英语作文的修改

初中英语作文的修改英语作文目的在于考查学生应用各项语法知识、正确进行书面表达的能力，善于理解要点提示的内容，抓住要点和中心思想的能力。英语作文是学生比较头疼的题型。学生表达思想时往往写成了汉语式的英语。错误多，不连贯。近几年的中考作文失分很大，有的学生还养成了抄前面阅读理解的习惯。Whatisagoodcomposition?“一点”:有“亮点”.有独到之处.“二整”:书写工整,卷面整洁.“三要”:数量要达标,词汇和语法结构要准确、上下文要连贯.“四不行”:漏掉内容不行,写错体裁不行，用错人称不行，用错时态不行.作文中应避免的几种常见语言错误：1.时态错误（扣分多，一个时态错误扣分在1分左右）。2.中国式的英语（不正确的英文表达会让整句不得分）。3.单词拼写错误及大小写（单词拼写一定要过关）。4.介词,代词,非谓语动词或形容词副词的不正确使用（对单词的词性要熟悉）。5.名词单复数（细心就可以避免的错）。典型病例名词的单复数问题主谓一致问题时态和语态问题Chinglish现象词类错用名词的单复数问题：1.…Jimfoundtherewasmuchfishinthelake.2.Thewaterwassoclearthattheycouldseeallkindsoffish.3.Manyplaceareverydry.…Jimfoundthereweremanyfishinthelake.Thewaterwassoclearthattheycouldseeallkindsoffishes.Manyplacesareverydry.主谓一致问题1.Andnowmanyriversbecomesverydirty.2.Everythingaregoingverywell.3.DavidwithhislittlebrothergototheparkeverySunday.Andnowmanyriversbecomeverydirty.Everythingisgoingverywell.DavidwithhislittlebrothergoestotheparkeverySunday.时态和语态问题1.HermotherjumpedintothelakeandswimedtoMary.AtlasthermothersavedMary.Theywereallgetwet.2.Tom’smotherjumpedintothewater.Shesavesherdaughteratlast.3.OnTreePlantingDay,manytreesplantedinthePark.HermotherjumpedintothelakeandswamtoMary.AtlasthermothersavedMary.Theyallgotwet.OnTreePlantingDay,manytreeswereplantedinthePark.Tom’smotherjumpedintothewater.Shesavedherdaughteratlast.Chinglish现象1.LastSunday,Annwithhermotherandbrotherwenttoapark.Theparkwithalake.2.IandmyclassmatesbybustoDayangForeignLanguageSchool.LastSunday,Annwenttoaparkwithhermotherandbrother.Therewasalakeinthepark.MyclassmatesandItookabustoDayangForeignLanguageSchool.词类错用1.WhenIwassadly,Iplayedwithit.WhenIwashappily,Iplayedwithit.2.Allofusareexcitedinit.Becauseitcanmakewehappyandhealthy.WhenIwassad,Iplayedwithit.WhenIwashappy,Iplayedwithit.Allofusareexcitedaboutit.Becauseitcanmakeushappyandhealthy.书面表达常见错误例句分析1、Iverylikeplayingsports.Ilikeplayingsportsverymuch.2、Istudyisveryhard.IstudyveryhardorIamhard--working.3、Ithinkthecitymorebeautiful.Ihopethecitywillbemorebeautiful.书面表达常见错误例句分析4、IverywantjointoEnglishClub.IwanttojointheEnglishClubverymuch.5、Ihaveagoodhealthy.Iamingoodhealth.Iamhealthy.6、Iamlikedogs.Ilikedogs.找一找,错在哪?MyfavouriteFootballStarTherearemanyfamousfootballplayerintheworld.DavidBeckhamisoneofthem.Heismyfavouritefootballstar.HewasborninEnglandinMay2,1975.Beckhamplayedfootballverywell.HeplayedforManchesterUnitedFootballClubandRealMadriedin1991and2007.InJuly,2007,hewenttotheUSAwithhisfamily.NowheplaysforLosAngelesGalaxy.BeckhamcametoChinaseveraltimes.HehaslotsoffansinChina.Theyalllovehim.playersonplaysfromtohasbeento句子开头要大写，每句之后有标点；前句句末用逗号，后句开头用小写；前句句末用句号，后句开头要大写；记住书写须清楚，因为里面有分数；先草稿，后定稿，书写歌谣记牢靠。HomeworkWriteacomposition：AlettertoMrsZhang今天，二中的张老师给你们上了一堂英语作文课，她和你们一起讨论,发现错误并修改错误，教给你们写好作文的技巧(Writingtechnique)，她的课对你们写作能力的提高很有帮助。请你给她写一封感谢信。请你当老师Homework自行车在北京仍然受欢迎，骑车上学或上班都很方便。如今越来越多的人……这使得……。骑车既可以……，又可以……。那么你更喜欢哪种交通工具呢？为什么？请你当老师BicyclearestillpopularonthestreetsinBeijing.It’seasytobybikegotoschoolorgotowork.Nowmoreandmorepeopleplantobuycarsinsteadofbike.ButIthinkthatrunningcarsmakeairdirty.Itwasharmfultoourhealth.Ridingbicyclescanhelppeoplekeephealthy,andenergycanbesave.Becauseridingbikeswillalwaysmakemehappy,soIprefertogotoschoolbybike.Pleasereaditcarefully,thenfindthemistakesandcorrectthem.BicyclesarestillpopularonthestreetsinBeijing.It’seasytogotoschoolorgotoworkbybike.Nowmoreandmorepeopleplantobuycarsinsteadofbikes.ButIthinkthatrunningcarsmakesairdirty.Itisharmfultoourhealth.Ridingbicyclescanhelppeoplekeephealthy,andenergycanbesaved.Becauseridingbikeswillalwaysmakemehappy,Iprefertogotoschoolbybike.