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Stopchippinghalfway,youcannotchopdowndeadwood;andkeepchippingaway,goldandstonecanbecarved.锲而舍之，朽木不折；锲而不舍，金石可镂。Writing————knowledgeandfestivalsLearningGoals•1.Learnsomebasicwritingknowledge.•2.KnowsomewordsrelatedtothetraditionalChinesefestivals.•3.BeabletowriteashortpassageaboutacertainChinesefestival.PartOne:BasicKnowledge篇章写作要求：统一性(unity)：围绕主题连贯性(coherence)：逻辑性,过渡词一致性(consistency)：时态，人称英语作文评分标准：内容：观点明确，内容充实，理由充分.10’语言：表达正确，语言流畅,用词恰当，10’句式多样化.组织结构：结构正确，上下文连贯一致5’常见句法错误•无连接分句•避免误置修饰语•注意逻辑主语•避免指代不清•避免人称代词混淆•避免重复•尽量避免中式英语正确连接分句:•1.Thebookwasinteresting,Ireaditrapidly.•Thebookwasinteresting,andIreaditrapidly.•2.Thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs,theboysmoppedthefloor.•Thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs,andtheboysmoppedthefloor.•避免误置修饰语•3.AttheageofsixmyfatherbegantoteachmeEnglish.•MyfatherbegantoteachmeEnglishwhenIwassix.•注意逻辑主语•4.Tobewell-informed,readingnewspaperisagoodhabit.•Tobewell-informed,weshouldreadnewspapereveryday.•5.Comingoutoftheclassroom,myheartwasbeatingveryfast.•Comingoutoftheclassroom,Ifeltmyheartbeatingveryfast.避免指代不清•6.Sheaskedhersisterwhyshewasn'tinvitedtotheparty.•Sheaskedwhyhersisterwasn'tinvitedtotheparty.•Sheaskedhersister,“Whywasn'tIinvitedtotheparty?”•避免人称代词混淆•7.Wehadbeenontheplaneforeighteenhours,andyougotprettytiredofsittingthatlong.•Wehadbeenontheplaneforeighteenhours,andwegotprettytiredofsittingthatlong.•避免重复•8.Inmyopinion,Ithinkweshouldaskthemforadvice.•Inmyopinion,weshouldaskthemforadvice.•尽量避免中式英语•9.Thebooksinourlibraryaregettingmoreandmore.•Therearemoreandmorebooksinourlibrary.•Thenumberofbooksinourlibraryisgettingbiggerandbigger.•10.Thereisamanwantstoseeyoudownstairs.•Amanwantstoseeyoudownstairs.•Thereisamanwhowantstoseeyoudownstairs.PartTwo:FestivalsTraditionalChineseFestivalstheSpringFestival；ChineseNewYeartheLanternFestivaltheDragonBoatFestivalArborDayTree-plantingDayTeachers'DayNationalDayMid-AutumnFestival;MoonFestival春节元宵节端午节植树节教师节国庆节中秋节TheMid-AutumnDayBrainstorming-头脑风暴ThinkaboutasmanywordsasyoucanthatrelatedtotheMid-AutumnDay……mooncake月饼ChangE嫦娥HouYi后羿familyreunion家庭团聚中秋节快乐！HappyMid-AutumnFestival！cameouttowatchthefullmoontocelebratethefestival到户外赏月ThinkaboutasmanywordsasyoucanthatrelatedtotheMid-AutumnDay……mooncake月饼ChangE嫦娥HouYi后羿familyreunion家庭团聚中秋节快乐！HappyMid-AutumnFestival！cameouttowatchthefullmoon到户外赏月Writing:假如你是李华。你的美国笔友Mike即将随其父母来中国，并在中国度过中秋节。他来信向你询问有关中秋节的习俗，请你告诉他有关中秋节的习俗。要点如下：1历史悠久。2中国人独有的传统节日。3家庭团圆。4共进晚餐。5吃月饼。6赏月。要求：1词数100左右。2可适当添加细节。3开头已给出，不计入总词数。