书面表达训练与指导单元话题:Unit4IlikemusicthatIcandanceto.Listkindsofmovies.documentary,drama,comedy,actionmovie,scarymovie,cartoon...Adj.thatcandescribemovies.描述电影特点的形容词。interesting,educational,moving,exciting,relaxing,fantastic,...Adj.thatcanexpressfeelings.表达对电影感受的形容词。happy,relaxed,excited,moved,pleased,proud,amazed,hopeful,...从哪些角度可以谈论喜爱的电影?moviecharactersdialogssongsmusic...directorCompletethesentences.Ilikemoviesthat/which______.Writeanarticleforanewspaperormagazineaboutyourfavoritemovie.目标:根据写作技巧完成写作任务。Tip:what,who,why,how...whatmyfavoritekindofmovieisMyfavoritekindofmovieis____.whyIthinkothersshouldwatchitwhatmyfavoritemovieis(name)whomadeitwhyIlikeithowitmakesmefeelwhyIlikethiskindofmovieMyfavoritemovie1.列Ilikethembecause_________.Myfavoritemovieis_______.Itwasmadeby__________.Ilikeitbecause__________.Ifeel___________________.Ithinkyoushouldwatchitbecause___________________.Myfavoritekindofmovieis____.Myfavoritemovie1.列Ilikethembecause_________.Myfavoritemovieis_______.Itwasmadeby__________.Ilikeitbecause__________.Ifeel___________________.Ithinkyoushouldwatchitbecause___________________.总述具体阐述建议技巧一:同义句式Myfavoritekindofmovieiscartoon.Ilike/prefer/love/enjoy/fallinlovewith…I’minterestedin…Ishow(take)greatinterestin……interest(s)me.…2.变技巧二:合并句式Ilikethemovies.Theycancheermeup.Ilikethemovieswhich/thatcancheermeup.2.变Ilikethemoviesbecausetheycancheermeup.技巧三:扩展句式Ifeelrelaxed.WhenIwatchKungFuPanda,Ifeelveryrelaxed.IfI’mtiredordown,IenjoywatchingKungFuPanda.WhenIwatchit,Ifeelveryrelaxed.IfI’mtiredordown,IenjoywatchingKungFuPanda.WhenIwatchit,Ifeelveryrelaxed.Laughingfortwohoursisagoodwaytorelax!2.变技巧四:亮点句式2.变a.yourhardworkdayafterday.(日积月累)b.makegooduseofyourtextbook.(挖掘好书本知识)b.makegooduseofyourtextbook.(挖掘好书本知识)WhenI’mdownortired,Iprefermoviesthatcancheermeup.WhenI…,Iprefer…that…Icanjust___mybrain,___and____anexcitingsuperhero…ItwasoneofthemostmovingpiecesofmusicthatI’veeverheard.…is/wasoneofthe+形容词最高级+n.s+thatI’veheard/seen/done...添连接词AmongsomanycomediesIhavewatched,theoneIlikebestisKungFuPanda.ItwasmadebyJohnStevenson.Ilikeitbecauseithas____________funnydialogs____________ahappyending.______________thecharactersmaynotbeperfect,theytrytheirbesttosolvetheirproblems.Itis_____interesting_______Ireallywanttolaugh.Although/Thoughsothat3.添notonly/bothbutalso/andBodyEndingBeginning添首尾句/段Differentpeoplehavedifferenthobbies.IalwayslovewatchingmovieswhenIamfree.HowIwishwecanshareeverythinggoodtogether!3.添MyfavoritemovieMyfavoritemovie检查时态检查语法检查标点检查词数查书面表达写作技巧自我评价级别内容ABCD审题要点结构语言字数书写中考作文评分标准第五档(1-3分)第一档(13-15分)第二档(10-12分)第三档(7-9分)第四档(4-6分)Practicemakesperfect!Perfect(继续完善)yourarticleafterclass.Myfavoritekindofmovieisthehistoricaldrama.Ilikehistoricaldramabecausetheyarearelaxingwayformetolearnhistorythathasgreatlyinfluencedonpeople'slives.MyfavoritemovieisGonewiththeWind《飘》.Itwasmadein1939.AnditwaswrittenbyMargaretMitchellwhowasaveryfamousAmericanwriter.ThemovieisabouttheAmericanCivilWar(美国内战)andithasalotoffantasticcharactersthathelpbringthestorytolife.WhenIwatchthismovies,Ifeeldeeplymoved.Itmakesmefeelsadabouttheeffects(影响)ofthewar,butitgivesmehopeanditcanalsospreadloveandthetruehumanspirit.Ithinkyoushouldwatchthismovietoobecauseitisoneofthemostgreatestmoviesofalltime.