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Writing---ByOscarLi一、简单句翻译1、主语+谓语+其它（1）我五岁时就会游泳。Icouldswimattheageoffive.(2)太阳在东方升起来了Thesunrisesintheeast.ToclapTobomb22、主+系+表（1）这个短故事非常有趣Theshortstoryisveryinteresting.（2）桌子上的花很漂亮。Theflowersonthedeskareverybeautiful.ToclapTobomb4二、规避错误给下列句子改错，并指出属于什么错误。1.句式：Iwashadseafood.Itallerthanher.WewerevisitedtheBodiBeach.三、牛刀小试：改错2.代词Ithinkit’sbadtohimhealth.Ifeltveryinteresting,sodidthem.Ourhopehecanhaveahealthydiet.3.形容词副词Itisveryinterested.Hebecomefaterandfater.4.主谓搭配Playtheviolinisveryinteresting.Shestudyveryhard.5.名词：Wevisitedlotsofplaceofinterestthere.You’llseealotofbuilding.6.Therebe句型Ourclasshave60students.TherehavealotofplacesofinterestinAuatralia.7.语序IwithmyfriendsgotoGuangzhou.Ihavemanyquestionsneedyourhelp.8.介词搭配Wearefriendlywithothers.IarrivedatDalianin9:00.I’mlookingforwardtoknowaboutyourschool.9.否定句Hefeltdidn’twell.Shewasn’tboughtanewwatchforme.10.时态HeeatedalotofmeatanddrinkedalotofCoke.Iwalkedtoschooleveryday.11.词语搭配Welikeplayingviolinverymuch.Heencouragedusstudyhard.12.综合类I2:05amgotofishing.Myschoolisverybeautiful,havelotsoftree.Thisyear’ssummerholiday,IandmyparentsflyingtotheAustralia.TodayisteacherDay.Alltheteacherisveryhappy,becausethey’sstudentmadeanumberofpresens.Thedayissunny.Iattendedthecelebrationforschoolheld.Inthecelebration,someteacherwasveryhard,sotheywasgivenmedals.MyEnglishteacherinoneofthem.Afterdinner,IandsomestudentswenttolookatEnglishteacher.Englishteachersaid,“I’mverylikesthisjob.Youmuststudyhard,Doyouknow?Idon’twanttohaveyourpresents.Iwanttomystudentscanstudyhard.Ihopemystudentscanthemoreandmorebetter.”Ihadheard.IdecidedtodoteacherlooklikemyEnglishteacher.（徐**）Teachers'Day.teachersaretheirstudentspresentsforthem.heldbyschool.teachersweregivenmedalsbecauseofhardwork.SomewassomestudentsandIseeIlikethejobverymuch.mystudentstobebetterandbetteragreed.beateacherMylastbirthdaywasatmarch.ThatwasinSunday.Iwasinvitationalotoffriendstoacceptmybirthdayparty.Thebirthdaypartywasinmyhome.Andbeganat4:30pm.Weatethebirthdaycakeattable.Itwasverydelicious.Atlast,theygavemealotofgift.Itmademefeelontopoftheworld.（陈*）句式错误：主+系+表1.Theschoolislookverybeautiful.Theschoollooksverybeautiful.2.Theschoollikesmyhome.Theschoolislikemyhome.3.Ihadn’thappybeforeIcametotheschool.Iwasn’thappybeforeIcametotheschool.4.Myschoolverybeautiful.Myschoolisverybeautiful.5.Theyarehappily.Theyarehappy.ToclapTobomb8句式错误：主+谓(+宾)1.Iamstudyhard.Istudyhard.2.Sheisveryloveherschool.Sheloveherschoolverymuch.3.Reallydon’tknowwhattodo.Ireallydon’tknowwhattodo.4.Hopeyoucangivemeadvice.Ihopeyoucangivemeadvice.ToclapTobomb9其它句式错误1.Idon’tknowwhatshouldIdo?Idon’tknowwhatIshoulddo?2.Therearemanystudentsarereadingbook.Therearemanystudentsreadingbooks.3.Myschoolhavemanytreesandflowers.Therearemanytreesandflowersinmyschool.4.Therehaveabigplayground.Thereisabigplayground.5.Todomyhomeworkcostme3hoursyesterday.Ittookme3hourstodomyhomeworkyesterday.Ispent3hoursonmyhomeworkyesterday.ToclapTobomb10时态错误1.Ihadbeenherefortwoyears.2.Istudiedheresince2008.3.Shewasgotupatsixyesterday.4.Igoestoschoolonfootat6:30.5.ShewatchingTVathome.gohavestudiedgotuphavelivedisToclapTobomb11其它语法错误1.It’sbigandbeautifulschool.It’sabigandbeautifulschool.2.It’sliesinLonggangofsouth.It’sliesinthesouthofLonggang.3.Icanstudyinthere.Icanstudythere.4.Myteacherisveryfriendlywithme.Myteacherisveryfriendlytome.ToclapTobomb12其它语法错误5.Ienjoyplaywithmyclassmates.6.Theteachersisgoodatteach.7.Ibehavedverybadatschool.8.Ialwayscan’tpasstheexam.can’talwayspassbadlyteachingplayingTobombToclap13假如你叫张名，班主任王老师想了解班级同学的状况，以便有针对性地对学生进行考前心理疏导。请你根据下面的内容要求，给班主任王老师写封e-mail,说明自己的情况，并请她给你提一些建议。内容要求：1、学习任务重，睡眠不足，缺乏体育活动。同学间缺乏沟通和交流。2、在家不允许看电视、上网、听音乐等。3、词数80字左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。三、范文解析（一）分析提示：找全信息，写全句子。每个句子必须有主语+谓语（+其他）1.考前心理Ifeelverynervousbeforeexams.2.学习任务重(我有太多的作业要做)Ihavetoomuchhomeworktodoeveryday.3.睡眠不足(我没有足够的时间睡觉)Idon’thaveenoughtimetosleepatnight.4.缺乏体育活动(我很少从事体育活动)Iseldomtakeexercise/dosports.5.同学间缺乏沟通和交流(我的同学和我不常彼此交流)MyclassmatesandIalsoseldomcommunicatewitheachother.6.在家不允许看电视、上网、听音乐等(我的父母不允许我看电视、上网、听音乐)TheyneverallowmetowatchTV,surftheInternetandlistentomusic.7.我不知道该怎么办Idon’tknowwhatIshoulddo.Idon’tknowwhattodo.8.请给我一些建议。Pleasehelpmeandgivemesomeadvice.（二）引申拓展（选择自己想得到又写得好的地方去展开)1.MyclassmatesandIalsoseldomcommunicatewitheachother.SosometimesIfeellonely.2.WhenIgethome,Ihavenofreetime,either.Myparentsalwaystellmetoworkhard.TheyneverallowmetowatchTV,surftheInternetandlistentomusic,evenatweekends.Mylifeisboring.（三）连缀成文用时间、地点状语或者一些关联词将整篇短文串连起来，使之成为一个有机的整体。如：inthemorning,intheafternoon,intheevening;atschool,athome,atthesupermarket;first,second,third,……;atfirst,then,next,atlast.DearMsWang,I’mverygladtowritetoyou,Ihopetohearfromyousoon.BestwishesZhangMinAtschoolIfeelnervousbeforeexams.Ihavetoomuchhomeworktodoeveryday.Idon’thaveenoughtimetosleepatnight.AndIseldomtakeexercise.MyclassmatesandIalsoseldomcommunicatewitheachother.SosometimesIfeellonely.WhenIgethome,Ihavenofreetime,either.Myparentsalwaystellmetoworkhard.TheyneverallowmetowatchTV,surftheInternetandlistentomusic,evenatweekends.Mylifeisboring.Idon’tk