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作文练习课篇章预热练习小东是湖州中学的一名学生。最近我很烦恼，因为我不知道怎么跟同学们相处，甚至觉得没法跟他们做好朋友了。我很想改变这个现状，所以写了一封信给你，希望你能给我提些建议。牛刀小试1.经历，遭遇2.厌烦3.相处，进展4.关心挂念5.和….交朋友6.在做某事上有困难7.加入某人做某事8.请求帮助9.gothroughbe/gettiredofgetalongwithBeconcernedaboutMakefriendswithsbhavetroubleindoingjoinsbinsthaskforhelp12.takeone’sadvice接受某人的建议给…写信11.writeto发现做某事很难10.findithardtodo和…交流communicatewithDearMissWang,I’mastudentfromHuzhouSeniorHighSchool.我有一个问题.我不是很擅长和别人进行交流.AlthoughItrytotalktomyclassmates,我仍然觉得和他们交朋友很难.SoIfeelquitelonelysometimes.我真的非常想改变这种情况,butIdon’tknowhow.Iwouldbegratefulif你能给我一些建议.Yours.xiaodongIhaveaproblemIstillfindithardtomakegoodfriendswiththemIdowanttochangethesituationyoucouldgivemesomeadviceI’mnotverygoodatcommunicatingwithpeople.书面表达假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何学好中文。请根据下列要点回信。1.参加中文学习班;2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲;4.交中国朋友。构思三段式作文模式第一段属引入，直奔主题第二段属文章主干，适当再构，使行文流畅，前后衔接连贯自然。第三段结束语。基本构思开头我很高兴收到你向我征求意见关于如何学好中文的来信。IamgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingmeforadviceonhowtolearnChinese.基本构思主体要点1.参加中文学习班;2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲;4.交中国朋友。要对主体要点进行适当扩充，使行文连贯自然对要点1：参加中文学习班进行再构思：首先，我建议你上中文班。如果你学习中文有困难，你可以向你的老师求助。同时，你能有机会与同班同学操练说中文。First，aboveallFirstofall,atfirst,Inthefirstplace,tobeginwith,tostartwith,IsuggestyouattendingChineseclasses.IadviseyoutoattendChineseclasses.IfyouhavedifficultylearningChinese,youcanturntoyourChineseteacherforhelp.YoucanaskyourChineseteachertohelpyouMeanwhile,youcanhavechancestopractisespeakingChinesewithyourclassmatesYoucanpractisespeakingChinesewithyourclassmate.Aboveall,IsuggestyouattendingaChineseclass.HavingdifficultylearningChinese,youcanturntoyourteacherforhelp.Meanwhile,youcanhavechancestopractisespeakingChinesewithyourclassmates.对要点2：看中文书刊、电视；进行再构思：其次,看电视和阅读中文报刊杂志也是提高中文的好方法。正如俗话所说，熟能生巧。Second,Besides,furthermore/what’smore,moreover,InadditionItisagoodwaytoimproveChinesetowatchTVandreadChinesemagazinesandnewspaperswatchingTVandreadingChinesemagazinesandnewspapersaregoodwaystoimproveChinese.Asasayinggoes,Practicemakesperfect.Secondly,watchingTVandreadingnewspapersandmagazinesinChinesearealsogoodwaystoimproveyourChinese.Asasayinggoes,practicemakesperfect.对要点3:学唱中文歌曲进行再构思：最后，你可以尝试学唱中文歌，因为通过这么做，你会发现学习和记忆中文词语更容易。Third,finallyatlast,allinall,lastbutnotleast,inaword,tosumup,inconclusion,YoucantrytolearnandsingChinesesongs.YoucantrylearningandsingingChinesesongs.Bydoingthis,youcanfinditeasiertolearnandrememberChinesewordsYouwillfindlearningandrememberChinesewordseasier.Finally,youcantrylearningandsingingChinesesongs,becausebydoingso,youwillfinditeasiertolearnandrememberChinesewords.对要点4:交中国朋友进行再构思：你也被建议交尽可能多的中国朋友，因为他们会告诉你许多关于中国的情况并帮助你学中文。Advisesbtodosth.as…….aspossibleYouareadvisedtomakeasmanyChinesefriendsaspossible.Becausetheywilltellyousomething/alotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.YouarealsoadvisedtomakeasmanyChinesefriendsaspossible,fortheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.第一段开头：添油加醋我很高兴收到你向我征求意见关于如何学好中文的来信。第二段对要点1，2，3，4进行再构思首先，我建议你上中文班。如果你学习中文有困难，你可以向你的老师求助。同时，你能有机会与同班同学操练说中文。其次,看电视和阅读中文报刊杂志也是提高中文的好方法。正如俗话所说，熟能生巧。最后，你可以尝试学唱中文歌，因为通过这么做，你会发现学习和记忆中文词语更容易。你也被建议交尽可能多的中国朋友，因为他们会告诉你许多关于中国的情况并帮助你学中文。第三段标准型结尾我期待着你的来信，并在信中告诉我你在汉语学习方面的进步。DearPeter,IamgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingmeforadviceonhowtolearnChinese.Aboveall,IsuggestyoutakingaChineseclass.HavingdifficultylearningChinese,youcanturntoyourteacherforhelp.Meanwhile,youcanhavechancestopractisespeakingChinesewithyourclassmates.Secondly,watchingTVandreadingnewspapersandmagazinesinChinesearealsogoodwaystoimproveyourChinese.Asasayinggoes,practicemakesperfect.Finally,youcantrylearningandsingingChinesesongs,becausebydoingso,youwillfinditeasiertolearnandrememberChinesewords.YouarealsoadvisedtomakeasmanyChinesefriendsaspossible,fortheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.TryandwritetomeinChinesenexttime.•Homework•背诵这篇作文•复习巩固上一课•预习下一课