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1专题三概要写作Writing1阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。YesterdayMattwassick.IpickedupArchiefromthesitterandEloisefromschoolanddecidedtoruntoTargetforafewthings.Ihadhopedtobeinandoutquickly.Ifoundalinewithjustonepersonaheadofmeandbeganorganizingmyitemsontheconveyor.Afterplacingmyitems，Ilookeduptoseethatthepersonaheadofmewasanelderlywoman.Shewaspayingforheritemswithchangeandwantedtopurchaseeachseparately.Iwasfrustratedwiththiswomanandtheinconvenienceshehadplacedonme.ButthenIwatchedtheyoungemployeewiththiswoman.Iwatchedhimhelphercountherchange，eversosoftlytakingitfromhershakinghands.Whensheaskedifshehadenoughtobuyareusablebag，hetoldhershedidandwenttwolinesovertogetoneforherandthenrepackagedheritems.Neveroncewasthisemployeeangry.Hewasnothingbutpatientandkind.AsIwaswatchinghim，IsawthatEloisewastoo.Shewasstandingnexttothewoman，watchingtheemployeecountthechange.IrealizedIhadn’tbeeninconveniencedatall.Thatmydaughterwasinsteadwitnessingkindnessandpatienceandbeingtaughtthisvaluablelessonbyacompletestranger.Whenthewomanwasfinished，theemployeebeganringingupmyitemsandthankedmeformypatience.Ithenthankedhimforteachinguspatienceandkindnessbyhistreatmentofthatelderlywoman.WhenhewasfinishedIpushedmycartthroughthestoretryingtofindthemanager.Iwantedhertoknowoftheemployee’skindnessandpatienceandhowmuchitmeanttome.Aftertrackingherdownandsharingthestorywithher，weleftTargetwithacartfullofconsumableitems，butwhatismore，aheartfullofgratitudeforsuchaninvaluablelesson.IfyouareeverintheGlendaleTarget，giveIshmaelasmileandanod.Theworldcouldusemorepeoplelikehim.2________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作指导】要写好记叙文的概要，先要找到以下两个问题的答案：(1)谁做了什么？(2)结果如何？如果是夹叙夹议文，还要加上这个故事给人们的启示或教育意义。就该题而言，本文的概要应该包含：作者购物的时间、地点、结果以及从本次购物中得到的启示，最后用自己的语言串联起来。【参考范文】Thepassagetellsusanexperienceofshopping.(要点1)Oneday，theauthorwithtwochildrenwenttoTargetforshopping.(要点2)Whilewaitinginline，shefoundanoldladywastroublesome，buttheyoungemployeetreatedherpatiently.(要点3)Seeingthat，theauthorwastouchedbyhiskindnessandpatienceandshethoughtherchildrenwouldlearnalotfromthisexperience.(要点4)Writing2阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Sugarsarepopularintheprocessedfoodindustrybecausetheyaddtaste，colourandthicknesstofoodproducts.Thestudieshaveshownthatsugarscanprovideasourceofenergy.Thebodybreaksdownthesugarintosimpleformsthatcanbereadilyusedinthebody.Buttoomuchsugarcancontributetohealthproblemslikeobesityandtoothdisease.Havingtoomuchsugarisnottheonlyreasonforobesityorbeingoverweight，butitdoesaddtotheamountofkilojoulesinfood.Eatingtoomuchofanyfood，withoutdoingenoughexercise，willcauseyoutobecomeoverweight.GovernmentsintheUnitedStatesandUnitedKingdomarewagingawaronsugarintheinterestsofpublichealth.Bothcountriesclaimthattheoverconsumptionofsugarbymuchofthepopulationisharmfultopeople’shealth.OnThursday，theU．S.governmentissuednewdietaryguidelinesthatstronglyrecommendpeoplereceivelessthan10percentoftheirdailycalorieintakefromaddedsugar.Onthesameday，BritishPrimeMinisterDavidCameronsaidhehasnotruledouttheideaofa3taxonsugartoencourageconsumerstobuyfoodwithreducedlevelsofthesweet.PoliticiansintheU．K.aredebatinghowareductionintheintakeofsugarcouldhelpreduceBritain’srisingratesofobesity.TheAmericanandBritishgovernmentsbothrefertoastudyconductedinMexicothatshowedataxonsugary，carbonateddrinksledtoareductioninconsumption.ThetaxwascarriedoutonJanuary1，2014andpurchasesofthetaxeddrinkswentdownby12percentbyDecemberofthatyear.Salesofmineralwaterincreasedby4percentoverthesameperiod.Analternativetotaxingsugareddrinksistoreducethelevelofsugarinthem.ResearchersatQueenMaryUniversityinLondonsaythatreducingthesugarcontentinsugar－sweeteneddrinksby40percentoverfiveyearscouldpreventonemillioncasesofobesityintheU．K.Researcherssaypeoplemightnotevennoticethechanges.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作指导】本文是一篇说明文，讲述了人体摄入过多糖分会影响健康。英国和美国政府都号召人们不要摄入过多糖分，甚至考虑通过增收糖税来减少糖的食用。读懂原材料是写好概要的关键，在理解原文的基础上，用尽可能简洁的语言集中概括原文的主要观点及思想，但不能简单重复原文，同时，对各要点的概括要详略得当，结构严谨，表达明确，语义准确简练，避免空泛、含混之词。【参考范文】Sugarisusefulforourbody，buttoomuchsugardoesharmtoourhealth，whichprobablyleadstohealthproblems.(要点1)Asforthis，governmentsintheUnitedStatesandUnitedKingdomcallonpeoplenottotakeintoomuchsugar.(要点2)BritishPrimeMinisterevenplannedtoputataxonsugar.(要点3)Astudyshowedthatthetaxonsugarhelpedreducetheconsumptionofsugar.(要点4)Researchersalsothinkreducingthesugarcontentslightlywouldnotbenoticed.(要点5)Writing3阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。4Dietershavelongswornthatgrapefruithelpsthemloseweight.TheGrapefruitDiet，alsocalledtheHollywoodDiet，datesbacktothe1930sandhasahostofcelebrityfansincludingsingerKylieMinogue.Itinvolveshavinggrapefruitorgrapefruitjuicewitheverymealwhilecuttingbackoncalories.Now，scientistsarebeginningtobelievethem.Astudyhasfoundthatdrinkinggrapefruitjuicewheneatingfattyfoo