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（英语写作是英语学习的最高境界）----23中九（4）班XuMinIthinkteenagersshouldbeallowed…Howtomakeupapassage?Howtowriteanarticle?wordphraseparagraphpassage？？？？？sentenceHowtomakeupapassage?wordphrasetakeshoppingdophotosgetmydreamachieveearspiercedmakepart-timeworkgoachoiceHowtomakeupapassage?phrasesentenceworryabout___________________________.+sth.myschoolworkMyparentsgogoshoppingIlikegoingshopping.Shesaidshelikedgoingshopping....educatehuglifttalkregretcrycrylovediestealdividesmellavoidheatinterviewrushpunishwarnHowtomakeupapassage?Howtowriteanarticle?wordphraseparagraphpassage？？？？？sentenceHowtowriteanarticle?？？？？？1.认真审题---确立时态人称，题材格式。2.找全信息点---紧扣主题，突出重点。3.成文---表述正确，文字流畅。4.出彩---文章结构清晰，重点句型出彩。5.检查---信息点是否全面；时态人称是否一致。句子结构是否清晰；短语单词是否正确。Writingsteps:RulesathomeWriteadiaryentryexplainingwhichrule(s)youdonotagreewithathomeandhowyouthinktherule(s)shouldbechanged.Rulesathome............What?/Where?/Who?/Why?watchTVplaycomputergamesstayoutsidelateusemymobilephone…Whatcan’tyoudo?•getupbefore6:00a.m.•washhandsbeforemeals•can’tgotobeduntil…•finishhomeworkbefore24:00•…Whatdoyouhavetodo?Writeadiaryentryexplainingwhichrule(s)youdonotagreewithathomeandhowyouthinktherule(s)shouldbechanged.3aWriteadiaryentryexplainingwhichrule(s)youdonotagreewithathomeandhowyouthinktherule(s)shouldbechanged.3a日记1.认真审题---确立时态人称，题材格式。一般现在时第一人称Thursday,November3rd_____________________________________________________________________________________________【日记格式】周，月日2.找全信息点---紧扣主题，突出重点。Ruleagreeordisagreecan’tplaycomputergamesagree—Ithink…playingtoomanycomputergamesisn’tgoodforeyes3.成文---表述正确，文字流畅。can’twatchTV……Disagree-----I(don’t)think…alltheTVprogramsarebadforstudents;needtorelaxshouldspendallthetimestudying4.出彩---文章结构清晰，重点句型出彩。常用连接词；长短句结合使用；动名词做主语；It's结构要出现；尽量来句名言或俗语；。。。【参考范文】Thursday,November10thTherearemanyrulesinmyhouse.OneofthemisthatImustn’tmakemyowndecisions.Forexample,Ilikeplayingthepianoverymuch.ButmyparentsthinkIshouldn’tlikethat.Ishouldspendmoretimeonmyschoolwork.Idonotagreewithmyparents.IthinkIshouldbeallowedtohavemyownideasbecauseIhavegrownup.IwouldliketopracticeplayingthepianoasmuchasIwant.IfIwereallowedtodothat,Icouldachievemydream.What’sworse,Ican’t…Ithink…Because…I5.检查---信息点是否全面；时态人称是否一致；句子结构是否清晰；短语单词是否正确。八、书面表达评分标准一类（13-15分）语句流畅、格式正确、无或基本无单词拼写、标点、语法错误，字数达到要求；二类（10-12分）写出大部分内容，语句较流畅，基本无格式、语法错误，有个别拼写、标点错误；三类（7-9分）写出部分要点，语句基本通顺，有少量拼写、标点、格式、语法错误，但不影响句意理解；四类（4-6分）写出少量内容要点，语句不够通顺，语法、拼写、标点错误较多；五类（1-3分）基本上没有写出内容要点，语法、拼写错误多。基本上没有通顺句子。Chinglish!!!Oftenchangethesentencepatterns!!!Toolong!!!Thelongeryouwrite,maybethemoremistakesyou’llmake!写够字数即可，最好不超过规定十个字。？？Practicemakesperfect.