英语专业四级作文写作指南

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三段式的作文写作手法综述作文常见的开头形式大致有以下几种:1)开门见山,点明主题在“WideningGapBetweentheRichandthePoor”(日益拉大的贫富差距)的范文的开头一句是:Thesedaysweoftenhearaboutthewideninggapbetweentherichandthepoor.2)正反表态法例如,1999年的专四作义考题“AMajorAdvantage/DisadvantageofAdvertisingonTelevision”(电视广告的一个主要优点/缺点)可以采用正反表态的方法开篇:NowadaysmoreandmoreadvertisementsareseenonTVeveryday.SomepeoplethinkthatadvertisingonTVcanbringusalotofbenefits,butothersholdthedifferentopinions.Inmyopinion.Iaminfavoroftheformer.在“WhereWouldYouGoafterGraduation?”(大学毕业后到何处发展?)的范文的开头一段采用了正反表态法:Aftergraduation,somestudentschoosetogotosupercitiesforcareerdevelopment.Meanwhile,somestudentsprefertoreturntotheirhometowns.Asforme,Iwouldliketogobacktomyhomecity.1)“一些人认为”——Some无数的numerous/myriad(anumber/myriadof)大量的Aconsiderable/significant/noticeableamount/quantity/portionof对半的almost/nearly/approximatelyhalfof大多的the(vast/overwhelming)majorityof“一些人认为”——people公众thepublic各行各业peoplefromallwalksoflife/community/education/background支持/反对者followers–objectors;consenters–dissenters参与者participants/candidates/interviewees“一些人认为”——think认为assume/claim/declare/assert/state/insist/maintainthat…支持express/show/demonstrateone’ssupportfor赞成/反对castone’sballotfor/against;standonthesideof意见是one’sviewpointisthat/bewiththeviewthat导致利弊Advantage/disadvantage;merit/drawback;blessing/curse;benefit/harm;outweighleadto,contributeto,resultin,bringabout,giveriseto…owingto,dueto,thanksto,resultfrom,inthat,attributeto…句式Manypeopleconsideritappropriatethatmoreemphasisshouldbeputonthedevelopmentofstudents’capacityforreasoningandlogicalthinking,whileothersthinkthatmorebenefitswouldbegainedfromaneducationthatalsotaughtthemtoexploretheirownemotions.Thosewho…arguethat…whileotherswho…claimthat…3)让步法也称为先抑后扬法,先把反方观点引出来,做一个肯定的评价,然后笔锋一转,回到自己的观点上来。比较适用于“对比选择型”题目。例如,2004年的专四作文考题“WillPhonesKillLetterWriting'?”(电话是否会使书信消失?)的开头可以采用让步法:Nowadays,youngpeoplechoosetophoneeachotherratherthanwriteletters.Someareworriedthatletterwritingwillbeuselessinthefuture.Evenso,Istillmaintainthatletterwritingwillneverbekilledbyphones,despitethefactthatwehavealreadysteppedintotheinformationage.再如,在“DegreeandUniversityStudy”(学位与大学学习)的范文的开头一段采用了先抑后扬的手法,首先肯定学位的重要性,然后提出了“学位并不是大学学习的一切”这样的观点:Inoursociety,themostcommonlyrecognizedstandardofastudent’sacademicachievementisthedegree.Consequentlysomepeopleregardthedegreeastheonlythingvaluablewhilestudyingincollege.Admittedly,thedegreeisessentialforstudentswhowantaprosperousfuture,butitisbynomeanstheonlypurposeatuniversity.4)背景法即对一个现象进行分析时,先把这个现象事件的原因、结果、发展等背景信息介绍一下,然后再给出自己的看法。这种写法适合“给定观点型”和“自由发挥型”。例如,2003年的专四作文考题“TheImportanceofKeepingaGoodMood”(保持良好心态的重要性)可以采用如下一段作为开头,先介绍背景,然后提出观点:Themodernsocietyischaracterizedbyrapidpace,andpeopleinsuchasocietyhavetocopewithalotofpressuresfromeitherouterworldorinnerwill.Themostdifficult,butnecessarythingforthemistokeepagoodmoodunderwhatevercircumstances.再如1998年的专四作文考题“OneWaytoSolvetheProblem”(解决问题的一个方法)的首段可以先介绍机动车是城市污染的主要来源,接下来亮出自己的观点发展公共交通:Vehiclesareamajorsourceofairpollutionincities.Inmyopinion,thesolutiontothispollutionproblemisdevelopingthemodernpublictransportation.再如,在“HowtoDealwiththeProblemofUnemployment”(怎样处理失业的问题)的范文的开头一段:Inrecentyears,Chinahasexperiencedanalarmingincreaseinunemploymentrate.Unemploymentismorethananeconomicproblem.Ifitwerenothandledproperly,itwouldresultinserioussocialproblems.Effectivemeasuresmustbetakentosolvetheunemploymentproblem.5)提问式要讨论什么就先把话题以问句形式提出,然后通过回答问题表达自己的观点。或者,对自己的观点做个理由概述/先写出反方观点,对其进行反驳,顺势提出自己的观点。比较适用于“对比选择型”题目。例如,在“FactorsInfluencingYoungAdults”(影响青年人成长的因素)的范文的开头一段:Ofthevariousfactorsthatcanhaveinfluenceonyoungadults,thefamilyandfriendsstandoutmost.Whichofthetwoismoreimportant?Myviewisthatitisfriendswhohavemoreimportantinfluenceonyoungadults.再如,在“ChoosingaJobProfitableoraJobILove”(选择赚钱的工作还是自己喜欢的工作)的范文第一段:Howcanonefindadesirablejob?Thisquestionpuzzlesnearlyeveryone.Inpractice,mostpeoplelookforwell-paidjobswhileafewsearchforjobstheylove.2.作文主体部分的写作(1)论证手法当段落的主题为一理论性论点时,就需要举例或例证来加以支持,以说服读者。举例和例证使抽象的概念具体化,而所举的事例也应该具有充分的说服力,同时逻辑严密。例如,2001年的专四作文考题“TravelBroadenstheMind”(旅游开阔视野)的主体段可以通过“自己到西安旅游”的例子进行论证,如下:Considermyownexperienceasanexample.Twoyearsago,IvisitedXi’an,anancientcity.Xi’anisacityofrichculturalinheritance.Therearesomanyplacesofintereststhere,suchastheoldcitywalls,thetomboftheEmperorQinandsoon.ItseemsthateverythingtheretellthestoriesandhistoryoftheancientChina.Inthisway,Ihavegainedknowledgeofhistoryandculture,whichismorevividandimpressivethanwhatislearnedinclass.再如,在“OpportunityandSuccess”(机遇与成功)的范文的论证过程中,以牛顿发现万有引力定律为例,说明了获得机遇只是获得了成功的可能性,只有加上不懈的努力,可能性才会变成现实:Whenanopportunitycomes,itbringspromiseforsuccess,butthatpromisenevercomestruebyitsown.ThepopularstoryofhowNewtonwashitbyafallingappleandthusfindingtheUniversalLawofGravitationalsoprovesthis.IsupposemanypeoplebeforeNewtonsawapplesfall,butnonefoundanythingaboutgravity.However,Newtontooktheopportunitytothinkaboutthephenomenonfurther,proposeanddemonstrateatheorytoexplainit.Thisindicatesyoumustmakeeffortsbefore,duringandafteryougetanopportuni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