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假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的班长李华,你们班的外教Lisa已经结束本学期的教学工作回到美国，请代表你们班给她写一封邮件。邮件的内容包括：1.询问她的近况；2.回顾在外教课上的收获；3.表达对她的感谢和祝福。Part1Beginning（Purposeofwriting）询问Lisa在美国的近况；思念；代表全班表示感谢（引出下文）。Part2MainBody--回顾在外教课上的收获；1.Writesupportingdetails2.Usingfactsratherthanopinionwordseg.英语知识；美国文化；情感态度（eg.学习兴趣，自信，乐观）等等.Part3.Ending表达对她的感谢(真诚)和祝福。1.感谢：应与上文逻辑对应、连贯。感谢简洁。2.祝福什么？祝福：事业、身体、家庭等。（12分）：结构、要点齐全，语言质量较好，但连贯性稍弱，从一档文降为二档文。（13分）：要点齐全，语言质量好，条理清晰，虽有个别语言错误，但不影响全文连贯性。（14分）内容完整，条理清晰、连贯，语言句式较丰富，逻辑清晰，体现出较强的语言运用能力（流畅性稍弱）。DearLisa,Howiseverythinggoing?Iamwritingonbehalfofmyclasstosendourbestwishestoyou.It’sbeenawhilesinceyoufisnishedyourteachingthistermandreturnedtoAmerica.Areyouenjoyingyourlifewithyourfamily?Weknowyoumustbe,yetwestillcan’thelpthinkingaboutyou,foryou’vetaughtusalotinyourclasses.WhatyouledustodoisnotonlyearningEnglish,butalsolearningtoappreciatedanotherculture.Theexperienceyousharedwithusandyourenergyinlearningwillalwaysaccompanyus.Wearethankfulforyouandtheyearwespenttogether.Andwehopethatyoucancontinuehavingfunintheteachingcareerandbehealthyforever.Welookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,Lihua（15分）内容完整，条理清楚、文章整体连贯、流畅，交际得体，语言句式丰富，体现出较强的语言运用能力。Howareyoudoingrecently?Iamwritingonbehalfofmywholeclasstoexpressoursincereloveandappreciationtoyou.Hopeeverthingisgoingonwellwithyou.Inthepastsemester,wewereluckytohaveyouasourteacher.Icanstillrememberyoutellingjokesandhavinghunwithus.Thelaughteroncefilledtheroomstillringinginmyhead.IrememberyouintroducingAmericanLiteraturetouswithgreatpassionandevensparksshininginyoureyes.Withallofusdeeplysunkinthismarvelousunknownworld,youwouldalwayswinkyoureyesandsmilecontently.Yourenthusiasmhasservedtoleaveuswithalong-lastinglovetowardsnotonlyEnglishbutalsoourlife.Wereallyappreciateyourloveandallthedevotionthatyou’veputintoteachingus.Wehopeyou’llcontinuetoliveahappyandcolorfullifeinAmerica!假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“AvisittotheMuseumoftheAnti-JapaneseWar”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍你们班同学参观抗日战争纪念馆的过程。注意：词数不少于60。到达参观听抗战老兵讲故事合影要点大门、校车、导游、欢迎围成圈坐下、聚精会神、问答、勋章展品（武器）、分组、记录细节大门、告别、笑容17：本文覆盖了所有内容要点，运用的句式和词汇能够满足写作任务要求，运用了简单的语句连接，语法和用词基本准确，在表述较丰富内容时出现了少许不恰当的错误。Lastweekend,ourclassorganizedavisittotheMuseumoftheAnti-JapaneseWar.Itturnedouttobeanunforgettalbexperience.Inthemorning,oncearivingatthemuseumbybus,wegatheredatthefrontdoorofthemuseum.Astaffwarmlywelcameusandgaveabriefintroductionofthearrangement.Dividedintoseveralgroups,webegantoseetheexhisbitionofthisgreatwar.Anumberofpicturesrecordingthecourseofthiswarleftuswithadeepimpression.Someboyswhowereinterestedinmilitarywereattractedbytheoldgunswhichwereusedduringthewar.Meanwhile,otherstudentswerehavingheateddiscussionaboutthedifferentmapshangingonthewallandtakingnotesinearnest(carefully).Afterlunch,wewenttoalectureaboutthehistoryofthiswarwhichwasdeliveredbyanoldsoldier.Allofuswereabsorbedinhisdescription.Deeplymovedbyhiswords,wegavehimthunderousapplausetoexpressoursinceregratitude.Attheendofthevisit,wetookaphotowiththeoldsoldiertorememberthismeaningfultrip.NotonlydidthevisitletusknowmoreaboutthehistoryofAnti-JapaneseWar,wealsogainedabroadenedunderstandingoflovingandprotectingourmotherland.18：本文要点完整，细节添加适当，句式多样，词汇丰富，所写内容连贯，体现了较强的语言运用能力。完全完成了试题规定的任务，符合一档文的要求。YesterdaywepaidavisittotheMuseumoftheAnti-JapaneseWarandlearnedalotaboutthatperiodofhistory.Wegatheredinfrontofthemuseumintheearlymorningandlistenedtotheinstructionsgivenbyaguidehere.Thoughwewereexcitedabouttheday,weallhadaheavyheart.Withaleafletsinhandintroducingtheitemsdemonstrated(displayed)intheexhibition,Iwanderedinthehallandlookedatthemapsandweaponshangingonthewallclosely.Whileotherswerediscussiongthestrategiesusedinthewar.WewereallimpressedwiththeeffortsChinesepeopleputtofightagainstenermies.Oureyeswentwet.Intheafternoon,wegatheredaroundanelderlysoldierwhohadexperiencedthewar.WelistenedattentivelytohisstoriesandfeltrespectfulfortheintelligenceandbraveryofChinesepeople.Soonitcametotheclosingtime,andwetookaphotowithhiminfrontofthemuseum.WhatIgainedyesterdaywascertainlybeyondtheknowledgeoftheAnti-JapaneseWar.Afterlearninghowwarscouldbringtraumaforuswhichwouldlastfordecades,wecouldbettertreasurethevaluablepeaceandloveournationmore.*appreciate-appreciation*grageful–gratitude*spokenEnglish*onbehalfof*at(删除)there*meaningful*bedevidedintogroups*introduce-introduction*experiencethewar*cruel–cruelty