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DearHenry,IamwritingtooffermysincerestcongratulationsonyouradmissionintotheBiologyDepartmentofPekingUniversityasagraduate.Asyourclosefriend,IjustwantyoutoknowhowluckyIamtobeabletoshareyourprideandhowpleasedIamatyouradmission.Inmyview,youworkhardandbesidesthat,youareaveryintelligentperson.Thisadmissionisarewardwhichyourichlydeserve.Iamsureyouwillmakegreaterprogressinyourstudyandobtainabrightfutureinyourlife.IwishyougreatersuccessinyourschoolcareerandIamlookingforwardtogoodnewsfromyousoon.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua大声朗读DearHenry,IamwritingtooffermysincerestcongratulationsonyouradmissionintotheBiologyDepartmentofPekingUniversityasagraduate.Asyourclosefriend,IjustwantyoutoknowhowluckyIamtobeabletoshareyourprideandhowpleasedIamatyouradmission.Inmyview,youworkhardandbesidesthat,youareaveryintelligentperson.Thisadmissionisarewardwhichyourichlydeserve.Iamsureyouwillmakegreaterprogressinyourstudyandobtainabrightfutureinyourlife.IwishyougreatersuccessinyourschoolcareerandIamlookingforwardtogoodnewsfromyousoon.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua祝贺信“三步走”：观察思考：1.文章的体裁？2.写作目的？3.结构（几个层次？）4.时态？5.过渡词？1.写信的目的和表达听到喜讯的心情；2.对喜讯进行积极评价（包括肯定被祝贺人过去的努力和优点）；3.表达衷心的祝福及未来的祝福。（注意：语气要真诚、自然、亲切动人）作文训练之祝贺信常用语块1.恭喜/祝贺……_________________________2.实现/成真_________________________3.很高兴听到……_________________________4.我想表达我对……的祝贺Iwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationson…congratulationson…cometrueHowhappyIamtohear…5.我知道这肯定是因为……6.我希望Iknowthisissurelyowingto…Ihope(that)…Iwish…..套用句式1.我很高兴听到你梦想成真。2.我想表达我对你被北京大学录取的祝贺。HowhappyIamtohearthatyourdreamhascometrue.IwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationsonyouradmissionintothePekingUniversity.3.我希望你在大学中取得更大的成功，将来为家乡服务。Iwishyougreatersuccessintheuniversityandservethehometowninthefuture.假定你是李华，得知你的好友王强今年考上了北京大学(PekingUniversity)，他来自贫困地区，是村里的第一位大学生。请你给他写一封祝贺信要点如下：1.考上理想大学，父母骄傲。2.努力学习将来为家乡服务。3.对未来祝福。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。根据题目要求审题：1.文章的体裁？祝贺信2.写作目的？祝贺王强考上北京大学3.结构（几个层次？）3个4.时态？一般现在时5.过渡词？？实战演练：假定你是李华，得知你的好友王强今年考上了北京大学(PekingUniversity)，他来自贫困地区，是村里的第一位大学生。请你给他写一封祝贺信要点如下：1.考上理想大学，父母骄傲。2.努力学习将来为家乡服务。3.对未来祝福。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。实战演练：根据题目要求审题并列出提纲：1.写信的目的和表达听到喜讯的心情2.对喜讯进行积极评价（包括被祝贺人过去的努力和优点）；3.表达衷心的祝福及未来的祝福。（注意：语气要真诚、自然、亲切动人）祝贺信“三步走”：写作：15分钟完成互评作文（2分钟）任务：1.看看别人如何表达你的疑难点；2.看看同学的作文里有哪些模板中的核心句型。评判依据：1.字数:100词左右。2.卷面是否整洁？3.内容是否齐全？4.句子结构是否完整？5.用了哪些核心句型？评分档次：第一档：21-25(优秀）内容齐全，错误很少；第二档:16-20（良好）内容齐全，错误较少；第三档:11-15（及格）内容基本齐全，错误较多；第四档:6-10（较差）内容不齐全，错误很多；第五档:1-5（差）只写了一两个相关词句。DearWangQiang,Congratulations!IwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationsonyouradmissiontoPekingUniversity,youridealone!Asyourclosefriend,IjustwantyoutoknowhowhappyIamtohearyoursuccess.Thisisanewstartforyouandit’sgoodforyoutostudywithsomanyexcellentstudentsandlearnfromtopprofessors.AsforasI’mconcerned,youareintelligent.Besides,youhaveworkedveryhardinthepastyears,soI’mreallyhappytoknowthatyoubecomethefirstcollegestudentofyourvillagefromthepoorareas.Iamsureyourparentsaregreatlyproudofyou.Iwishyougreatersuccessintheuniversityandservethehometowninthefuture.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHuaHomework：熟读范文和关于祝贺信的核心短语、句型。课堂练习假定你是李华，得知你的好友王强今年考上了北京大学(PekingUniversity)，他来自贫困地区，是村里的第一位大学生。请你给他写一封祝贺信，要点如下：1.考上理想大学，父母骄傲。2.努力学习将来为家乡服务。3.对未来祝福。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。DearWangQiang,Congratulations!IhavelearnedwithdelightthatyouareadmittedtoPekingUniversity,youridealone!Iknowyouhaveworkedveryhardinthepastyears,soI’mtrulyhappytoknowthatyoubecomethefirstcollegestudentofyourvillagefromthepoorareas.Iamsureyourparentsaregreatlyproudofyou.IjustwantyoutoknowhowpleasedIamtowitnessyoursuccess.Thisisanewstartforyouandit’sgoodforyoutostudywithsomanyexcellentstudentsandlearnfromtopprofessors.Iwishyougreatersuccessinuniversityandserveforthehometowninthefuture.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua课外作业假定你是李华，得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲，并给他写一封祝贺信，要点如下：1.天天练习讲汉语，从不会到流利，终于成功。2.继续努力，有机会来中国留学。3.希望见面和交流。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。参考词汇：“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛“ChineseBridge”ChinesespeechcontestDearPeter,Iwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationstoyouonyourreceivingthefirstprizeof“ChineseBridge”Chinesespeechcontest.IknowthatyouwerenotgoodatChineseatfirst.However,youpracticedspeakingChineseeveryday.Asthesayinggoes,“Everythingcomestohimwhowaits”.Finally,yousucceeded!Inmymind,thismatchisverydifficultforaforeignstudent.SoI’msosurprisedthatyoubecomechampionofthiscompetition.IfyougoonstudyingChineseharder,youwillhavetheopportunitytostudyinChina.Atlast,Ihopetoseeyouandcommunicatewitheachother.Sincerecongratulationstoyouagain!Yours,LiHuaDearHenry,IamwritingtooffermysincerestcongratulationsonyouradmissionintotheBiologyDepartmentofPekingUniversityasagraduate.Asyourclosefriend,IjustwantyoutoknowhowluckyIamtobeabletoshareyourprideandhowpleasedIamatyouradmission.Inmyview,youworkhardandbesidesthat,youareaveryintelligentperson.Thisadmissionisarewardwhichyourichlydeserve.Iamsureyouwillmakegreaterprogressinyourstudyandobtainabrightfutureinyourlife.IwishyougreatersuccessinyourschoolcareerandIamlookingforwardtogoodnewsfromyousoon.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua大声朗读近几年高考真题回顾年份写作目的题材内容体裁类型2016求助修改申请书和个人简历书信2015约稿介绍稿件的要求书信2014