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高一英语短文改错专项练习（一）命题人：右臂审题人：左膀2016.11.8高老师的左膀右臂祝大家期中考顺利~假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。ANearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes(圣女果)inourbackgarden.Sincethenforalltheseyearwehadbeenallowingtomatoestoself-seedwheretheyplease.Asresult,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost!BItisthreeyearsnowsinceIgraduatefromXinhuaHighSchool.LastSunday,theclassthatIwasonheldaget-together,whichtookusalongtimeprepare.Itwasindeednoteasytogetinthetouchwitheverybodyandsetawelltimeforallofus.Weallenjoyedapreciousdaygreatly,rememberthetimewespenttogetherandthepeopletheywerefamiliarwith.Itwasapitywhichsomeofuswerenotpresentastheyhadgonetoabroadforfurtherstudies,buttheycalledbackorsentgreetingcardfromdifferentplaces.CI'manAustralianboyaging17andI'mcrazyaboutmusic.Itisoneofthemostimportantthinginmylife.IlistenmusicwheneverIcan.Ihaveaminidiskplayer,withitIcanhaveaccesstomusicwhetherwalkinginthestreetorrideonthebus.Athome,therehasaCDplayerinmyroom,andthemusicisonallthetime.Ilikerockmusicbestofall.MyfavoritebandisRollingStones,whichhadproduced40albumssince1966.ItsohappenedthattherewasalivingconcertofRollingStoneslastSunday.Idecidedtogo.Itwasagreatfun.Iamalsofondofclassicalmusic.IespeciallyenjoyplayingBeethovenonceIamdoingmyhomework.DInmyview,theInternetishelpful.Itisknowntoall,theInternetisplayingaimportantpartinourdailylife.OntheInternet,wecanreadnewshomeandabroadandgotasmuchinformationaswecan,wecanalsoattendtothenetschoolandreadmanybooks.Wecanevendoshoppingonline.Beside,ourabilitytooperatethecomputercanbeimprovedgreat.SoweshouldnotbeaddictedtotheInternet,orwewillgetourlifeandstudydestroying.Inaddition,weshouldkeepofftheharmfulwebsite.Anyhow,thisdoesn'tpreventtheInternetfrombecomingourfriendETimeflylikeanarrow.I'malreadyinthesecondhalfofSeniorGrade3beforeIrealizedit.ItisonlyalittlemorethanthreemonthsbeforeIgraduatemiddleschool.Atthepresent,I'mbusyreviewmylessonsinordertotaketheCollegeEntranceExamination.IhopetogotoBeijingUniversity,thatisoneofthebestuniversitiesnotonlyinChinabutalsointheworld.I'lltrymybestturnmydreamtoreality.Mostofmyclassmatesarealsostudyingveryhardtorealizetheirdreams.Idowisheveryonewillbeabletoenteranuniversityorcollege.FInordertopromoteparticipationinoutdoorexercise,ourschoolhadorganizedanactivitytoclimbtheWestMountainonApril10.Themomentwearrivedatthefootofamountain,wesetoutforthetopinhighspirit.Wesupportedeachothertopasstherockyareasonthecourseoftheclimb.Laughingandcheering,weeventuallyreachedthesummit,thereweweregreetedbythebrightsunshineandfreshair.Viewingfromthetop,thecitywasextremelybeautifulThiseventwasverybenefit,fornotonlywetakeabreakfromourheavyschoolworkload,butwealsolearnedwhattocooperate.Therefore,westronglysuggestthatsimilareventsareheldeveryyear!答案and解析：A1:before—ago.ago“从现在起的若干时间以前”；时间段+ago与一般过去时连用。before泛指“从过去起的若干时间以前”，意思是“距过去某时……以前”“与其……（毋宁）”，常和完成时连用，这里谓语动词planted用的是过去式，故用ago。2:在……的帮助下用固定搭配withthehelpof。所以把by改成of。3:根据句意和前面的allthese可知，用可数名词year的复数形式years。alltheseyears的意思是这么多年。4:根据时间状语Sincethen可知，本句用现在完成进行时。所以把had变成have。5:asaresult是固定搭配。所以在As和result之间加a。6:因为哪里落了种子就在哪里长，所以这种植物长得到处是。所以把somewhere（某地）改成everywhere（到处）。7:这种果子个头小，但是汁多、味道好。这里放在are后面，应该用形容词。所以把taste改成tasty。8:根据后面的them可知，这里用many表示可数名词的许多，而much修饰不可数名词。所以把much改成many。9:英语中although是连词，but是并列连词。所以不能同时用。所以把but改成yet或去掉but。10:tomatoes是名词，应该用形容词来修饰。副词常常修饰动词。所以把wonderfully改为wonderful。B1:graduate→graduated毕业是一个过去发生的事情，使用过去时2:on→in在具体的哪个班级使用介词in3:time后加to固定句型ittakessbsometimetodosth4:well→goodtime是名词，应该使用形容词修饰5:a→the冠词错用。根据句意，此处特指：“聚会的那一天”，应该用定冠词the6:remember→rememberingremember与we构成主动关系，用现在分词7:they→we与上文一致，是我们熟悉的人8:which→thatthat引导起真正的主语从句9:to去掉多介词。abroad为副词，表示“到国外；在国外”用goabroad，无需再加介词to10:card→cards根据上下文可知这里应该使用复数形式C1.aging-agedaged作形容词，意为......岁的，后跟数词，只能作后置定语，这是aged的特殊用法2.thing-thingsoneof+形容词最高级+可数名词复数3.listen后加tolisten为不及物动词，在加宾语时必须借助介词to4.it-which本句为定语从句，此处指代minidiskplayer，且在下半句中作with的宾语，所以应用关系代词which来引导。It不能引导定语从句5.ride-riding此处whether...or...连接两个并列结构，形式需与walking保持一致,表示两种状态6.has-istherebe句型7.had-has时间状语为1996，其谓语动词应该用现在完成时8.living-liveliving用作adj作前置定语一般表示活着的，现存的；而此处表示非录音的，现场直播的，应该用形容词live9.agreatfun中的a去掉fun作名词时，为不可数名词10.once-when此处表示当...的时候，once表示一旦...，不符合语境DInmyview,theInternetishelpful.It（改为As）isknowntoall,theInternetisplayinga(改为an)importantpartinourdailylife.OntheInternet,wecanreadnews（加介词at）homeandabroadandgot（改为get）asmuchinformationaswecan.Wecanalsoattendto(去掉to)thenetschoolandreadmanybooks.Wecanevendoshoppingonline.Beside（改为besides）,ourabilitytooperatethecomputercanbeimprovedgreat（改为greatly）.So（But）weshouldnotbeaddictedtotheInternet,orwe'llgetourlifeandstudydestroying（destroyed）.Inaddition,weshouldkeepofftheharmf