中国节日英语写作

Stopchippinghalfway,youcannotchopdowndeadwood;andkeepchippingaway,goldandstonecanbecarved.锲而舍之，朽木不折；锲而不舍，金石可镂。Writing————knowladgeandfestivalsLearningGoals•1.Learnsomebasicwritingknowledge.•2.DeepentheunderstandingofsometraditionalChinesefestivals.•3.Enablethestudents'towriteashortpassageaboutacertainChinesefestival.PartOne:BasicKnowledge篇章写作要求：统一性(unity)：围绕主题连贯性(coherence)：逻辑性,过渡词一致性(consistency)：时态，人称英语作文评分标准：内容：观点明确，内容充实，理由充分.10’语言：表达正确，语言流畅,用词恰当，10’句式多样化.组织结构：结构正确，上下文连贯一致5’常见句法错误•无连接分句•避免误置修饰语•注意逻辑主语•避免指代不清•避免人称代词混淆•避免重复•尽量避免汉语干扰正确连接分句:•1.Thebookwasinteresting,Ireaditrapidly.•Thebookwasinteresting,andIreaditrapidly.•2.Thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs,theboysmoppedthefloor.•Thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs,andtheboysmoppedthefloor.•避免误置修饰语•3.AttheageofsixmyfatherbegantoteachmeEnglish.•MyfatherbegantoteachmeEnglishwhenIwassix.•注意逻辑主语•4.Tobewell-informed,readingnewspaperisagoodhabit.•Tobewell-informed,weshouldreadnewspapereveryday.•5.Comingoutoftheclassroom,myheartwasbeatingveryfast.•Comingoutoftheclassroom,Ifeltmyheartbeatingveryfast.避免指代不清•6.Sheaskedhersisterwhyshewasn'tinvitedtotheparty.•Sheaskedwhyhersisterwasn'tinvitedtotheparty.•Sheaskedhersister,“Whywasn'tIinvitedtotheparty?”•避免人称代词混淆•7.Wehadbeenontheplaneforeighteenhours,andyougotprettytiredofsittingthatlong.•Wehadbeenontheplaneforeighteenhours,andwegotprettytiredofsittingthatlong.•避免重复•8.Inmyopinion,Ithinkweshouldaskthemforadvice.•Inmyopinion,weshouldaskthemforadvice.•尽量避免汉语干扰•9.Thebooksinourlibraryaregettingmoreandmore.•Therearemoreandmorebooksinourlibrary.•Thenumberofbooksinourlibraryisgettingbiggerandbigger.•10.Thereisamanwantstoseeyoudownstairs.•Amanwantstoseeyoudownstairs.•Thereisamanwhowantstoseeyoudownstairs.PartTwo:FestivalsTraditionalChineseFestivalstheSpringFestival；ChineseNewYeartheLanternFestivaltheDragonBoatFestivalArborDayTree-plantingDayTeachers'DayNationalDayMid-AutumnFestival;MoonFestival春节元宵节端午节植树节教师节国庆节中秋节TheMid-AutumnDayBrainstorming-头脑风暴ThinkaboutasmanywordsasyoucanthatrelatedtotheMid-AutumnDay……mooncake月饼ChangE嫦娥HouYi后羿familyreunion家庭团聚中秋节快乐！HappyMid-AutumnFestival！cameouttowatchthefullmoontocelebratethefestival到户外赏月ThinkaboutasmanywordsasyoucanthatrelatedtotheMid-AutumnDay……mooncake月饼ChangE嫦娥HouYi后羿familyreunion家庭团聚中秋节快乐！HappyMid-AutumnFestival！cameouttowatchthefullmoontocelebratethefestival到户外赏月Writing:假如你是李华。你的美国笔友Mike即将随其父母来中国，并在中国度过中秋节。他来信向你询问有关中秋节的习俗，请你告诉他有关中秋节的习俗。要点如下：1历史悠久。2中国人独有的传统节日。3家庭团圆。4共进晚餐。5吃月饼。6赏月。要求：1词数100左右。2可适当添加细节。3开头已给出，不计入总词数。DearMike,I’mgladtoknowthatyouwillcometoChinawithyourparentsandspendtheMid-AutumnDayhere.----------------------------------------------------------------亲爱的麦克，我很高兴得知你即将和你的父母一起来中国并在这里度过中秋节。中秋节是一个有着悠久历史的传统节日，只有中国人来庆祝。它在中国农历的8月15日，在那时一家人聚在一起并享受晚餐。之后，他们吃月饼，这代表了节日的团结精神。通常，如果天气允许的话，他们会走出家去享受明亮的月光，谈论一些愉快的事情。它是中国人最重要的节日之一。我祝你旅途愉快，并且我相信你将会喜欢我们传统的中秋节。你的，李华我很高兴得知你将要和你的父母一起来中国并在这里度过中秋节。begladtodosthI’mgladtoknowthatyouwillcometoChinawithyourparentsandspendtheMid-AutumnDayhere.中秋节是一个有着悠久历史的传统节日withalonghistoryatraditionalfestivalTheMid-AutumnDayisatraditionalfestivalwithalonghistory只有中国人来庆祝只被中国人庆祝celebrateonlybywhichiscelebratedonlybyChinesepeople它在中国农历的8月15日fallon用来表示节日在某天theChineselunaryearItfallsonAugust15thoftheChineselunaryear在那时一家人聚在一起并享受晚餐。peopleofafamilygettogetherenjoywhenpeopleofafamilygettogetherandenjoythedinnertogether.之后，他们吃月饼AfterthatmooncakeAfterthattheyeatmooncakes这代表了节日的团结精神。standforwhichstandsforthespiritsofthefestival-unity.通常，如果天气允许的话Often,iftheweatherpermits他们会走出家去享受明亮的月光gooutofbrightmoonlighttheywillgooutofthehousetoenjoythebrightmoonlight谈论一些愉快的事情talkaboutsomethingpleasanttalkingaboutsomethingpleasant它是中国人最重要的节日之一。oneofthemostimportantfestivalsItisoneofthemostimportantfestivalsforChinesepeople.我祝你旅途愉快Iwishyouapleasantjourney并且我相信你将会喜欢我们传统的中秋节besure(that)/believe(that)andI'msureyouwilllikeourtraditionalMid-AutumnDay.DearMike,I’mgladtoknowthatyouwillcometoChinawithyourparentsandspendtheMid-AutumnDayhere.TheMid-AutumnDayisatraditionalfestivalwithalonghistorywhichiscelebratedonlybyChinesepeople.ItfallsonAugust15thoftheChineselunaryear,whenpeopleofafamilygettogetherandenjoythedinnertogether.Afterthattheyeatmooncakes,whichstandsforthespiritsofthefestival-unity.summaryOften,iftheweatherpermits,theywillgooutofthehousetoenjoythebrightmoonlight,talkingaboutsomethingpleasant.ItisoneofthemostimportantfestivalsforChinesepeople.IwishyouapleasantjourneyandI’msureyouwilllikeourtraditionalMid-AutumnDay.Yours,LiHua假如你是李华。恰逢新年之际，你的美国笔友Mike即将来到中国，他来信向你询问有关中国春节的习俗，请你回信告诉他有关的习俗。要点如下：1历史悠久。2对中国人有着重要意义。3家庭团圆。4吃年夜饭。要求：1词数100~120。2可适当添加细节。Homework