高分作文的三个特征:1、内容要简单。2、结构要清晰。3、语言要精彩。书信作文的写法【分类】申请信建议信感谢信道歉信告知信邀请信求助信咨询信非主流书信【套路】开头段:问候、自我介绍、写信背景、写信目的中间段:具体问题+具体分析(T-D结构)结尾段:补充说明+客套话开门见山说意图咨询建议123不同内容可分段感谢客气不可少期待回信成老套【套话】1、开头段写法:(1)问候:Howareyoudoing?(生熟)/Howisitgoing?(熟人)(2)自我介绍:IamLiHua,a17-year-oldboycurrentlystudyinginXXXmiddleschool,whoisfondof/iscrazyabout…(3)写信背景:Recently,Ilearnedthat…/Iheard…/Ilearnedinyournewspaper…/ourteachertoldmethat…/Ilearnedinyourmicro-blogthat…(4)写信目的:So,Iamwritingtodosth./Now,Iamwritingtodosth.申请信:So,Iamwritingtoapplyfortheposition/opportunity.建议信:So,Iamwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions.So,Iamwritingtogiveyouahand(帮你一把).感谢信:So,Iamwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudetoyou.道歉信:So,Iamwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltapologytoyou.告知信:Now,Iamwritingtotell/informyousomedetails.邀请信:So,Iwouldliketoinviteyoutobeourguest嘉宾/judge裁判.求助信:So,Iamwritingtoaskyoutogivemeahand/domeafavor.So,Ihavenochoicebuttoturntoyouforhelp.咨询信:Now,Iamwritingtoaskyouforsomedetailedinformation.非主流书信:视情况而定,有时不写“写信目的”。2、中间段写法【申请信】ThereareseveralreasonswhyIamfitfortheposition.1,2,3,4…【建议信】Hereareseveralsuggestionsforyou.【感谢信】WheneverIrecallthosedays,Ijustcan’thelpthinkingofyou.Itwassokindofyoutodosth1.Besides,youdidsth2,whichreallymovedme.What’smore,youalsodidsth3.NothingwouldbeabletoeraseourwonderfulmemoriesandIwillcherishthemforever.【道歉信】(为过去/将来道歉)HowIwishIhaddone/woulddosth1!However,Iwas/amchosen/ordered/required/askedtodosth2,whichreallymeansalottome,inthat(写出sth2到底多重要).So,Ihavenochoicebuttobreakmypromise(食言).Ibelievethatifyouwereme,youwouldmakethesamechoice.Hopefully,youwouldacceptmyapologyandunderstandmysituation.【告知信】Tobeginwith,…Besides,…What’smore,…Finally,…【邀请信】Herearesomedetailsaboutthisactivity.Tobeginwith,…Besides,…What’smore,…Finally,…【求助信】Tobeginwith,wouldyoubesokindastodosth?Besides,Iwonderifitisconvenientforyoutodosth?What’smore,Ialsoneedyoutodosth.Finally,canyoudosth?【咨询信】Tobeginwith,wouldyoubesokindastotellmesth?Besides,Iwonderifitisconvenientforyoutotellmesth?What’smore,Ialsoneedyoutotellmesth.Finally,canyoutellmesth?3、结尾段写法(1)Hopefully,youwoulddosth.(2)Hopefully,thesesuggestionswouldbehelpfulforyou.(3)Thanksforreadingmyletterinsuchahotsummer.(4)Pleasedropmealineorsendmeatextmessagetoletmeknowyourdecisionsoon.(5)Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply(atyourearliestconvenience).4,过渡词(1)分两点拓展:TT.Foronething,…Foranother,….TT.Ontheonehand,…Ontheotherhand,…(2)分三点拓展:Firstandforemost,….首先的也是最重要的一件事儿是,…Additionally,…./Inaddition,…更进一步而言,….Lastbut(certainly)notleast,…最后的但当然不是最不重要的是,….