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XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter1IELTS写作XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter21.雅思写作概述及评分标准1.1课程目标1.2课程安排1.3授课理念1.4小作文基本情况1.5大作文基本情况1.6分数计算1.7答题纸1.8书写格式1.9雅思写作评分标准说明1.10语法问题XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter31.1课程目标•1.1.1官方信息来源•1.1.2全球三大考区总体情况•1.1.3中国大陆考区总体情况XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter41.1.1官方信息来源••Testtakerperformance2015XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter51.1.2全球三大考区总体情况XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter61.1.3中国大陆考区总体情况XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter71.2课程安排•雅思写作授课大纲•《雅思写作基础教材》•《剑桥系列》英国/欧盟英语雅思最低要求:•大本预科5分•本科课程5.5或6分•研究生课程和研究式课程为6.5或76.5分是研究生的英语资格分XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter91.3授课理念•动脑+动笔•没有理解，练习亦是枯燥•没有练习，理解亦是空白•课堂互动+作业提交雅思写作:试题结构20ms/40msPart2Part1Task1:Thechartshowsstudentexpenditureoverathree-yearperiodintheUnitedKingdom.Task2:Somepeoplebelievetherangeoftechnologyavailabletoindividualstodayisincreasingthegapbetweenpoorpeopleandrichpeople.Othersthinkitishavinganoppositeeffect。Discussthesepointsofview.Whatisyouropinion?XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter121.4小作文基本情况•1.4.1数据类图表题•1.4.1非数据类图表题XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter131.4.1数据类图表题•39/4881%•Line5•Pie8•Bar13•Table12•Combination1XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter141.4.1非数据类图表题•9/4819%•Map•Diagram•FlowXiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter151.5大作文基本情况•1.5.1议论类•1.5.2说明类XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter161.5.1议论类•Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion•Dotheadvantagesoutweighdisadvantages•怎样的观点“正确”？•怎样写顺手？XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter171.5.2说明类•Problem+Reasons+SolutionXiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter181.6分数计算分数构成Thatistosay…Overall=40%×task1+60%×task2Task1:8Task2:3Overall=3.2+1.8=54:6XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter191.7答题纸•12wordsperline•Task113linespage1-2•Task220linespage3-4•见好就收XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter201.8书写格式XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter21XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter22XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter231.9评分标准说明XiamenNOSIELTSResearchCenter24TA:TaskAchievement(任务完成)--1TR:TaskResponse(任务回应)--2CC:Coherence&Cohesion（内容连贯与篇章衔接）GRA:GrammaticalRangeandAccuracy（语法范围与精确性)IELTS写作新评分标准：LR:LexicalResource（词汇资源)语言能力思维能力自我定位图示5分5分6分TF/TA结构CC内容LR词汇GRA语法7分6分和7分作文描述7分6分TaskResponse(TR)•Addressesallpartsofthetask•Presentsaclearpositionthroughouttheresponse•Presents,extendsandsupportsmainideas,buttheremaybeatendencytoovergeneraliseand/orsupportingideasmaylackfocus•Addressesallpartsofthetaskalthoughsomepartsmaybemorefullycoveredthanothers•Presentsarelevantpositionalthoughtheconclusionsmaybecomeunclearorrepetitive•Presentsrelevantmainideasbutsomemaybeinadequatelydeveloped/unclearCoherenceandcohesion(CC)•Logicallyorganisesinformationandideas,thereisclearprogressionthroughout•Usesarangeofcohesivedevicesappropriatelyalthoughtheremaybesomeunder-/over-use•Presentsaclearcentraltopicwithineachparagraph•Arrangesinformationandideascoherentlyandthereisaclearoverallprogression•usescohesivedeviceseffectively,butcohesionwithinand/orbetweensentencesmaybefaultyormechanical•maynotalwaysusereferencingclearlyorappropriately•Usesparagraphing,butnotalwayslogically6分和7分作文描述7分6分Lexicalresources(LR)•usesasufficientrangeofvocabularytoallowsomeflexibilityandprecision•useslesscommonlexicalitemswithsomeawarenessofstyleandcollocation•mayproduceoccasionalerrorsinwordchoice,spellingand/orwordformation•usesanadequaterangeofvocabularyforthethask•attemptstouselesscommonvocabularybutwithsomeinaccuracy•makessomeerrorsinspellingand/orwordformation,buttheydonotimpedecommunicationGrammaticalrangeandaccuracy(GRA)•usesavarietyofcomplexstructures•producesfrequenterror-freesentences•Hasgoodcontrolofgrammarandpunctuationbutmaymakeafewerrors•usesamixofsimpleandcomplexsentenceforms•makessomeerrorsingrammarandpunctuationbuttheyrarelyreducecommunication考官考虑的额外因素•Off-topic•Underlength•No.ofwords•Memorised•Penalty•Illegible范文分析•分析考官写的一篇范文（9分），深入了解一下雅思作文的四个评分标准，来了解雅思大作文的题目模式和大概写成什么样子。•Itisimportantforchildrentolearnthedifferencebetweenrightandwrongatanearlyage.Punishmentisnecessarytohelpthemlearnthisdistinction.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?•Whatsortofpunishmentshouldparentsandteachersbeallowedtousetoteachgoodbehaviortochildren?范文•Oneimportantstageinachild’sgrowthiscertainlythedevelopmentofaconscience,whichislinkedtotheabilitytotellrightfromwrong.Thisskillcomeswithtimeandgoodparenting,andmyfirmconvictionisthatpunishmentdoesnothavemuchofaroletoplayinthis.ThereforeIhavetodisagreealmostentirelywiththegivenstatement.LR：这个词是良心，道德观的意思，属于展示词汇量的表达CC：使用限定词this，增加两个句子的联系TR：扣题，因为这个题目讨论的是惩罚是否能够帮助年轻人分辨对错范文•Tosomeextentthequestiondependsontheageofthechild.Topunishaveryyoungchildisbothwrongandfoolish,asaninfantwillnotunderstandwhatishappeningorwhyheorsheisbeingpunished.Oncetheageofreasonisreachedhowever,achildcanberewardedforgoodbehavioranddiscouragedfrombad.Thiskindbutfirmapproachwillachievemorethanharshpunishments,whichmightentailmanynegativeconsequencesunintendedbytheparents.TR：使用代词指代前面的infantCC：使用however这个连接词代表不同教育方法的对比GRA：比较句和定语从句构成复杂句，展示运用复杂语法的能力范文•Tohelpachildlearnthedifferencebetweenrightandwrong,teachersandparentsshouldfirstlyprovidegoodrolemodelingintheirownbehavior.Afterthat,ifsanctionsareneeded,thepunishmentshouldnotb