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SunnyGaoChapter1预备知识WorkinpairstodecidewhetherthesestatementsaboutIELTSaretrueorfalse.1.Grammaristhemostimportantassessmentcriteriainwriting.2.IELTSExaminerscantellwhensomeoneisgivingamemorizedanswer.3.IELTSandTOEFLbothuseexaminerstoassesswritingandspeaking.4.YourIELTSscoreinChinawillvarydependingonwhichcityyoutakethetest.5.IELTSscoresarecarefullymonitoredandmanyaredoublechecked.FTTFTChapter1预备知识学术类雅思写作考试内容类别官方建议时间字数题材学术类Task120min150字以上图表作文学术类Task240min250字以上议论文或报告Task2议论文两种形式Argumentation80%1.题目给出一方观点（反方观点隐含），问Doyouagreeordisagree?Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?例：Inordertolearnalanguagewell,weshouldlearnaboutthecountryaswellastheculturesandlifestylesofthepeoplewhospeakit.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?2.题目中给出双方观点，要求分析正反方观点后做出结论Somesay……Othersarguethat……Whatisyouropinion?Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.Expresssomereasonsforbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.Doyouthinkitsadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantages?Task2中报告Report，出现概率为20%题目中没有观点，只给出一种现象，让考生分析该现象的causes,solutions,effects.通常题目的标志词为Whatare……？例子：Today,therearemoreimagesofdisastersandviolenceinthemedia.Whatarethecausesandwhatareyoursolutions?雅思写作评分标准TR—TaskresponseTA---TaskachievementCC—CoherenceandCohesionLR—LexicalresourceGR—Grammaticalrangeandaccuracy雅思写作评分标准IELTSTASK2WritingbanddescriptorsBandTaskAchievementCoherenceandCohesionLexicalResourceGrammaticalRangeandAccuracy765TaskAchievementCoherenceandCohesionLexicalResourceGrammaticalRangeandAccuracyCommentsonSampleScript2(InternationalTourism)Band7TA:Thecandidateaddressesbothaspectsofthetaskandpresentsaclearpositionthroughouttheresponse.Mainideasaregenerallyclearandrelevant,althoughsomesupportingideaslackfocus(asintheopeningofparagraph2).CC:Ideasaregenerallywell-organised,andthereisaclearoverallprogressionwithonlyminorlapseswherepointsarenotwell-integratedintotheargument.Arangeofcohesivedevicesisusedeffectively,althoughthereissomeunder-useofconnectivesandsubstitution,andsomelapsesintheuseofreferencing.LR:Agoodrangeofvocabularyisusedwithsomeflexibilityandprecision.Thecandidatehasagoodawarenessofstyleandcollocation,althoughoccasionalawkwardexpressionsorinappropriaciesinwordchoiceandwordformlimittherating.GRA:Likewise,agoodrangeofsentencestructuresisusedwithahighlevelofaccuracyresultinginfrequenterror-freesentences.Minorsystematicerrorspersist,however,andpunctuationisunhelpfulattimesCommentsonSampleScript3(InternationalTourism)Band5TA:Theinputmaterialisdirectlycopiedasanintroductiontothisresponse,andoncethisisdeductedfromthewordcount,theresponseisunder-lengthat194wordsandsolosesmarks.Nevertheless,thetopicisaddressedandarelevantpositionisexpressed,althoughtherearepatches(asinthirdparagraph)wherethedevelopmentisunclear.Otherideasaremoreevidentlyrelevant,butaresometimesinsufficientlydeveloped.Theseideasareclearlyorganisedandthereisanoverallprogressionwithintheresponse.CC:Thereissomeeffectiveuseofarangeofcohesivedevices,includingreferencing,butthereisalsosomemechanicalover-useoflinkersinplaces.Paragraphsaresometimesrathertooshortandinappropriate.LR:Arangeofvocabularyisattemptedandthisisadequateforagoodresponsetothetask.However,controlisweak,andtherearefrequentspellingerrorswhichcancausesomedifficultiesforthereader,thuskeepingtheratingdownforthelexicalcriterion.GRA:Thecandidateusesamixofsimpleandcomplexstructureswithfrequentsubordinateclauses.Controlofcomplexstructuresisvariable,andalthougherrorsarenoticeable,theyonlyrarelyimpedeunderstandingofthemessage,Practice剑桥雅思7P169请判断考官是怎样给这份试卷打出5分的？评分标准考官评语对应评分标准描述得分评分标准TaskresponseCoherence&CohesionLexicalResourceGrammaticalRangeandAccuracy其他Underlength/Off-topic/Illegible评分标准考官评语对应评分标准描述得分评分标准TRItdoesnotaddressallpartsofthequestionAddressesthetaskonlypartially5C&C正评价(6分）+thereisalsoalotofrepetitionduetoinadequateuseofreferencingandsubstitutionmayberepetitivebecauseoflackofreferencingandsubstitution5.5LRThehighlevelofrepetitionindicateslimitationsinrangeofvocabularyUsesalimitedrangeofvocabulary5GRATheanswerincludesattemptsatcomplexsentenceforms,but……+正评价nevertheless,thereareexamplesofaccuratecomplexstructures（6分）Attemptscomplexsentencesbutthesetendtobelessaccurate5.5其他Lessthan250words扣0.5总分（5+5.5+5+5.5）/4=5.25≈5.55.5-0.5=5其他预备知识1.格式：不用抄题目，齐头格式2.缩写：不要使用we’re,can’t,don’t等缩写，应使用正式文体，可以使用全球通用首字母缩写，如NBA,KFC,WTO等，国内通用的不可以写，如CET-43.数字：十以下数字用英语单词表示4.标点符号：《》、……“Avatar”,…，andsoon5.I,My,We,You的使用6.美式和英式拼写①-re与ercenter—centretheater---theatre②-our与–orcolorful—colourfullabor—labour③-ise,-isation与–ize,-izationrealize—realiseorganization—organisation④-ce与-selicense—licencedefense—defence⑤英式在美式拼写中被简化programme-programtraveller--traveler其他预备知识雅思写作流程5+33+25分钟构思，写提纲（写作观点，2个主要论据，1个例子）33分钟写作2分钟检查语法：主谓一致，标点词汇：用同义词和代词（it,them)替换重复过多的单词逻辑：是否需要在句子中添加therefore,moreover,incontrast等linkingwords练习：请利用在本节课学到的内容找出下面句子的错误。1.下面的句子从写作风格看存在什么问题？Mobilephonesaresoimportanttoourlives.Everyoneshouldusemobilephones!2.请在下面的两个句子中间加上一个恰当的连接词将其改写为复杂句：Airpollutionisincreasinglyserious.Measuresshouldbetakentotacklethisproblem.3.请迅速找出下面句子里的拼写错误：Thecolorschemeofthisdesignisn