经典高考英语作文公开课

执教：汪建华（南通市高中英语学科带头人、江苏省高考英语优秀阅卷老师）（特色阅读教学&作文教学）QQ：315310858欢迎拍砖&交流！高考英语作文公开课IShallNotLiveInVain--EmilyDickinsonIfIcanstoponeheartfrombreaking,Ishallnotliveinvain;IfIcaneaseonelifetheaching,Orcoolonepain,OrhelponefaintingrobinUntohisnestagain,Ishallnotliveinvain.DailySpeechWhat’sthethemeofthepoem?70%76%67%62%0%10%20%30%40%50%60%70%80%韩国日本美国中国cartoonpostergraphphotoLet’sdevelopourwritingskillsincartoons!Whatisagoodwriting？Content:*everythingneededincludedwhichisrelatedtoyourview.(内容要完整)Structure:*Goodbeginningandending(好的开头结尾)*Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped(结构合理,行文流畅)Language:*NoChinglish(避免中文式英文)*NoGrammaticalmistakes(没有语法错误)*Withexactlyusedwordsandrelativelychangedsentencepatterns(词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)Howtowritebasedoncartoons?1.读图(topics)3.谋篇(organization)2.解意(theme)Ⅰ.读图：TopicsofcartoonsTopicsofcartoonsEnvironmentalproblemsAttitudestowardslifeSocialphenomenonⅡ.解意(Theme)-----tothepointAttention:文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues),切记要认真阅读！！！1.辨明褒贬，找准角度(angle)２.联系生活，明晰主旨(theme)ThecomparisonindicatesthephenomenonofeducationinequalityinmodernChina.Example1角度comparison主旨educationinequalityExample2角度criticize主旨Studentsandparentsonlyfocusontheiracademicachievements,neglectingpsychologicalqualityandmoralstandards.Judgethethemesofthefollowingcartoonsasquicklyaspossible.Let’shaveacompetitionComeon!Chooseme!213546Peoplelackcommunication.Picture1Protectanimals.Nobuying,nokilling.Picture2Peoplecan’taffordheavymedicalfees.Picture3Onefalsemovemaylosethegame.Thinktwicebeforewedoanything.Picture4Moneycan’tbuyeverything.Healthisthebestwealth.Picutre5Picture6Childrensufferfromtooheavyburden.Ⅲ.谋篇---OrganizationStep1.DescriptionDescribewhatyouhaveseeninthepicturebriefly.Step2.AnalysisFigureouttheinnermeaningofthepicture.Step3.SolutionsGiveyourideasaboutthepicture.发现问题解决问题分析问题Step1DescriptionTowhatdegreeshouldwedescribethecartoon?Properly,brieflyExampleacountryboycryinglongforeducationacityboyenjoyallthebenefitsofeducationAsisvividlyshowninthepicture,Ascanbeseeninthepicture,Inthepicture,thereare………Sentencestructures:acountryboycryinglongforeducationacityboyenjoyallthebenefitsofmoderneducationAsisvividlyshowninthepicture,Ascanbeseeninthepicture,Inthepicture,thereare………acountryboyiscryinghelplesslyinthedarkness,longingeagerlyforschooleducation.Incontrast,thecityboyontherightisenjoyingallthebenefitsofmoderneducation.Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,Step2Analysis(联系实际分析)(facts/reasons/results…)Clues：描述一下他们的不同境遇，并就如何解决此问题发表你的看法。(referringtothegivenChinesewords)Indicate:educationinequalityFacts:dropoutofschoolsufferfromlowstandardsof…comparativelybetteropportunitiesResults:lowerenrollmentratesinruralcountryworsentheproblemSentencestructures:1.Readingthecartoon,wethinkofacommonphenomenonofoursociety.2.Itseemsveryridiculousthat…However,itisverycommoninourdailylife.3.Thepictureshowsthat…Itistheexactreflectionof…4.Thepictureindicatesthatwe…/Nowadays,itisacommonphenomenonthat…5.……Indicate:educationinequalityFacts:dropoutofschoolsufferfromlowstandardsof…comparativelybetteropportunitiesResults:lowerenrollmentratesinruralcountryworsentheproblemSentencestructures:1.Readingthecartoon,wethinkofacommonphenomenonofoursociety.2.Itseemsveryridiculousthat…However,itisverycommoninourdailylife.3.Thepictureshowsthat…Itistheexactreflectionof…4.Thepictureindicatesthatwe…/Nowadays,itisacommonphenomenonthat…ThecomparisonindicatesthephenomenonofeducationinequalityinmodernChina.(facts)School-agecountrychildrenareoftendroppingoutofschoolduetopoverty.Eventhosewhomanagetostayinschoolarestillsufferingfromthelowstandardsofeducationalfacilities.Comparatively,citychildrenhavemuchbetteropportunitiestoreceivegoodeducation.(results)Thus,schoolsinthecountrysidegenerallyhavemuchlowerenrollmentratesthanthoseinthecity,whichinturnworsenstheproblem.Step3Solutions(youropinions/suggestions)thegovernmentallcitizensIndividual(从大到小)beawareofOnlyinthiswaysocialjusticeharmonioussociety(从意识到行动)1.AsfarasI’mconcerned,/Inmyopinion,/Frommypointofview,…2.Itishightimewetooksomemeasurestoputanendtothisphenomenon./Immediatemeasuresshouldbetakento…3.Thegovernmentshouldmakelawsto…4.Weshouldraisepeople’sawarenessof…5.Everyoneshouldmakegreateffortsto…Onlyinthiswaycanwe…Sentencestructures:Canyouthinkofsomesentencestructurestoformyourlastparagraph?Sentencestructures:1.AsfarasI’mconcerned,/Inmyopinion,/Frommypointofview,…2.Itishightimewetooksomemeasurestoputanendtothisphenomenon./Immediatemeasuresshouldbetakento…3.Thegovernmentshouldmakelawsto…4.Weshouldraisepeople’sawarenessof…5.Everyoneshouldmakegreateffortsto…thegovernmentallpeoplebeawareofOnlyinthiswaysocialjusticeharmonioussocietyFrommypointofview,tosolvethisproblem,thegovernmentshouldspendmoremoneyontheimprovementofeducationinruralareas.Moreover,allcitizensinthecommunityshouldbeawareoftheseriousnessoftheproblemanddowhatevertheycantohelp.Onlyinthiswaycanwehavemoresocialjusticeandthushaveamoreharmonioussociety.Whateverthepictureis,justremember:ProperdescriptionAccurateanalysisReasonablesolutionsOnlyifwekeeptheserulesinmindcanwemakeit.Conclusion:巧用衔接词引用公式化语言转换优化优美