短文改错(一)Lastweekendwewentmountain-climbing.Eventheheavyraininthemorningcouldnotpreventusgo.Settingoffveryearly,wewentalonganextremenarrowroad,allinhighspirits.Oneverysideoftheroadweregreenfieldsandsomefarmhouse.Wecouldhearthesoundoftherainandourfootstepsmixingwithourlaughter.Atnoonwereachedtopofthemountain.Thatsurprisedusmostwasthebeautyofthescenesthere.Afterhavingashortrestandsharingwiththefoodwehadbrought,westartedgoingdown.Itrainedevenharder.Wearewettotheskin,andwestillsangandlaughedhappily.•Lastweekendwewentmountain-climbing.Eventheheavyraininthemorningcouldnotpreventusgo.Settingoffveryearly,wewentalonganextremenarrowroad,allinhighspirits.Oneverysideoftheroadweregreenfieldsandsomefarmhouse.goingextremelyeach/eitherhousesWecouldhearthesoundoftherainandourfootstepsmixingwithourlaughter.Atnoonwereachedtopofthemountain.Thatsurprisedusmostwasthebeautyofthescenesthere.mixed∧thewhatAfterhavingashortrestandsharingwiththefoodwehadbrought,westartedgoingdown.Itrainedevenharder.Wearewettotheskin,andwestillsangandlaughedhappily.\werebut我们应该认识的高考短文改错•明年河北省的高考是实施新课标以来的第一次高考。我们是第一批使用新课标的学生。考试题型有了变化。有没有经验可循?我们怎样备战明年的高考?怎样在短文改错题上拿高分?•宁夏从2007年实施了新课改后的第一次高考至今5年.纵观近几年的高考短文改错题型我们得到什么?比较•新课标以前全国卷•第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)•新课标第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改所写句子,请你修改你同桌写的以下句子。每句中只有一处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在此处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出修改的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,也用斜线划掉。该行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。该行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意:原行没有错的不要改。短文改错命题特点•高考英语改错的短文类似于出自学生的习作。•短文改错值得注意的动向:灵活性加大,个别句子结构较复杂,有一定的难度。短文改错题得满分不容易。1.设疑以句为单位,每句最多两处;2.设疑类型通常为1多1少8错;3.考点多为词法,其次为句法。短文改错主要困难1.找不出错误;2.操作不规范(答题不合要求)。2010/2009高考英语短文改错分析冠词1加词非谓语2改词时态2改词/去词名词数1改词介词/搭配1改词副词/形容词1改词代词1改词连词1改词11111122【改错策略】综观全文通文意,瞻前顾后看时态;见到谓语找主语,主谓一致找状语;见到名词想单复,是否可数要牢记;见到代词找指代,指代通常不合理;见到平行看结构,形式功能要对称;冠词词性主被动,固定搭配要熟记;名从定从与状从,引词作用须搞清;andbutor或so,逻辑关系要理顺;句中谓语就一个,其余动词非谓语;-ing表主动/性质,-ed形式表被动/状态,目的要用不定式。•形式变但规律没有变1.动词出现的错误(2-4)2.形容词与副词的误用(1)3.连词、从句的误用(1-2)4.一致问题(主谓/代词/前后)5.冠词的误用/少用/多用(1-2)6.名词的单复数(1)7.代词的误用(1-2)8.介词的错误(1-2)1.冠词:多(少,错)冠词•1)泛指(a/an)、特指(the)•2)固定短语搭配inahurry•asaresult;allofasudden;•onthecontrary;inaword•anumberof与thenumberof区别•adistanceofinthedistance•apopulationof13billion;•thepopulationofChina2.代词1)主宾格错误:he/him;she/her;we/us;they/them2)人称指代不一致:we/you/they3)性别错误:he/she;him/her4)单复数不一致:my/our;I/we5)物主代词my/mine;you/yours;their/theirs6)反身代词:myself;ourselves;yourself;yourselves;himself;themselves7)多或少it等3.It的用法1.形式宾语1)Sbfind/think/feelit+adj+todosth2)Sbtakeitforgrantedthat…Butalltoooften,somechildrenjusttakeitforgrantedthattheirparentsshouldservethemunconditionally.2.形式主语Itis+adj+for/ofsbtodosth3.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucoulddosth4.Ilike/hateitwhen……4.并列谓语,并列宾语形式一致1.Helikesreadingbooks,collectstampsandlisteningtomusic.2.Besides,hespentalotoftimelyingonthesofaanddoinglittleexercise.collectingdid5.谓语动词1)时态语态错误;IwatchTVuntil12o'clock,soIcouldnotgoovermylessons.……andalltheeyesfixeduponme.SomethingevenworsewashappenedtomeinEnglishclass.∧were(×)\6.非谓语动词2)分词错误-ing,-edWecouldhearthesoundoftherainandourfootstepsmixingwithourlaughter.I’m19andastudentmajoredinEnglishatSouthChinaNormalUniversity.3)动名词短语作主语、宾语,动词原形不能作主语、宾语;Istoodatmybenchwithoutdaretoraisemyheadmixedmajoringdaring7.名词单复数错误,可数还是不可数1)oneof+复数名词ZhangYimouisoneofthebest-knowndirectorinChina.2)不可数名词progress,furniture,knowledge,information,luggage/baggage,equipment,money,practice,advicedirectors8.介词:少/多/错介词。•beonduty;inreturnfor;•inaword;asaresult;•onthecontrary;payattentionto•befacedwith;beaddictedto;•lookforwardto;regardlessof;•inaddition(to);thesame…as..•besimilarto;insteadof•9.形容词,副词•形容词和副词使用错误;级别错误1)Theteacherlookedatmewithhiscoldlyeyes.•2)Settingoffveryearly,wewentalonganextremenarrowroad,allinhighspirits.•3)Thetallestofthetwomenstanding•thereismyuncle.(×)(×)(×)taller10.连词1)and,but,so,or之间互相改动Wewerewettotheskin,andwestillsangandlaughedhappily.2)so与such之间互相改动Youknownothingofsothings.Hemadesuchwonderfulaspeechthattheteacherpraisedhim.(×)but(×)3)so与very之间互相改动(so…that…句型)ThismorningIgotupverylatethatIhadtogotoschoolwithoutbreakfastinahurry…4)so与because之间互相改动或只用一个5)althouth,though与but不同时连用(×)11.that,what之间互相改动Ithinkthatyouneedisarightstudymethod.Thatwehavelearnedinbookscan’thavethesameeffectonusaswhatwehavelearnedthroughpractice.(×)(×)12.that,which之间互相改动(定语从句中,特别是非限制性定语从句)Enteringourschool,youcanseeafive–floorteachingbuilding,infrontofthataredifferentkindsofflowers.Moreandmorepeoplebuytheirprivatecars,thatcausesmoretrafficjams.ThefirstbookwhichIreadtodaywasanEnglishnovel.which(×)(×)13.what与how之间互相改动1)感叹句中引导词HowaterribledayIhad!2)Idon’tknowwhattodonext.Idon’tknowhowtodoit.Idon’tknowhowtodealwith…Idon’tknowwhattodowith…3)Youwanttoknowwhatisgoingoninourschool.what14.主谓一致1)Drivingcarsallthetimewithoutanyexercisedoharmtoone’shealth.2)WritingstoriesandarticlesiswhatIlikemost.(×)(∨)15.When与while相互改动1)Iwasabouttojumpintotheriverwhilesomeone