雅思小作文解析

雅思写作—TASK1图表作文要求Summarizetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.通过选择和报告信息主要特征的方式,归纳图表中提供的信息,并对关联事物作出比较。图表作文基本结构首段—概括图表描述对象三要素—图表研究的时间段、图表研究的对象（图表内容）、研究所采用的数据形式（具体数字/百分比）主体段落—既要有趋势描写，又要有数据支持结尾段—重申重要的对照对比趋势，以及从此得出的结论（时间充裕或字数不够）首段写作的基本方法最基本方法—对题目进行改写首段时态—一般现在时—永远！牢记三要素—时间段、图表内容、数据形式首段写作indicate/describe/reveal/illustrate/demonstrate首段写作Thegraphbelowshowstheproportionofthepopulationaged65andoverbetween1940and2040inthreedifferentcountries.percentagelinechart首段写作Thelinechartdescribesthepercentageofthepopulationaged65andoverfrom1940to2040inthreedifferentcountries:Japan,SwedenandUSA.Thelinechartdescribesinpercentagethepopulationaged65andoverfrom1940to2040inthreedifferentcountries:Japan,SwedenandUSA.剑五P98Thetablebelowgivesinformationabouttheundergroundrailwaysystemsinsixcities.CityDateopenedKilometersofroutePassengersperyear(inmillions)London1863394775Paris19001991191Tokyo19271551927WashingtonDC1976126144Kyoto19811145LosAngeles20012850剑五—P98Thetablebelowgivesinformationabouttheundergroundrailwaysystemsinsixcities.Thetableprovidesanoverviewoftheundergroundrailwaysystemsinsixcities.曲线图表示趋势变化的词汇表示“上升”rise/increase/climbgrow(growth)/goup(anupwardtrend)表示“下降”decrease/drop/fall/declinereduce(reduction)godown(adownwardtrend)表示趋势变化的词汇表示“保持不变”leveloff/leveloutremainconstant/remainstablestabilize(stabilization)表示“波动”riseandfallfluctuate(fluctuation)表示变化幅度的词汇表示“速度快/幅度大”sharp/sharplyrapid/rapidlysteep/steeplymarked/markedlydramatic/dramatically表示变化幅度的词汇表示“速度慢/幅度小”slow/slowlysteady/steadilyslight/slightlygradual/graduallymoderate/moderately表示趋势变化的词汇表示“到达最高点”reachapeakachievethehighestpoint表示“到达最低点”reachabottomachieve/falltothelowestpoint曲线图完整描述Accordingtothechart,thereisasteadyincreaseintheelectricitydemandinwinterfrom35,000unitsat0:00tonearly40,000unitsat3:00,whichisfollowedbyadramaticdecreaseforthenext6hoursandthenumberreachesthebottomof30,000units.Thereafter,theunitsofelectricityrisegraduallyuntil22:00,whenthepeakofthedayisreached,about43,000units.Thelasttwohoursofthedayexperienceamarkedfalltoapproximately35,000units.(83words)曲线图完整描述Bycontrast,thefirstninehoursofadayinsummerwitnessagradualdeclineintheelectricitydemandinfrom18,000tonearly12,000units,whichisthelowestpoint.Next,theelectricityneedsrisesteadilytothepeakof20,000unitsat14:00.Afteraslightdrop,thereisalevelingoffuntil21:00,withafluctuationforthelastthreehoursofaday.(68words)结尾段作比较不同点—冬季用电量远远高于夏季相同点—冬夏两季最小值与峰值大致同时出现Itisobviousthattheelectricitydemandinwinterismuchhigherthanthatinsummer.Thelowestusageappearsfrom8:00to9:00inbothwinterandsummer,andthepeakisalsoreachedataround22:00.饼状图—词汇表示”所占份额”accountformakeup/takeupconstituteoccupy饼状图—句型房租占生活费用的55%55%ofallexpensesarespentonrent.Thereare55%ofallexpensesspentonrent.Theexpenseswhicharespentonrenttakeup55%ofall.Thepercentageoftheexpensesspentonrentis55%.饼状图—一个饼ItisclearthatthemostcomponentisA,whichaccountsfor**%.Bisthenextlargestpart,**%lowerthanA,andfollowedcloselybyC.Theabovethreeitemstakeupthemajorityofall.Inmarkedcontrast,D,EandFmakeupasmallpercentage,whichare*%,*%and*%respectively.ThechartsbelowshowUSspendingpatternsfrom1966to1996.饼状图—两个饼按照变化方向对饼块进行分类—上升、下降和保持不变—突出显著的变化强调所占份额最大,变化最显著部分Overall,AcmespentmoreonadvertisingthanFamous.Bothcompaniesspentthemostmoneyontelevisionpromotion,withAcmespending＄250,000whileFamousspent＄200,000.050100150200250TVNewspaperInternetBillboardsThousandsofDollarsAdvertisingExpenditureAcmeCompanyFamousCompanyAcmespentthesecondhighestamountonnewspaperadvertising,atapproximately＄125,000,whereasFamousspentonlyabout＄75,000onthistype.Incontrast,FamousspenttwiceasmuchontheInternetasAcme,at＄100,000and＄50,000respectively.Bothcompaniesspenttheleastmoneyonbillboardpromotions,atabout＄25,000each.050100150200250TVNewspaperInternetBillboardsThousandsofDollarsAdvertisingExpenditureAcmeCompanyFamousCompany表格Thetabletellsusthenumberofpeoplewholiveabovetheageof100inBritainduringdifferentperiods.Version1091912193519772001Male2301022812712936Female4172716137221672Total64737389499346082301022812712936417271613722167205000100001500020000250001912193519772001malefemale流程图信息分散，正确理解题意难度大图中会遇到生词对内部连接要求高ThediagrambelowshowstheprocessofglassrecyclingTheprocessofglassrecyclinghas/consistsofthreemainstages/steps.Inthefirststage,theusedbottlesarecollectedincollectionpointswheretheyhavebeendepositedbyconsumers.Thesebottlesaretaken/transportedtoacleaningplantbytrucks.连接手段被动语态Instagetwo,bottlesarecleanedbyhigh-pressuredwaterinacleaningplant.Stagetwobeginswiththebottlesbeingcleanedusingwatersprayedontothebottlesunderhigh-pressure.Thebottlesarethensortedbycolourintobrown,greenandclearglassandtakentoarecyclingplant.Attheplant,theyareputintofurnacesinordertomelttheglassinpreparationformoulding.Next,therecycledliquidglassismixedwithacertainamountofnewliquidglassbeforebeingpouredintomouldsforthemanufactureoffreshbottles.Finally,thenewbottlesarereadyforuse,andtheyaretakentobefilledatsupermarketsandreturntoconsumers.对比示意图Thediagramsbelowshowso