商务英语BEC中级写作必备

声明：本资料由考试吧（Exam8.com）收集整理，转载请注明出自服务：面向校园，提供计算机等级考试，计算机软件水平考试,英语四六级，研究生考试等校园相关考试信息。特色：提供历年试题，模拟试题，模拟盘，教程，专业课试题下载等。资料丰富，更新快！考试交流论坛：中级写作电子讲义第一讲BEC写作概述本课程安排简介写作共6次课，第1次讲概述。BEC写作简介：1写作目的与要求1Canmakenotesthatareusefultobothhim/herselfandtocolleagues.2Canwritemostlettershe/sheislikelytobeaskedtodo;sucherrorsasoccurwillnotpreventunderstandingofthemessage.3Canwriteasimplereport.写作考试共进行45分钟，占总成绩的25%，小作文占10分，大作文占20分。更多的报名信息和成绩查询方法请上网了解：、身份介绍(PersonalIdentification)2、工作环境与日常事务(Theoffice，generalbusiness，environmentandroutine)3、接待与闲暇活动(Entertainmentofclients，freetime，relationshipswithcolleaguesandclients)4、商务旅行(Travel)5、健康(Health)6、购买与销售(Buyingandselling)7、公司结构、系统及程序(Companystructures，systems，processes)8、产品与服务(Productsandservices)9、成果与成就(Resultsandachievements)其外，还会涉及其他的一般商务话题（Businessissues）。3测试题型分析AnOverviewofBECVantageWritingPARTFunctions/CommunicativeTaskInputResponseRegister1BusinessCorrespondence:e.g.givinginstructions,explainingadevelopment,askingforcomments,requestinginformation,agreeingtorequestsRubriconly(pluslayoutofoutputtexttype)Note,message,memoore-mail(40-50words)Neutral/informal2Correspondence:e.g.explaining,apologising,reassuring,complainingReport:describing,summarisingProposal:describing,summarising,recommending,persuadingOneormorepiecesofinputfrom:businesscorrespondence(mediummaybeletter,faxore-mail),internalcommunication(mediummaybenote,memo,ore-mail),notice,advert,graphs,chart,etc.(pluslayoutifoutputisfaxore-mail)Businesscorrespondence(mediummaybeletter,faxore-mail)orshortreportorproposal(mediummaybememoore-mail)(120-140words)Neutral/formal题型：1．商务便条类；2．商务便函类；3．商务书信类；4.商务报告类注意：BEC不是单纯的英语考试，也不是考察商务知识。对策：学习、模仿高水平的论文例题解析：Youworkforacompanywhichproduceslaserprinters．Youarevisitinganothercompany，Softcell,tobuysomecomputersoftwareforyourdepartment．Theyhaveexpressedaninterestinyourcompany’sprintersandyouwouldliketotaketwentybrochuresandthreesampleprinterswithyou．相关词汇：laser,inkjet,projector(Barco),photocopier(Xerox),faxmachine,scanner,computer,monitor相关词汇：companyliterature;brochure;leaflet;flyer;whitebook;datasheet;prospectusWriteashortnotetoMr.JimAsano，theSalesManager．Askingforhispermissiontotaketheseitems．Explainingwhyyouwantthem．Mentioningthetimeanddatewhenyouwanttocollectthem．Write40-50wordsonyourAnswerSheet.便函便条类题目的结构Input:situationdescriptionTask:memo,note,emailcontentpointsWrite:internalmessage(40-50words)注意：格式；发挥部分要确切评分标准BEC写作评分方法级别第一部分分数5全部完成答题要求所有内容点都已包括在内并在答题要求允许的情况下加以发挥语言规范、自然；错误最少，均属小错。多样化的语言结构和丰富的词汇量。组织效果好，注意前后呼应。语域和格式完全适当。给读者的印象极佳。9或10分4较好的完成答题要求所有内容点都处理得不错。大体准确；运用复杂语言时有错误。结构合理，用词准确。大体上组织较好，注意逻辑关系。语域和格式总体来说适当。给读者的印象良好。7或8分3尚能达到答题要求所有的主要内容点已包括进去，遗漏了一些次要的内容。出现一些错误，但不妨碍交流。结构和词汇掌握范围适度。组织和安排总的来说令人满意。语域和格式尚可，虽然并不完全成功。给读者的印象较好。5或6分2不能完全达到答题要求遗漏了一些主要的内容点或者处理得不充分，可能有些不切题。有时错误影响清楚交流，错误较多，使读者感到迷惑。结构、词汇掌握范围有限。内容条理不清、不连贯，造成理解困难。语域和格式不适当。给读者的印象不佳。3或4分1未能达到答题要求显著的内容遗漏/或大量内容不相关，可能由于对题目要求的误解。严重不规范，经常出现基本错误。题目要求的结构和词汇几乎没有提到。缺乏组织，造成交流失败。几乎没有使用适当的语域和格式。给读者的印象极差。1或2分0什么要求也没达到。字数少于所需字数的25%，或是完全不能辨认或是完全不切题。0分注意：content;accuracy;conciseness【例题】Christmasiscoming.YourcompanyisgoingtoholdtheannualChristmasparty.Asthesecretaryofthegeneralmanager,youhelparrangethepreparationforit.Writeamemotoallemployees.Announcingtheplannedparty.Welcomingallemployeestojoinit.Introducingtheprogramsofit.Mentionthetimeandplacethatittakesplace.Write40—50wordsonyourAnswerSheet．商务书信类这一题型要求考生根据所提供的短文，如书信、传真、便函、留言条(电话留言条)等，起草一封书信，字数要求达到120—140词左右。题目结构：Input:1situationdescription2task3targetreaderReading:textsinnote,letter,fax,memo+contentpoints(handwrittennotes;secondletter)Write:businessletter(120-140words)注意英美拼写问题【例题】Youhaveorganisedaproductionconferenceforyourcompanywhichwillbeheldon10October2005.ThefollowingistheletterofconfirmationyoureceivedfromtheConferenceCentre.Readtheletterandfaxbelow,whichgivesdetailsoftheconference.Then,usingallinformationfromthefax,writeyourlettertoJohnSmithattheNuffieldConferenceCentre,explainingthechangestothearrangements.Donotincludepostaladdresses.Write120-140wordsonseparatesheet.DearConferenceOrganiser,Iamwritingtoconfirmthearrangementsfortheconference.DATEANDTIME:10thOctober-10a.m.to5p.m.NUMBEROFGUESTS:50ROOMSRESERVED10a.m.to12:30p.m.CONFERENCEHALL32p.m.to5p.m.SEMINARROOMS1,2,and3CATERING:Coffee--11a.m.to11:30a.m.Lunch-12:30p.m.to2p.m.ConferenceCentreRestaurantTea-4p.m.WelookforwardtowelcomingyourcompanytotheNuffieldConferenceCentre.Yoursfaithfully,JohnSmithTodayyourProductionManagerhassentyouthefaxbelowwithchangeshewouldliketomaketotheconferencearrangementsFAXI’mafraidwehavetomakesomelast-minutechangestothearrangementsforourproductionconference.1.Tenmoreguestshaveaccepted.2.ThePresidentwantsonlyonehourforlunch,andjustasimplebuffet-notseatedintherestaurant.TheConferenceSpeaker（TomMoors）can’tcomeuntil2pm.Sohewillgivehispresentationintheafternoon.Canwemovetheseminarstothemorning?Sorryaboutthis!Sam注意：1不要跑题2适当发挥3目标读者4不要抄袭三种对策：a换句型e.g.Thisruleappliesineverycase.Therearenoexceptionstotherule.(肯定句变否定句)b换