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四六级作文闪光点•四级120-150字；六级150—180字；•是否长短句交叉；•用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；•关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词.高分作文标志•注意事项：•适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we/I•weshouldpayattentionto•Attentionshouldbepaidto.•善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。•如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。•Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat…•一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。•考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion等等•Itis,therefore,hightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Thus,itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.•applicable代替proper,approaches代替ways,implement代替carryout,sharpenone’scompetitiveedge代替enhanceone’scompetitiveness(提高某物竞争力)ComputerandI•Ineverforgettheexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresent,whichexertedatremendousfascinationonmesothatIindulgedmyselfingooglinganarmyofusefulinformationIhadexpected,andenjoyaseaofmelodiousclassicmusic.ThatnightIwassleepless,feelingthatthewholeworldbelongedtome.•exceedingly替换very•thrilling替换exciting•sth.exertsatremendousfascinationonsb替换sb.beinterestedinsth.•google替换search•anarmyof替换alotof•Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputers.Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnology,computerspouringintothecurrentsocietyasafashionareappealingtogrowingindividuals.Itisnoexaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmergedbythem,inlargemeasure!•Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessed•用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；•Increasingpopularity替换moreandmorepopular•Coincidentwith…非常地道的词汇，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换With…•Advancement替换development•Pourinto(floodinto/swarminto)替换enterinto•Current(currently)替换now•Appealtosb.替换sb.beinterestedinsth.•Growingindividuals替换moreandmorepeople•Itisnoexaggerationtosay经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的•Forastart,wecan,freely,searchdesiredinformationatanymoment.Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.Additionally,wecangethugerecreationsonlinebychatting,playinggames,ordeliveringemail.•Forastart替换Tobeginwith•Wecan,freely,search用了插入语的写作手法•ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.用了非常精彩的被动•Additionally替换Inaddition/Besides•Deliver替换send•Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,inaway,especiallythegrowingviolence,pornpictures,AV-filmsemergingonthescreen,whichleadsquietafewnetcitizenstocopying.•Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,•这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先Thereisnodenyingthat这个句型，还有however作为插入语，functioninthedisserviceof替换doharmto•Emerging代替appearing(fading代替disappearing)•Netcitizen网民，属于精彩用词•Asaclassicproverbgoesthatnogardenhasnoweeds.Computersdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeople'lives,despiteasliceofunfavorableimpacts.Weshould，therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheoppositefacet.•Nogardenhasnoweeds替换Everycoinhastwosides•Computersdoplay，do强调•Positive替换important/good等•Asliceof替换apartof•Unfavorable替换bad•Impacts替换effects/influences•Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageof…使用插入语•Fruits(而且fruits用的非常形象，merits/virtues)替换advantage(defects替换disadvantage)•Facet替换aspect•最经典的替换词•individuals,characters,folks代替people,persons•positive,favorable,rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding代替good•dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse(有害的)代替bad如果bad做表语，可以有belessimpressive代替•Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyfindtheiracademicrecordsarelessimpressive.•anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof代替many.•asliceof,quiteafew,several代替some•harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat替think(因为是书面语，所以要加that)•affair,business,matter代替thing•shared代common•reaphugefruits代替getmuchbenefit•formypart,frommyownperspective代替inmyopinion•Increasing(ly)/growing代替moreandmore•(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.•Eg.sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.•Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.•beneficial,rewarding代替helpfulbebeneficialof•shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,代替customer•exceedingly,extremely代替very•sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb代替sbtakeinterestin•captureone'sattention代替attractone'sattention.•facet,dimension,sphere代aspect•beindicativeof,besuggestiveof,befearfulof代indicate,suggest,fear•giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger代替cause.•Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth代替..reasonsforsth•desire代替want.•pourattentioninto代替payattentionto•bearinmindthat代替remember•enjoy,possess代替have(注意process是过程的意思)•interaction代替communication•frownonsth代替beagainst,disagreewithsth•并不一定…•Itdoesn’tfollowthat…•结果是…•Itturnedouttobe/that…•可以肯定…•Itispositivethat…•有迹象表明…•Thereareindicationsthat…•…毫无疑问…•Thereisnodoubt/nodenyingthefactthat•很可能…•Itisverylikelythat…常见套语句型•令人感到欣慰的是…•Toone’srelief,…•简单回顾…能够使我们…•Abriefreviewof…enablesusto…•Consideringitindetail,wemayfindthat…•普遍认为…•Itisacommonsensethat…•做…没意义•Thereisnouse/good/point/fun/senseindoingsth.•人们有可能忽视…•Somepeoplemayneglectthat…•人们越来越重视…•Wetendtoatt