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高考英语书面表达高分突破18-03-2011高分作文特点要点齐全，紧扣主题，用词面宽，句式多变，有自己的思想考场作文步骤1.确定并划出三个信息点2.选材:熟悉，规范，有新意3.确定时态基调4.草稿或提纲：重点词汇，句式（简单句，并列句，复合句，疑问句，否定句），连接词语，语态，分段，要点等5.卷面非常整洁，书写非常认真6.仔细检查：单词拼写，标点符号，连接词语，句子成分，动词使用等。“三段论”（出题可能性：35%）作文高分要点每段都从topic（一句）到support（2—3句）1.TopicP11.…thinkthat…should….2.…thinkthatthereareseveralgoodpoints/advantageswith…即：1.…认为…应该…2.…认为…有优势（think可用believe,insist,suggest,wouldsay等替换）P2However,in…’sopinion/viewpoint/pointofview,itisnecessary/reasonable/wise/essentialfor…todo…P3Inmyeyes/Formyownpart/AsfarasIamconcerned,1.thereisagood/no/little/hardlyanyreasonfor…todo…2.Ihaveenoughreasonstosay…Support1.正反论证：如果这样做,……;However,如果不这样做,……2.举例论证：forexample3.数据、名言、科学结论等Justas…oncesaid,….Accordingto(theresultof)arecentsentificresearch,….Scientistshavefoundoutthat….书信类（出题可能性：60%）作文高分要点一、内涵：信件、e-mail、留言、口头或书面通知，甚至是书信加“三段论”。二、书信的六种常见目的：1.感谢2.道歉3.寻求帮助、信息4.推荐建议5.投诉、抱怨6.祝贺每一种至少准备2—3个句型揉合使用如：某教授不能如约做讲座感谢、道歉、建议Ifyouhaveanyproblem,pleasedon’thesitatetocontactmewheneveritisnecessary./at….(phonenumber)三、写作思路（举例）(一）.询求帮助P1.1.问候对方，介绍自己Howareyou?/Howareyoufeeling?/Howareyoudoingthesedays?/Iseverythinggoingonwellwithyounowadays?/Howiseverythinggoing?Doeseverythinggowellwithyou?Howareyougettingalongwitheverything?I’m…from…2.清晰表达询求帮助（general)I’mwritingtoaskyouforhelpwith….Iwonderifyoucoulddomeafavourbygivingmesomesuggestionson….P2(每个点一到两句）1.你要干什么/你的困惑，困难，问题Asyouknow,thecollegeentranceexaminationisapproaching.However,I’mstillverypooratmyEnglish.2.提出具体请求SoIneedyoursuggestionsbadlyonhowtoimproveitinsuchashorttime,especiallygrammarandwritingskills.3.Whyhim/her?为什么找他、她帮助Iknowyou’vebeenteachinghighschoolstudentsinChinaforyearsandyouhavemagicalmethodstohelpthemimprovetheirlevelsquickly.Couldyoupleasehelpme?4.（备用）感谢Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucould….Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucould….P3套话（1—2句）(Iam)lookingforwardtoyoursoonreply.Ifyou…pleasetellme/writetomeassoonaspossible.Allthebest!/Bestregards/wishes!Warmregards/wishes!（二）抱怨P11.自我介绍2.清晰表达抱怨（general)Iwanttomakeacomplaintabout….P21.介绍背景LastweekIspent700yuanbuyingaMP4fromyourshopandyoupromisedmethatitwasofbestquality.2.问题problem(s)ButwhenIgotbackhomeandwastryingtoenjoythemusic,Ifoundtherewasmuchnoise,whichmademeveryupset.3.要求requestsa.道歉b.退款c.换个新的SoIwonderifyoucould…./SowhatIwantyoutodoisto….4.（备用）（虚拟语气）如果能解决：感谢；如果不能解决：向上级反应或找媒体曝光IwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucoulddoaswhatIhaverequested.Otherwise,Iwould….P3套话Pleaseconsidermyrequest(s)carefullyandgivemeaclearreplyassoonaspossible/youcan.（三）建议P1同情安慰（很普遍；理解），答应帮助。Actuallyyourproblemisverycommonamonghighteenagers.Icanunderstandhowsad/upset/anxious/terribleyouarefeelingnow.Iwillgiveyousomesuggestions….P2具体建议三条，每条１－２句话．P3希望能帮上忙。祝愿希望。Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofsomehelpandyoucan…soon.Ifyouhaveanyproblem,….图画类（出题可能性：5%）作文高分要点类型一、指路问路，介绍方位倒装Infrontofthehouseliesarivercalled….Therebe/stand(s)/lie(s)/exist(s)….…---ing,….Findingthesupermarket,turnrightandthenwalkonuntilyoureachtheendoftheavenue.Youcan’tmissit./Youwillsurelyfinditrightthere.类型二、4---6幅图画讲故事时态：一般过去，过去完成，过去将来，过去进行P1.开门见山，点名主体。1.OurclasshadanunforgettableSundayontheWestMountainFarmlastweek.2.TheGreenshadapleasantvocationinChinafortwoweekslastmonth,whichtheywillneverforget.P2.紧扣图画，适当想象，讲明故事，没有废话。P3.发表感慨，首尾呼应，简明扼要，画龙点睛。1.Wewereamazedatthefastdevelopmentofourmotherlandandwerealldeterminedtotryourbesttomakehermorebeautifulwithourownhandswhenwegrowupinthefuture.2.Thispreciousmemoryshowsthatwherethereisawill,thereisaway./Romewasnotbuiltinoneday.Mydearstudents,Iwishyousuccessinyourcollegeentranceexaminationandahappylifeinthefuture!Youwilldefinitelybesuccessfulsolongasyoukeepontryingandenjoyyourstudyeveryday!Longliveourclass!Longliveourfriendship!