初中英语作文常见错误及修改

初中英语作文的修改错句分析1.Myfatherandmymotherisallteacher。2.IhappyIcancometoBeijingzoo。Myfatherandmymotherarebothteachers。IamhappyIcancometoBeinjingzoo。3.Theapplescheap.I'lltakesome。4.becauseheavyrainwecan'tholdthesportsmeeting。Theapplesarecheap.I'lltakesome。becauseoftheheavyrainwecan'tholdthesportsmeeting。5.ImotherandIwenttotheshoptobuyapresentforifather。6.Manystudentshaveahardtimepassingalltheteststogetintocollege.forexample,myfriendinhighschool。。MymotherandIwenttotheshoptobuyapresentformyfather。Manystudentshaveahardtimepassingalltheteststogetintocollege,forexample,myfriendinhighschool.7.whenonehaveknowledge,hecandowhathewanttodo。(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么。)8.whenIgettothestationthetrainleave。whenonehasknowledge,hecandowhathewants(todo)whenIgottothestationthetrainhadleft。9.Hisfather'sbodyisstrong.他父亲身体很好。10.thetimefellsleeping就寝时间Hisfatherisstrong.thesleepingtime11.Ourgotoschooltimeis8：00.上学时间是8：00。12.Shelikeitverymuchandreadsittotheclass.她很喜欢它并且读给同学们听。Wegotoschoolateight.Shelikeditverymuchandreadittotheclass.13.Hegavemeaverygoodadviceyesterday.昨天他给我一个非常好的建议。14.Onceonehavemoney，hecandowhathewanttodo.人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么就干什么Hegavemeapieceofverygoodadviceyesterday.Onceonehasmoney，hecandowhathewantstodo.名词的单复数问题：1.…Joyfoundtherewasmuchfishinthelake.2.Thewaterwassoclearthattheycouldseeallkindsoffish.3.Manyplaceareverydry.…Joyfoundthereweremanyfishinthelake.Thewaterwassoclearthattheycouldseeallkindsoffishes.Manyplacesareverydry.主谓一致问题1.Andnowmanyriversbecomesverydirty.2.Everythingaregoingverywell.3.DavidwithhislittlebrothergototheparkeverySunday.4.Thereareamanteacherandtwowomenteachersintheoffice.Andnowmanyriversbecomeverydirty.Everythingisgoingverywell.DavidwithhislittlebrothergoestotheparkeverySundayThereisamanteacherandtwowomenteachersintheoffice.时态和语态问题1.HermotherjumpedintothelakeandswimedtoJoy.AtlasthermothersavedJoy.Theywereallgotwet.2.Tom’smotherjumpedintothewater.Shesavesherdaughteratlast.3.OnTreePlantingDay,manytreesplantedinYonganPark.HermotherjumpedintothelakeandswamtoJoy.AtlasthermothersavedJoy.Theyallgotwet.OnTreePlantingDay,manytreeswereplantedinYonganPark.Tom’smotherjumpedintothewater.Shesavedherdaughteratlast.4.The29thOlympicGameswillholdinChina.The29thOlympicGameswillbeheldinChina.Chinglish现象1.LastSunday,Annwithhermotherandbrotherwenttoapark.Theparkwithalake.2.IandmyclassmatesbybustoDayangForeignLanguageSchool.LastSunday,Annwenttoaparkwithhermotherandbrother.Therewasalakeinthepark.MyclassmatesandItookabustoDayangForeignLanguageSchool.行文的逻辑性问题1.Atonce,shejumpedintothewatertosaveherdaughterwithhermother’shelp.2.Butshewasn’tcareful,sothatshefellintotheriver.Atonce,shejumpedintothewatertosaveherdaughter.Shewasn’tcareful,andshefellintotheriver.词类错用1.WhenIwassadly,Iplayedwithit.WhenIwashappily,Iplayedwithit.2.Allofusareexcitedinit.Becauseitcanmakewehappyandhealthy.WhenIwassad,Iplayedwithit.WhenIwashappy,Iplayedwithit.Allofusareexcitedaboutit.Becauseitcanmakeushappyandhealthy.典型病例名词的单复数问题主谓一致问题时态和语态问题Chinglish现象行文的逻辑性问题词类错用请你当老师书面表达自行车在北京仍然受欢迎，骑车上学或上班都很方便。如今越来越多的人……这使得……。骑车既可以……，又可以……。那么你更喜欢哪种交通工具呢？为什么？请你当老师BicyclearestillpopularonthestreetsinBeijing.It’seasytobybikegotoschoolorgotowork.Nowmoreandmorepeopleplantobuycarsinsteadofbike.ButIthinkthatrunningcarsmakeairdirty.Itwasharmfultoourhealth.Ridingbicyclescanhelppeoplekeephealthy,andenergycanbesave.Becauseridingbikeswillalwaysmakemehappy,soIprefertogotoschoolbybike.Pleasereaditcarefully,thenfindthemistakesandcorrectthem.BicyclesarestillpopularonthestreetsinBeijing.It’seasytogotoschoolorgotoworkbybike.Nowmoreandmorepeopleplantobuycarsinsteadofbikes.ButIthinkthatrunningcarsmakesairdirty.Itisharmfultoourhealth.Ridingbicyclescanhelppeoplekeephealthy,andenergycanbesaved.Becauseridingbikeswillalwaysmakemehappy,Iprefertogotoschoolbybike.句子开头要大写，每句之后有标点；前句句末用逗号，后句开头用小写；前句句末用句号，后句开头要大写；记住书写须清楚，因为里面有分数；先草稿，后定稿，书写歌谣记牢靠。HomeworkWriteacomposition：AlettertoMrZhang今天，新泰市汶城中学的张老师给你们上了一堂英语作文课，他和你们一起讨论,发现错误并修改错误，教给你们写好作文的技巧(Writingtechnique)，她的课对你们写作能力的提高很有帮助。请你给她写一封感谢信。Thankyou15.Waterwillboilat100℃(degreesCentigrade.).水在100℃沸腾。析：表示客观真理的句子，其谓语动词应用一般现在时。16.Icandance.Itoocansing.我会跳舞，也会唱歌。Waterboilsat100℃.Icandance.Icansingtoo.或Icandanceandsingtoo.17.Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety.Forexample，byTVradio，newspaperandsoon.有许多方式来了解这个社会，例如通过电视、广播、报纸等等。18.Attheageoften，mygrandfatherdied.在我10岁时，我祖父去世了。析：本句后半部分Forexample，byTV，radio，newspaperandsoon不是一个完整的句子，仅仅是一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句。正：Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety，forexample，byTV，radio，andnewspaperandsoon.析：attheageoften只指出10岁时祖父去世了，但没有说明是“谁”10岁时。按一般的推理不可能是mygrandfather。正：WhenIwasattheageoften，mygrandfatherdied.19.Fewpeoplecanaroundtheworld.很少人能周游世界。20.Theplaceisdanger.这个地方危险。析：around是副词，这里误当动词用。正：Fewpeoplecantravelaroundtheworld.析：danger是名词，这里误用为形容词。正：Theplaceisdangerous.或Theplaceisindanger.21.Wealwaysworkingtilllateatnightbeforetakingexams。(误)22.Weshouldreadbooksmaybeusefultous.(误)Wearealwaysworking/Wealwaysworktilllateatnightbeforetakingexams(正)Weshouldreadbookswhichmaybeusefultous.(正)23.Thistestisend,butthereisanotherte