DearMike,I’mgladtoknowthatyouwillcometoChinawithyourparentsandspendtheMid-AutumnDayhere.----------------------------------------------------------------亲爱的麦克，我很高兴得知你即将和你的父母一起来中国并在这里度过中秋节。中秋节是一个有着悠久历史的传统节日，只有中国人来庆祝。它在中国农历的8月15日，在那时一家人聚在一起并享受晚餐。之后，他们吃月饼，这代表了节日的团结精神。通常，如果天气允许的话，他们会走出家去享受明亮的月光，谈论一些愉快的事情。它是中国人最重要的节日之一。我祝你旅途愉快，并且我相信你将会喜欢我们传统的中秋节。你的，李华Version1:Mid-AutumnDayishistorytraditionalfestivalonlyChinesecelebrate.ItisonAugust15thinChina.Inthattimeafamilytogethertoenjoydinneraftereatmooncake.Thespiritofthefestivaltogether.Usually,iftheweatherallowedtheygooutandenjoythebirghtmoon,talkaboutsomehappything.ItisoneofthemostimportantfestivalinChina.IwishyouaenjoyjourneyandIbelieveyouwilllikeourMid-AutumnDay.中秋节是一个有着悠久历史的传统节日Mid-AutumnDayishistorytraditionalfestivalwithalonghistoryatraditionalfestivalTheMid-AutumnDayisatraditionalfestivalwithalonghistory中秋节是一个有着悠久历史的传统节日，只有中国人来庆祝。Mid-AutumnDayishistorytraditionalfestivalonlyChinesecelebrate.及时断句只有中国人来庆祝只被中国人庆祝celebrateonlybywhichiscelebratedonlybyChinesepeople它在中国农历的8月15日ItisonAugust15thinChina.fallon用来表示节日在某天theChineselunaryearItfallsonAugust15thoftheChineselunaryear在那时一家人聚在一起并享受晚餐。之后，他们吃月饼，Inthattimeafamilytogethertoenjoydinneraftereatmooncake.在那时：atthattime/atthatmoment/when一家人：allfamilymemberspeopleofafamily之后：afterthat想一想，这样写所表达的真正意思是什么？？在那时一家人聚在一起并享受晚餐。gettogetherenjoywhenpeopleofafamilygettogetherandenjoythedinnertogether.之后，他们吃月饼AfterthatmooncakeAfterthattheyeatmooncakes这代表了节日的团结精神。Thespiritofthefestivaltogether.standforwhichstandsforthespiritofreunion.通常，如果天气允许的话，他们会走出家去享受明亮的月光Usually,iftheweatherallowedtheygooutandenjoythebirghtmoon,Often,iftheweatherpermitsgooutofbrightmoonlighttheywillgooutofthehousetoenjoythebrightmoonlight通常，如果天气允许的话，他们会走出家去享受明亮的月光,谈论一些愉快的事情.Usually,iftheweatherallowedtheygooutandenjoythebirghtmoon,talkaboutsomehappything.talkingaboutsomethingpleasanttalkingaboutsomethingpleasant它是中国人最重要的节日之一。ItisoneofthemostimportantfestivalinChina.ItisoneofthemostimportantfestivalsforChinesepeople.我祝你旅途愉快IwishyouaenjoyjourneyIwishyouapleasantjourney并且我相信你将会喜欢我们传统的中秋节besure(that)//believe(that)andIbelieveyouwilllikeourMid-AutumnDay.andI'msureyouwilllikeourtraditionalMid-AutumnDay.DearMike,I’mgladtoknowthatyouwillcometoChinawithyourparentsandspendtheMid-AutumnDayhere.TheMid-AutumnDayisatraditionalfestivalwithalonghistorywhichiscelebratedonlybyChinesepeople.ItfallsonAugust15thoftheChineselunaryear,whenpeopleofafamilygettogetherandenjoythedinnertogether.Afterthattheyeatmooncakes,whichstandsforthespiritofreunion.summaryOften,iftheweatherpermits,theywillgooutoftheho