英语专四作文培训(TEM4 Writing)

TEM-4Writing命题作文满分15分，分五个等级，14分、11分、8分、5分和2分，可以酌情加一或减一分，但不得加或减半分专四作文评分标准14-15分内容切题,完整,条理清楚,文章结构严谨,语法正确,语言通顺恰当,句式用词富有变化,有闪光点基本无语言错误.11-13分内容切题,完整,条理清楚,文章结构严谨,语法正确,语言通顺恰当,少量语法错误8-10分内容基本切题,完整,条理基本清楚,文章结构基本严谨,语法基本正确,语言基本通顺恰当.少量严重错误,一些词使用不当.5-7分内容基本切题,完整,条理不够清楚,教明显的母语痕迹.较多语言错误,许多词使用不当.2-4分内容偏题,不完整,思路混乱,语句不完整,只有少数句子可以理解,词汇拼写错误严重.①审题并列出提纲（约5分钟）②开始写:（1）切题（2）干净（3）少犯错误（4）开门见山（5）闪光点（约20分钟）③交卷前检查（1）拼写错误（2）语法错误等（约5分钟）审题December5thisInternationalVolunteersDay.Since1985,whentheUnitedNationsannouncedthespecialday,tensofmillionsofpeoplearoundtheworldhavevolunteeredtohelpthoseinneed.Chinanowhas4.5millionregisteredvolunteerswhohaveprovidedmorethan4.5billionhoursofvolunteerwork.Whatcanyougainfromvolunteering?WriteonANSWERSHEETTWOacompositionofabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic:TheBenefitsofVolunteeringYouaretowriteinthreeparts.Inthefirstpart,statespecificallywhatyouropinionis.Inthesecondpart,supportyouropinionwithappropriatedetails.Inthelastpart,bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionorasummary.写作三段式作文各部分的主题句在首段能有有气势的开篇句注意中间拓展段和结论段的段首句和层次感，特别是中间段多用连接词结论段工整，能恰到好处地变换句子来重复总结观点书写笔记工整检查应注意以下几个方面:①主语是正确的吗?（名词，代词，动名词，不定式，that+句子)②谓语动词是一个吗?（每句话一个）这个动词时态、语态、语气正确吗?若是在shall，will，must，may，can等情态或助动词后，用原形了吗?除了这个谓语之外的其它动词消掉了吗?（使用动词的非谓语形式）③主语与谓语一致吗?④及物动词或介词后，使用宾语的形式了吗?⑤定语或状语的位置放的合理吗?⑥从句的引导词使用恰当吗?⑦单词有没有拼写错误?最易错的句子Therearestillmanypeoplethinkweshouldnottakeitforgranted.Asmoreandmoremigrantsfloodingintocities,moreandmorepeoplebegintoquestionthepositiveeffect.MakeFormentalpowerissoimportanttousthatourcollegeshouldtakeitsresponsibilitytochangethesituation.Recently,ithasbecomeahotlydiscussissuewhichisabestchoiceforustolearnfrombook.Whetherweshouldbuybooksorborrowbooksfromothers?Aimingtoachievethisgoal,moreandmoreextracurricularactivitiesarecarriedout.Youcanbemoreawareofwhatahappylifeyouarelivingandbecomemorecherishitsoastostudyandworkharder.可以多用的句型…,while…thosewho…,which…Thosewhoareinfavorofartisticandculturalprojectsadvocatethatculturalenvironmentwillattractmoretourists,whichwillbringhugeprofitstolocalresidents.Thefactthat…(hasbeenbroughtintofocus.)Despitethefactthat…/N.,….Weshould…instead.itisnotalwaysthecase.Isitreallythecase?Acaseinpointis…Itisessential/imperative/advisable/desirablethat…Propermeasuresmustbetakentolimitthe…andthegreateffortsshouldbemadetoprotect…fromtheharmfuleffectsof….启Aproverbsays......Atpresent.......Astheproverbsays....Currently.....Generallyspeaking,....Now....Ingeneral,.....OntheWhole....Itisclearthat....Recently.....Itisoftensaidthat....Withoutdoubt,.......承First(ofall),......Moreover,.........Firstly,............Noonecandenythat....Inthefirstplace,.........Obviously.....Tobeginwith,.........Ofcourse,.........Also,.......Similarly,.........Atthesametime......Therefore,weshouldrealizethat.....Certainly......Thereisnodoubtthat.......Inaddition,.....What`smore,..........Infact........Itcanbeeasilyprovedthat...Meanwhile......转But...Still,......Buttheproblemisnotsosimple...Thereisacertainamountoftruthinthis,butwestillhaveaproblemwithregardto.......However,.......Tooursurprise,..........Nevertheless,........Unfortunately.......Ontheotherhand,.......YetdifferencewillbefoundandthatiswhyIfeelthat........Othersmayfindthistobetrue,butIdonot.Ithink.....合Aboveall,Inbrief,........Accordingly,.....Inconclusion,........Allinall,.......Inotherwords,itishardtoescapetheconclusionthat........Asaconsequence,.........Inshort,.........AsIhaveshown/said/stated/....Insum,........Insummary,.......Ashasbeennoted,....Obviously,.........Bysodoing,.....Onthewhole,.....Consequently,........Presumably,.......Eventually,.........Toconclude,......Finally,........Tosumup,.....Inaword,......Tosummarize,........1.增补(Addition)inaddition,furthermore,again,also,besides,moreover,what'smore,similarly,next,finally.2.比较(Comparison)inthesameway,likewise,similarly,equally,incomparison,justas3.对照(Contrast)whereas,incontrast,ontheotherhand,instead,however,nevertheless,unlike,eventhough,onthecontrary,while4.因果(Causeandeffect)because,becauseof,for,since,dueto,owingto,thanksto,asaresult(of),accordingly,hence,so,thus5.强调(Emphasis)certainly,aboveall,indeed,ofcourse,surely,actually,asamatteroffact,chiefly,especially,primarily,inparticular,undoubtedly,absolutely,mostimportant6.让步(Concession)although,though,afterall,inspiteof,nevertheless,still,provided,whileitistrue....7.例证(Exemplification)forexample,forinstance,thatis,namely,suchas,inotherwords,inthiscase,bywayofillustration.8.总结(Conclusion)tosumup,toconclude,inaword,inshort,inbrief,allinall,inall,toputitinanutshell,insummary9.推断(Inference)therefore,asaresult(of),consequently,accordingly,so,otherwise10.时间和空间(Timeandspace)afterward,after,first,later,then,soon,outside,near,beyond,above,below,ontheright(left),inthemiddle,opposite,infrontof历年英语专业四级作文1997MorePressurefromAcademicStudiesDoes(OrDoesNo)GoodtoUs1998OneWaytoSolvetheProblem1999AMajorAdvantage/DisadvantageofAdvertisingonTelevision2000TheImportanceofExtracurricularActivities2001TravelBroadensOurMind2002TheB