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inghabits.It'sbettertowriteforfifteenortwentyminuteseverydaythantositforfiveorsixhourstowriteovertheweekend.However,ifyoucanmakeadailywritingschedulewithlongerhoursonyourwritingonweekends,thenit'smuchbetter.Oneoftheworsthabitsisnevertogethelpfromotherstoimproveyourwriting.Itisadvisedthatyoushareyourworkwithothers.Forexample,youcansendyourwritingtoafewfriends,roundupsomereadersandletthemcommentonyourwriting.Thatway,you'llfindyourwritinggradu-allyimproved.答案[写作提示]文章主要讲述好的写作习惯对提高写作水平的帮助。文章结构比较清晰,以自然段为基础概括要点即可。其中第一段是主旨段,而后面的三段为具体的做法。Onepossibleversion:Goodwritinghabitscontributealottoimprovingyourwriting.(要点1)First,youshouldreadasmuchaspossibletogettheknowledgeandskillsforwriting.(要点2)Youshouldalsomakeawrit-ingplanandkeepupyourdailywriting.(要点3)Besides,you'dbetterturntoothersforhelptoim-proveyourwriting.(要点4)Writing2(2018浙江金华十校一模)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。ThefamiliaryellowschoolbusisthelargestsystemofmasstransportationintheUSandeveryschooldaytransportsroughly25millionyoungpeopletoschoolandhomeagainaftertheschooldayends.Meanwhile,itisthesafestmethodforgettingkidstoandfromschool,accordingtotheNationalHighwayTrafficSafetyAdministration(NHTSA).Childrenare70timesmorelikelytoarriveatschoolsafelyontheschoolbusthaniftheyhadtraveledtoschooldrivingthemselvesorridingwithfriends.Theseschoolbusesmeetmoreofthenation'smotorvehiclesafetystandardsthananyothervehi-clesontheroad.Also,severalnewtechnologiesavailabletodayaremakingschoolbusesevensafer,suchasvideocamerasontheinsideandoutside,stoparmcameras,GPStrackingandcolli-sionlesseningsystems.Anothersafetytoolonschoolbusesishighseatbacks,closely-spacedseatsandenergy-absorbingseats.Buteventhesafenessofschoolbuseswouldnotcompletelysumupwhychildrenaresaferwhenridingthebig,yellowbus.Thebusisonlyassafeastheprofessionalmenandwomenwhodrivethem.AlldriversmustobtainaClassBorCCommercialDriver'sLicense(CDL).Theyareran-domlytestedforalcoholanddrugs,usuallyhavetheirdrivingrecordchecked,andaregiventhesamereviewofcriminalhistoryasteachersandotheremployeeswhohavecontactwithstudents.Inordertoserveasaschoolbusdriver,mostapplicantsarerequiredtosuccessfullycompleteatrainingcourse,alongwithinstructionintheclassroomandbehindthewheel.Schoolbusesaresafefortheenvironment,notonlybecauseeachbusreplaces36passengercarsthatwould,butforthebuses,beontheroadtakingandpickingupschoolchildren.Additionally,schoolbusesusealternativegreenfuelslikenaturalgas,andelectricpower.ToddMonteferrario,PresidentoftheNationalSchoolTransportationAssociation,saidparentsshouldrememberthatthesafestandsmartestchoiceistoputtheirchildrenonthebigyellowbuswhentheycan.答案[写作提示]本文是议论文。文章主要论述校车的好处。文章的结构为“总——分——总”模式。第一段是主题段,提出了主要观点。第二至第四段分别是具体的论据。最后一段提出结论。Onepossibleversion:TheschoolbusisthesafestandwisestchoicetoschoolintheUS.(要点1)Firstly,schoolbusesnotonlymeethighvehiclesafetystandardsbutalsoaretechnologicallyequipped.(要点2)Secondly,thebusdrivershavetopassstrictqualificationtestsandsafetydrivingtraining.(要点3)Thirdly,schoolbuses,poweredbygreenfuelsenvironmentallysafebyreducingthenumberofprivatecarshittingtheroads.(要点4)Thereforechildrenareencouragedtogotoschoolbyschoolbus.(要点5)Writing3(2017浙江衢州高三一模)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Amongallthefastgrowingscienceandtechnology,theresearchofhumangenes,orbiologicalen-gineeringaspeoplecallit,isdrawingmoreandmoreattentionnow.Discussionsaboutitarein-creasinglyheatedaroundtheworld.Thegreatestthingthatgenetechnologycandoistocureseriousdiseasesthatdoctorsatpresentcanalmostdonothingwith,suchascancerandheartdisease.Everyyear,millionsofpeoplearemurderedbythesetwokillers.Andtodate,doctorshavenotfoundaneffectivewaytocurethem.Butifthegenetechnologyisapplied,notonlythesetwodiseasescanbecuredcompletely,bring-inghappinessandmorelivingdaystothepatients,butalsothegreatamountofmoneypeoplespendoncuringtheirdiseasescanbesaved,thereforeitbenefitstheeconomyaswell.Inaddition,thehumanlifespan(寿命)canbeprolonged.Genetechnologycanhelppeopletogivebirthtohealthierandclevererchildren.Somefamilieshavegeneticdiseases.Thismeanstheirchildrenwillforsurehavethefamilialdisease,whichisagreattroubleforthesefamilies.Inthepast,doctorscoulddonothingaboutgeneticdiseases.Butgenetechnologycansolvethisproblemperfectly.Scientistsjustneedtofindthewronggeneandcorrectit,andahealthychildwillbeborn.Somepeopleareworryingthatthegeneresearchcanbeusedtocreatehumanbeingsinlargequan-tities.Inthepastfewyears,scientistshavesucceededincloninganimalssuchasmice,sheep,anddogs;therefore,thesepeoplepredictthathumanbabieswouldsoonbeclonedandthatitwouldbebeyondcontrol,leadingtosomedisastrousconsequences.Butmanybelievethatclonedbabieswillnotcomeoutinlargequantities,formostcouplesintheworldcanhavebabiesinaverynormalwayandtheyalsobelievemeasureswillbetakentocontrolgenetechnology.答案[写作提示]文章首先介绍了基因工程的好处。最后一段说明了一些不同的观点。在概要写作时,以自然段为概括的基础。Onepossibleversion:Genetechnologyisnowahottopicworldwide.(要点1)Itcanhelppeoplecuredeadlydiseasesandallowthemtoliveahappierandlongerlifewithbettereconomicconditions.(要点2)Genetech-nologyalsomakesitpossibleforpeoplewithgeneticdiseasestogivebirthtoheal