高三英语作文公开课-如何使你的作文颜值与才华齐飞

TheBeautyofWriting欣赏一个人，始于颜值，敬于才华,…Howaboutacomposition?欣赏一篇文章始于“颜值”敬于“才华”作文五档：（从教师阅卷印象角度划分）漂漂亮亮（21—25分）有模有样（16—20分）马马虎虎（11—15分）稀里糊涂（6—10分）一塌糊涂（0—5分）颜值代表唐美林22.5黄佳倩21高“颜值”的文章能够评委老师留下好印象，先声夺人。但是“好文章”却不仅限于只有“颜值”，…….才华词汇句型衔接过渡回顾作文题目假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Andy即将到你所在的中学做一年的交换生，想提前了解一些情况，故向你求助。请给他写一封回信，提供有关天气、当地饮食习惯、学校生活方面的信息。高级表达过渡词非限制性定语从句谚语宾语从句动名词做主语唐美林22.5Itgoeswithoutsayingthatourclassmateisextremelywarm-heartedandopen-minded.Ifirmlybelievethatyouwillhaveacolorfulandmeaningfulschoollifehere.陈梅Andourschooloftenholdactivitiestoenrichourschoollife,sowehaveameaningfulandcolorfulschoollife.Topromoteourfriendship,Iwillkeepagoodrelationshipwithyou.Ibelieveyoucanfitinourschoollife……陈小露怎样能使我们的文章颜值与才华齐飞？Tips1：颜值★1、分段要合理。绝大多数高考范文以及高分作文都是分为2~3段的，也有少数是4-5段的。★2、书写要美观。书写要符合英文书写习惯，字母的大小，字母之间的距离要匀称，尽量减少涂改、增补的现象。Tips2：词汇1、高级词汇代替低级词汇chance---opportunity;so---thereforeimportant---vital2、短语代替单个单词important---beofgreatimportanceshould---besupposedtohelpsb---dosbafavorvisit---payavisitto可参考三维设计P136页Tips3：句型定语从句宾语从句非谓语动词被动句名词性从句强调句With的复合结构常用谚语省略句倒装句…….Thereisnodoubtthat...Itgoeswithoutsayingthat毫无疑问,……Thereisnodoubtthat/Itgoeswithoutsayingthatmoreandmorestudentschoosetostudyabroad.Moreandmorestudentschoosetostudyabroad.固定句型：同位语从句MoreattentionshouldbegiventoteachingandlearningEnglish.Measuresshouldbetakentoprotectourmotherriver.固定句型：被动句Moreattentionshouldbegivento……Measuresshouldbetakento……Itisbelievedthat...Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat.....人们认为Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthathealthismoreimportantthanwealth.Healthismoreimportantthanwealth.固定句型：主语从句Onlyinthiswaycansbdo….Onlybydoing...cansbdo....只有通过这种方式我们才能....Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.Onlybytakingexercisecanwekeephealthy.固定句型：倒装句IfIwereyou,Iwould……IfIwereyou,Iwouldtakepartinmoreactivities.固定句型：虚拟语气Itishightimethatsbdidsth/shoulddosthItishightimethatwepaid/shouldpaymoreattentiontoourenvironment1、Itis/was+被强调部分+that/who+其余成分固定句型：强调句2、Itis/wasnotuntil……that……3、用do来强调动词Ibelieveyoucandoit.Idobelieveyoucandoit.Ourteacheralwayshelpuswhenweareintrouble.Itisourteacherthatalwayshelpuswhenweareintrouble.我认为......Iamconvincedthat….AsfarasIamconcerned,…..Frommypointofview,…..FromwhereIstand,……谚语格言名言1、Afriendinneedisafriendindeed2、Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.3、WheninRoam,doasaRomansdo.4、Practicemakesperfect.5、Nopains,nogains.6、Failureisthemotherofsuccess.7、Roamwasnotbuildinaday.8、Everycoinhastwosides.……Asanoldsayinggoes,“……”firstly,secondly,thirdly,then,finally,intheend,what’smore,moreover,moreimportantly,besides，inadditiononeonhand,ontheotherhand，onthecontrary，therefore，asaresult，inotherwords，asyouknow,asweallknow,generallyspeaking,asamatteroffacttotellyouthetruth……Tips4：衔接过渡可能整篇不完美，也许有一个段落应得称赞；没有一个段落完美，也许有一个句子值得肯定；没有一句子完美，也许有一个词用得精彩。Nevergiveup!!!Aslongasyoukeeptrying,youcansucceed.Haveatry:DearAndy,I’mgladtohearthatyouarecomingtostudywithusforayearasanexchangestudent.It’smygreathonortoprovideyousomeinformationaboutourcityandourschool,hopingitcanhelpyou.ThereisnodoubtthatourcountryisdifferentfromAmerica,thereforeitisnecessaryforyoutorespectthelocalcustomandgetaccustomedtothelifehere.Inthefirstplace,theweatherhereischangeable.Itiswiseforyoutotakeanumbrellawhenyougoout.Inaddition,ourcityhasareputationforitsdeliciousfood.Notonlycanyouenjoythetastyseafood,butalsovariousfruits.However,weallusechopsticks,whichisextremelydifficultforforeigners.Lastbutnotleast,ourschoolisafantasticplacewithmanyafterclassactivities.ourteachersandclassmatesareratherkindandfriendly,youcanturntothemforhelp.Lookingforwardtomeetingyou.Yours,LiHua欣赏一个人，始于颜值，敬于才华，合与性格，久于善良，终于人品。Ihopeallofyoucanbeabetterperson.HomeworkPolishyourcomposition.