmyparents.IrealizedIwasnotachildanymore.④这是用了with结构，表示伴随的状态，可以看出小作者丰富的语法知识。