(4)分四点拓展:Tobeginwith,…Besides,…What’smore,…Finally,…(5)另起一段、改变主题时:Bytheway,….【注意】只要翻得通,最好每句话都带上过渡词!5、遣词造句(1)遣词升级方法:i.换词法should→sbhadbetterdosth建议sboughttodosthsbbesupposedtodosthWhynotdosth?Itiswiseofyoutodosth.Itishightimethatyoudidsth.真的到了你该做某事的时间了。IfIwereyou,Iwoulddosth.如果我是你的话,我就会做某事。like→sb+befondofsb+becrazyaboutsb+havefalleninlovewithwant→sb+wouldlike+todosth.想要做某事sb+desiretodosth渴望做某事unforgettable难忘的+一件事/人bad→terrible+人/事/物tiring令人疲惫的annoying令人烦恼的boring无聊的difficult→ofgreatdifficulty有难度different→ofgreatdifference有区别beautiful→ofgreatbeauty有美感useful→ofgreatuse有用处ii.添词法{1}名词前面添加一个或多个形容词Ihaveakind,patientandconsideratemom.Englishisauseful,essentialandentertainingsubject.Ireadameaningful,educationalandentertainingbookyesterday.{2}名词后面写一个同位语。Wemiddleschoolstudents….teenagers….Englishlearners….eg.WeshouldlearnEnglish.WeteenagersaresupposedtomasterEnglish,auseful,essentialandmeaningfullanguage.{3}能并列时需并列。Youshouldunderstandyourmom.→Youshouldunderstand,respectandappreciateyourmom.理解尊重感激(2)造句升级方法:i.黄金圣衣句型(加强语气、凑字神器){1}Itisclearthat…很明显“清”{2}Itisobviousthat….很明显“明”{3}Thereisnodoubtthat…毫无疑问“疑”{4}Noonecandeny…不容否认“否”{5}Needlesstosay,…不用说“不用”{6}Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…不用说“走”ii.白银裤衩句型(“…”表示“完整的句子”){1}...,for….因为…{2}…,consideringthat…因为…{3}…,inthat…因为…{4}…;consequently,…所以…{5}…;therefore,…所以…{6}…;asaresult,…所以…{7}…todosth.为了去做某事{8}…inordertodosth.为了做某事{9}…soastodosth为了做某事{10}…sothat…以便…{11}…aslongas…只要…{12}…,which…这件事儿…句型:Ithasbeen+多长时间+since+过去某时间点.自从过去某时间点到现在已经过了多长时间了。【倒装句】倒装的目的,在于把想要强调的东西放在句首;放在句首的东西不同,倒装的句型就不同。1、地点词开头,用完全倒装;地点词+谓语+主语.Herecomesthebus.2、Now/Then开头,用完全倒装;Now/Then+谓语+主语.Thencametheking.3、否定词开头,用部分倒装;否定词+助动词+主语+谓语.Seldomshouldyousmoke.4、So+adj/adv开头,用部分倒装;So+adj/adv+助动词+主语+谓语+that引导的结果状语从句.Sothatwecannotcatchupwithhim.5、Only+状语开头,用部分倒装;Only+状语+助动词+主语+谓语.Only(then)canyoudosth.Only(inthisway)canyoudosth.Only(bydoingsth1)canyoudosth2.Only(when/ifsb1dosth1)cansb2dosth2.eg:Onlywhenyoustudyhardcanyoumakegreatprogress.【强调句】Itis/was+被强调部分+that/who+原句剩余部分。使用方法:进行两遍剪切+粘贴。TomlovesJerry.Iloveyou.IreadEnglishloudlyintheopenaireverymorning.SoloudlydoIreadEnglishintheopenaireverymorningthatmyEnglishhasbeengreatlyimproved.【省略句】“当状语从句的主语是it或与主句主语相同,且状语从句中的谓语动词含有be动词时,可以同时省略状语从句的主语和这个be动词。”Whenwashingfacethismorning,Iheardthebignose.Thoughhitbythebrick,Iwashappy.造句升级小绝招:“be后,实前,助实间”可以加“副词”Iamreallyateacher.Ireallylikefootball.Youshouldabsolutelyunderstandyourmother.【小结】高分作文遣词造句36计5组过渡词10组换词法3个添词法6个黄金圣衣12个白银裤衩Youshouldunderstandyourmother.Thereisnodoubtthatyou,whocannotliveallbyyourself,aresupposedtow