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MytemporaryteacherRosefromYuying-MiddleSchool,who............islookingforwardtoourcooperationandperfectperformance.Rosechen陈慧娇育英中学《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明》概要写作：提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。（满分25分）词数少于40的和多余80的，从总分中减去2分评分原则本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分第五档(21-25)理解准确,涵盖全部要点。能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑。完全使用自己的言语。﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏completecorrectcoherentconcise:nocopying4C原则completecorrectNarration（记叙文）Exposition（说明文）FormsofLiteratureArgumentation(议论文）WritingStepsfornarrationsummary????Whatformofpassageisit?MynameisHuaFeiandIamasportingrobotofthe23rdcentury.Iamanexpert…A.ArgumentationB.Aself-introduction（Narration）C.ExpositionWritingStep1:Readforform，keyinformationPara1：Basicinformationabouttherobot•Name:__________•When:____________________•Occupation:___________________•Ability:_______________________________•Prizewon:_____________________________HuaFeiInthe23rdcenturyAsportingrobotAnexpertat...,...turn,dive...Silvermedalinthe78thOlympicsWhoWhenWhat•Name:__________•When:____________________•Occupation:___________________•Ability:_______________________________•Prizewon:______________________________*BasicinformationaboutHuaFei:HuaFeiInthe23rdcenturyAsportingrobotAnexpertathighflyingexercisesSilvermedalinthe78thOlympics*mainidea(Para1):HuaFeiisasportingrobotofthe23rdcentury.Heisanexpertathighflyingexercises.Hetookpartinthe78thOlympicsandwonasilvermedal.Tips:1)writeitinthethirdperson.2)focusonthemainpointsandleaveoutexamples.•Reasonsforthefailure:____________________________________________________________para2-3：The79thOlympicsthatHuaFeitookpartin:Frightened;notconfident;Programmerfellill;Aproblemwith...WhyWritingStep1:Readforform，mainidea*mainidea(Para2-3):Beforethecompetition,hisprogrammerfell____.Knowingthis,HuaFeiwas__________andnolongerfelt_________.Inthedayofthecompetition,therewasaproblemwiththeparachute.Hefellfromtheskyandlanded________onamountain.•Reasonsforthefailure:________________________________________________________*Hisfailureinthe79thOlympics:Frightened;notconfident;illfrightenedconfidentheavilyProgrammerfellill;Aproblemwith...para4：ThetreatmentofHuaFei•Where:_________________________•Whathappened:_____________________________•Treatment:________________________________TwobrokenlegsandafragileheadlyinginhospitalbedTwonewlegsandabiggerheadHowWritingStep1:Readforform,keyinformationwhoHuaFeiwhenofthe23rdcenturywhere78thOlympic,79thOlympicwhatwinasilvermedalfailedwhyhisprogrammerfellillNolongerconfidentaproblemwithparachutehowgettreatment(withtwonewlegsandevenbiggerhead)WritingStep2:Makeasummary(narration's6factors)Howtopolishyoursummarytomeetthe4Crequirementsofcriteria•complete•correct•coherent•concise(nocopying)WritingStep2:Makeasummary(narration's6factors)WritingStep3:Polishthesentencestomeet4cstobeconcise(5skills)①InolongerfeltsoconfidentthatIwouldwin.同义词替换InolongerbelievemyselfthatIwouldsucceed/achieve.反义转换Ifeelnervous/worried/anxiousthatIwouldbedefeated/lose/fail.Iamlack/shortofconfidencethatIwouldwin.改变词性Writingstep3:Polishthesentencestomeet4cstobeconsise句型转换▲ThefactthatImightbedefeatedworriesme.▲Itisthepossibilityoflosingthatmakesmeanxious.▲IwassonervousthatImightlosethecompetition复合句、简单句的互换Haveadrill:rewritethefollowingmainideausingthefourskillsandtrytobeconcise(20wordsorso)Para1：HuaFeiisasportingrobotofthe23rdcentury.Heisanexpertathighflyingexercises.Hetookpartinthe78thOlympicsandwonasilvermedal.HuaFei,asportingrobotofthe23rdcentury,whoisgoodathighflying,gotasilvermedalinthe78thOlympics.WritingStep3:Polishthesentencestobeconcise,meet4cs•Para2-3：Beforethecompetition,hisprogrammerfellill.Knowingthis,HuaFeiwasandnolongerfeltconficent.Inthedayofthecompetition,therewasaproblemwiththeparachute.Hefellfromtheskyandlandedheavilyonamountain.Huafeiwasdefeatedinthe79thOlympicsforhisprogmmer'sillness,whichmakeshimnervous.What'stheworse,hisparachutewentwrong.WritingStep3:RewritethesentencesinotherwaysWritingstep3:Polishthesentencestobeconcise①HuaFei,asportingrobotofthe23rdcentury,whoisgoodathighflyingexercisesgotasilvermedalinthe78thOlympics.③Heisnowinhospitalwithtwobrokenlegsandfragileheadwhileheisstilllookingforwardtonextsuccess.AddtwolinkingwordstomakethepassagecoherentWritingstep4:Makethesummarycoherent②Huafeiwasdefeatedinthe79thOlympicsforhisprogmmer'sillness,whichmakeshimnervous.What'stheworse,hisparachutewentwrong.However/But/While/ThoughAsaresult/Thus/Therefore/SoWritingstep5:Revise(68words)HuaFei,asportingrobotofthe23rdcentury,whoisgoodathighflyingexercisesgotasilvermedalinthe78thOlympics.Huafeiwasdefeatedinthe79thOlympicsforhisprogmmer'sillness,whichmakeshimnervous.What'stheworse,hisparachutewentwrong.heisnowinhospitalwithtwobrokenlegsandfragileheadwhileheisstilllookingforwardtonextsuccess.4“C”:complete,correct,concise,coherentWritingStep6:Clearlycopyyourdrafttothepaper1.Read2.Makeasummarybasedon6elementsofnarration3.Polishtobeconciseandtomeet4cs4.Makeitcoherent5.Revise(4C)6.Neatlycopy