英语四级作文点评

评分标准2—条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误5---基本切题.表达思想不清楚,连贯性差.有较多的严重语言错误8—基本切题.有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯,语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误.11—切题.表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误14—切题.表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯,基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错.A.给出的主题句,起始句结束句不计入字数.B.字数不足应酌情扣分,十字一分.C.规定的内容未写完者,按比例扣分.切题.表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯,基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错.1没有严重的语法错误2使用插入语，有效地采用了多种衔接手法,文字连贯,层次清晰，3词汇准确，丰富，句型多变，（长短句交叉）June2008WillE-booksReplaceTraditionalBooks?1.随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多2.有人认为电子图书会取代传统图书，理由是……3.我的看法Dec.2007Thedigitalage1.如今，数字化产品越来越多，如…2.使用数字化产品对于人们学习工作和生活的影响。June2007Writing：Shouldoneexpectarewardwhendoingagooddeed1.有的人认为应该有回报2.另外的人认为应该象雷锋一样不要回报3.我的看法Dec.2006TheImportanceofReadingClassics阅读经典著作的重要性outlines1、阅读经典著作对人的成长至关重要2、现在人们越来越少阅读经典著作，原因是……3、作为大学生，你应该怎么做Similarities1.Describeaphenomenon2.Analyzethequestionbeingdiscussed3.Youridea/Usingreasonsorexamplestosupportyouridea议论文的类型和写作模板1.分析/解决问题型要求考生针对给出的现象/问题进行论述.题目所给的问题大多是当今社会的热门话题.考生要分析问题的原因或危害,并提出解决问题的建议/或者表明自己的看法。2008/062006/12第一段应先提出问题.第二段详细阐述造成该问题的原因，或它造成的危害.第三段提出相应的解决问题的办法.Today,_____hasbecomeaseriousproblemwhichcanbeseeneverywhere,suchas_________.Somepeoplethinkthat__________.Theyusually___________.Sotheydon’tpaymuchattentiontoit.Butthetruthisthat_________.Howcanwegetridofthisproblem?Ithinktherearesomemethods.Firstly,_______.Secondly,________.Thirdly,_____.Inaword,if______,itwillnotbeaprobleminthefuture.2.评论型评论型议论文要求考生对某一事物或社会现象进行客观地分析和评论.评论型的作文主要用于不能简单以好或不好下定论的事物,如评论互联网,广告,私家车等.2007/12三段构成在文章的开篇引出题目要求评论的事物或现象;然后分几点详细阐述这一事物的正反两个方面;最后对全文进行总结并给出自己的见解.patternItisverycommoninourlivesthat____.Theattitudestowardthisissuevaryfrompersontoperson.SomepeoplearguethatAistheirfavorite,butsomeotherpeopledonotagreewiththem.Foritisobviousthat____hasitsadvantagesaswellasdisadvantages.Tobeginwith,-----.Furthermore,____.Lastbutnotleast,_____.Inshort/Since_____,weshould_____.3.观点对立型就某一事物或社会现象给出两个对立的观点,要求考生将两种观点进行对比,然后表明自己的看法和立场.2007/06通常分为三段:第一段引出有争议的两个观点;第二段分别进行详细论述(也可分段论述);最后一段总结自己的观点.patternsWhentalkingabout-----,people’sopinionsdiffer.Somepeoplethinkthat____isgood/agoodway.Butothersmaynotagree.Theyemphasizethat_____.Thosewhothinkthat______believethat___.Andthen_____.Whatismore,_____.Therefore,wemust_______.Frommypointofview/AsfarasIamconcerned,weshould------.Thereisnodenyingthefactthat_____hasbeenahotlydebatedtopicrecentyearsinChina.People’sviewsdiffersharplyonthisissue.Somepeoplethink___.Butothersholdthat_____.Myownpointofviewisthatbothsideshavesomethingright.(分别论述).Thebestpolicy,asIseeit,istoimprove____特殊功能段落或句型1现象/现状说明段Intheeraofinformationandtechnology,thereareallkindsofrecreationalactivities.Somepeoplethinkthoserecreationalactivitiesaregreatandnecessary,becausetheycanhelppeoplerelaxfromthehardworkandstudy.Someoftheactivities,suchashiking,jogging,canhelppeoplerelaxphysically;whilesomeofthem,suchassurfingtheInternet,canhelppeoplerelaxmentally.Anewerahascome.Withthemassproductionofelectronicdevicesandapplicationofnewtechnologies,mankindhasenteredan“e”age.Nowadays,wehavee-mails,e-tickets,e-tests,ande-books,andconsequently,paper-basedmaterialsgraduallyvanish.Nowadays,e-booksbecomeextremelypopularamongyoungsters,whiletraditionalonesseemsufferagreatlossoftheirreaders.ThenumberofE-booksisconstantlyontheriseasaresultofrapiddevelopmentofinformationandtechnology.ItisthoughtbysomepeoplethatE-booksmightreplacethetraditionalbooksinsometimebecauseofvariousadvantagesofE-booksoverpaperones.Recentdecadeshaveseenrapiddevelopmentofinformationandtechnology,andtherebyE-bookshavewoundedtheirwayintoourdailylife.BecauseofthewideandquickpopularityofE-books,therehasbeenanincreasingcontroversyoverthequestionwhetherE-bookswillreplacetraditionalbooksornot.Withtheadvancementofscienceandtechnology,there’sasteadyincreaseinthenumberofE-books,orelectronicbooks.Someexpertshaveclaimedthatthesebookswillbeprevalent,thusrenderingalltraditionaloneindisuse,however,otherauthoritiesmaintainthatthetraditionalbooksareheretostay.Frommyperspective,I’mfirmlysidedwiththeformer.句型原因列举段2.有人认为电子图书会取代传统图书，理由是……Forsomepeople,electronicandinternetbasedbooksareconvenientandaccessible.Environmentalistsevenadvocatethebenefitofe-booksonthegroundofforestprotection.E-booksloversevenassertthattraditionalbookswilldisappearinthenearfuture.Agreatvarietyofreasonsareheldbypeoplewiththeaboveviewpointinwhicheconomyisthekeyfactortomakesuchpredictionattainable.Tostartwith,sinceallE-bookswouldbedownloadedfromtheInternet,mostofwhicharefreefromcharge,whereaspapersbooksinbookstorearerelativelyexpensive.Besides,thepopularityofE-bookswillreduceoreveravoidthewasteofpaper.Finally,E-bookscanbeeasilystoredinourcomputerorotherportablediskswhilepaperbooksusuallyoccupytoomuchspaceonourshelves.ManypeopleholdtheideathatitwillnottakelongforE-bookstoreplacetraditionalbooksbecauseE-bookshavequiteafewadvantagesovertraditionalones.First,E-booksaremoreaccessibletoreadersbecausetheyjustneedtologontotheInternetandreadonline.Second,thankstotheadvancedtechnology,thecostofE-booksaremuchlower,soittakesreadersfarlessmoneytobuyE-books.Lastbutnotleast,readingE-bookshas