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Aims:1.Toknowthecommonmistakesthatyoualwaysmakeinyourwriting.2.Tofindthereasonwhyyoumakethemistakes.3.Tolearnhowtoavoidthesamemistakes研究表明，多数同学在写作上的主要欠缺不是系统的写作理论和方法，而是最基本的单句写作能力。nextProblemsinwritingsinglesentences•单句写作过程中存在的问题5Problemsinwritingsinglesentences•1.TheChinglishexpression•2.SubjectandVerbDisagreement•3.Misuseofthewordsforms•4.MisuseoftheTenseandVoice•5.Missingofessentialpartsofthesentence•6.Misuseofwords61、TheChinglishExpression–Manisiron,andfoodissteel.–infrontoftheflowersandunderthemoon–Mybodyisgood.–Wecollegestudentsarethesonsofthesky.–Peopletakefoodasheaven.•Breadisthestaffoflife.•Staybyfloweringshrubsorunderthepuremoon.82、SubjectandVerbDisagreement•Mysistergotothecinemaatleastonceaweek.•Tomwithhistwobrothersaregoingtothecountry.•HesavedenoughmoneytobuytheworksofShakespearewhichhethoughtwasworthbuying.93、Misuseofthewordsforms•Hewasveryhappiness.•Hewashitbyacarwhenheacrossthestreet.•Allthepeoplearelikemusicverymuch.104、MisuseoftheTenseandVoice•在一般的阐述中，作文的时态应该定位在现在的时间。除了阐述过去或将来发生的事情。Theharderyouwillpractice,thegreaterprogressyouwillmake.We’regoingtodivideintofourgroups.Thisfishwascaughtwherethewaterdidn’tpollute.115、Missingofessentialpartsofthesentence•There’snobuscomestoouruniversity.•Jennyoftenlateforschool.thatis/was缺主语缺谓语12•Ihaveseenthefilmseveraltimes,butIstillliketosee.•Isthisuniversitywhereyoustudiedthreeyearsago.theoneit(缺宾语)(缺表语)136、MisuseofWords•1)中学毕业后，他参加了工作。–Aftergraduationfromhighschoolhetookpartinwork.(误)–Aftergraduationfromhighschoolhegotajob.（正）•2)我们劝他休息，但他就是不听。–Wepersuadedhimtotakearest,buthejustwouldn’tlisten.advised14•3)中国电影很受新加坡人的欢迎。–TheChinesefilmsarewelcomedbythepeopleinSingapore.popularwithSolutionstotheseproblems正确连接分句•1.Thebookwasinteresting,Ireaditrapidly.•Thebookwasinteresting,andIreaditrapidly.•2.Thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs,theboysmoppedthefloor.•Thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs,andtheboysmoppedthefloor.•避免误置修饰语•3.AttheageofsixmyfatherbegantoteachmeEnglish.•MyfatherbegantoteachmeEnglishwhenIwassix.•4.Ialmostgotgoodmarksineverysubject.•Igotgoodmarksinalmosteverysubject.•注意逻辑主语•5.Tobewell-informed,readingnewspaperisagoodhabit.•Tobewell-informed,weshouldreadnewspapereveryday.•6.Comingoutoftheclassroom,myheartwasbeatingveryfast.•Comingoutoftheclassroom,Ifeltmyheartbeatingveryfast.避免指代不清•7.Sheaskedhersisterwhyshewasn’tinvitedtotheparty.•Sheaskedwhyhersisterwasn’tinvitedtotheparty.•Sheaskedhersister,“Whywasn’tIinvitedtotheparty?”•避免人称代词混淆•8.Wehadbeenontheplaneforeighteenhours,andyougotprettytiredofsittingthatlong.•Wehadbeenontheplaneforeighteenhours,andwegotprettytiredofsittingthatlong.•避免重复•9.Inmyopinion,Ithinkweshouldaskthemforadvice.•Inmyopinion,weshouldaskthemforadvice.•Ithinkweshouldaskthemforadvice.•尽量避免汉语干扰•10.Thebooksinourlibraryaregettingmoreandmore.•Therearemoreandmorebooksinourlibrary.•Thenumberofbooksinourlibraryisgettingbiggerandbigger.•11.DuringstayinginBeijing,Ivisitedalotofplacesofinterest.•DuringmystayinBeijing,I…•WhilestayinginBeijing,I…•12.Thereisamanwantstoseeyoudownstairs.•Ayoungmanwantstoseeyoudownstairs.•Thereisamanwhowantstoseeyoudownstairs.•13.Iwillnotforgetmydearfriendsforever.•Iwillneverforgetmydearfriends.•14.Theywillcometovisityouwhenyouareconvenient.•Theywillcometovisityouwhenitisconvenienttoyou.•Theywillcometovisityouatyourconvenience.•注意时态一致•15.Iwentshoppingyesterday.Thereweremanypeopleinthesupermarket.Peoplearecarryingbasketsortakingcarts.IstruggledinthecrowdspickingupthethingsIneed.WhenIfinishedmyshoppingIamsotired.•注意时态一致•Iwentshoppingyesterday.Thereweremanypeopleinthesupermarket.Peoplewerecarryingbasketsortakingcarts.IstruggledinthecrowdspickingupthethingsIneeded.WhenIfinishedmyshopping,Iwassotired.29“Therebe”Structure•WrongSentences：–Therearemanypeopleliketogotothemovies.–Therearedifferentkindsofvegetablescanbeboughtonthemarketbypeople.whothat30Because---structure•WrongSentences：–Therealreasontoourfailureisnotfartoseek.–Thereasonforthisisbecausesomepeoplewanttoearnplentyofmoneywithoutworkinghard.forthat•Writeashortparagraphabout:•Lackofsleep(睡眠不足的原因，危害）•Wearebusyreviewingourlessonsanddoingexercisesallthetime.Everyeveningweworktillverylate.Wedon’thaveenoughtimeforsleep.I’mafraidlackofsleepwilldoharmtoourhealth.随堂练习Summary•正确连接分句•避免误置修饰语•注意逻辑主语•避免指代不清•尽量避免汉语干扰•注意时态一致34•文明的社会里关爱无处不在。以一只小猫照顾一只生病的小鸭为例。•Thereareconcernandcareeverywhereinacivilizedsociety.Taketheexampleofacatlookingafterasickduck.•Concernandcarecanbefoundeverywhereinacivilizedsociety.Taketheexampleofacatlookingafterasickduck.35•由于我们亲眼目睹了这些伟大的成就，所以我们更为我们的祖国感到骄傲。•Nowthatwehaveseenthesegreatachievementswithourowneyes,wefeelmoreproudthaneverofourcountry.