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TopicRevisionUnit2I'llhelpcleanupthecitypark单元话题复习写作课volunteersCheerupsickchildrenCleanupthecityparksWorkinanoldpeople’shomeGiveoutsomeoldbooksHelpkidswithhomeworkI’dliketocheerupsickkidsinthehospitalsinganddance,tellstories,cooksomedeliciousfood,IwouldliketobecauseI’mstronginI’dliketovisitoldpeopleattheoldpeople’shomecleantheirroomsreadnewspaperchatwitholdpeopleIcouldvolunteermytimetoBecausecaringforoldpeopleisourChinesetradition.I’dliketohelpcleanupthecityparkspickuptherubbishsweeptheroadsIcouldhelpthentheworldwillbebetterandbetter.I’dliketohelpstudentsintheschoolhelpingstudentswiththeirschoolworkIlove…,Iwanttoputthislovetogoodusebypaintingvolunteeringinanafter-schoolstudyprogramCanyouwrite?Task:如果你有机会成为一名志愿者去贡献爱心，你愿意帮助别人吗？你会选择做什么工作？为什么？怎么做？写一篇短文,80个词左右。(审)中考第一档（13-15分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档（10-12分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思达。第三档（7-9分）能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本读。第四档（4-6分）只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子读。第五档（1-3分）只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。Listthekeypoints（列文章要点）Opening:（开头）tellthemainideaIwouldliketocheerupsickkidsinthehospital.Body:（主体）howtodoitIwouldliketosingforkids.Iwouldliketohelpthemwiththeirhomework.Iwillsetupavolunteerproject.Ending:（结尾）sumupIwillbeagreatvolunteer.Goodmodel:Theoldsaying“Manyhandsmakelightwork”remindsusthatwecantrytohelpothersinneed.Ilikehelpingpeople.IfIhaveachancetobeavolunteer,Iwouldliketogotohospitalandcheerupthesickkids.Firstofall,Ilikesinging,Iwanttoputthislovetogoodusebysinging.What’smore,Iwouldliketohelpthemwiththeirhomework.BecauseIamgoodatteaching.Finally,Icouldvolunteermytimetosetupavolunteerprojecttohelpthem.Iwillhandoutsomeadstocallmorepeopletojoinme.Ifeveryonecansharealittlelove,theworldwillbebetterandbetter!Judgebyyourself第一档（13-15分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档（10-12分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。第三档（7-9分）能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。第四档（4-6分）只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。第五档（1-3分）只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。Welearn:1.Howtoofferhelp.2.Howtohelppeopleinneed.Ifeveryonesharealittlelove,theworldwillbebetter!1.Reviewthewholelesson2.Writeacomposition:Howtobeagreatvolunteer?ThankyouGoodbye!