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[题目要求](2011·陕西高考)假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据、和，给这位家长回复。I'mthemotherofafourteenyearold.Ihavearuleformydaughter:beamongthetop5studentsorgetpunishedinonewayoranother.Shehasbeendoingverywellinschool,butsomefriendsofminekeeptellingmethatIputtoomuchpressureonher.AmIwrong?博客内容写作要点要求写作要点：1．表明自己的看法；2．陈述自己的理由(可举例说明)；3．提出至少两条建议。要求：1．短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。2．短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。3．内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。4．书写需清晰、工整。Hi,TigerMom,WhatpuzzlesyouisactuallyapuzzleformanyparentsinChina.Myideais________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[技法指导]议论文是用来论述某个道理、阐明某种观点的一种文体。它通过摆事实、讲道理、辨是非来表达作者的见解和主张。议论文可分为许多种类，但中学英语书面表达所要求的议论文是一种限定的写作，其论点、论据和论证都比较明确。有的文章提出问题，如：……为什么？……怎么办？……该采取什么措施？考生可以结合问题要求，阐述相关的观点，切忌随意发挥。近几年的高考书面表达中，其主要命题形式是以表格式和提纲式来呈现写作材料的。基本要求：1．文章直接阐述事物的道理，明确表露作者的思想观点。2．表达方式以议论为主，辅之以说明、叙述等方式。议论文中的记叙和描写是为论点提供根据的。因此，记叙应该是概括的，描写应该是简要的。3．内容重在说理，坚持摆事实、讲道理。4．议论文主要包括三个要素：论点、论据和论证方法。论点是指需要证实的问题；论证是指阐述道理以理服人；论据就是用于论证的具有说服力的事实和证据。论点解决“证明什么”，论据解决“用什么来证明”，论证解决“怎样证明”。5．观点正确，论据充分，语言精练，论证合理，有严密的逻辑性。6．语言应该简练、准确；尽可能避免使用口语，多用书面语。第一步构建框架，清晰行文[谋篇布局][黄金模板]Hi,TigerMom,WhatpuzzlesyouisactuallyapuzzleformanyparentsinChina.Myideaisthat______________________(表明自己的观点).Althoughhighgradesareanimportantfactorinevaluatingstudentsandfortheirfutureuniversityadmission,developmentinwisdom,emotion,health,andlifeattitudeshouldneverbeignored.Therearemanyexamplesaroundus.________________________(举例陈述自己的理由).SoIsuggestthat___________________________(提出自己的具体建议).第二步打造亮句，增色文章1．而且，惩罚绝不是帮助他们身心发展的明智选择。►What'smore,punishmentisn'tawisechoiceofhelpingthemgrowupmentallyandphysicallyatall.►Furthermore,punishmentisbynomeansawisechoicetohelpthemgrowupmentallyandphysically.2．因此，我建议你采取你朋友们的建议。►Therefore,Iadviseyoutotakeyourfriends'advice.►SoIsuggestthatyoutakeyourfriends'advice.第三步串句成文，保证流畅Hi,TigerMom,WhatpuzzlesyouisactuallyapuzzleformanyparentsinChina.Myideaisthatitisnotquiterightforyoutodoso.Althoughhighgradesareanimportantfactorinevaluatingstudentsandfortheirfutureuniversityadmission,developmentinwisdom,emotion,health,andlifeattitudeshouldneverbeignored.Therearemanyexamplesaroundus.SomeallAstudentsinschoolhaveturnedoutnottobeassuccessfulinsocietyastheywereexpected.Thereasonisoftenthatthepressurefromtheirparentsallowsthemalmostnotimeforotheractivities.Furthermore,punishmentisbynomeansawisechoicetohelpthemgrowupmentallyandphysically.，SoIsuggestthatyoutakeyourfriends'advice.Moreimportantly,letherlivelikealovelygirl;letherhavemorefriendsandsocialactivities;andlethermakemistakesofherownasweteenagersoftendo.作为一名中学生，平时你是否愿意和自己的老师交流？你认为良好的师生关系应该是什么样的？如何才能建立这种关系？请写一篇120～150词的短文，就这一话题谈谈自己的看法。注意：1．可以使用一些具体的事例支持你的论点；2．标题自拟。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文：LoveandConcernMakeanIdealRelationshipStudentsarebecomingunwillingtoconfesstotheirteachersbecausetheyarenotequalinpositionandteacherslaytoomuchemphasisonthestudyofthestudents.ButIamwillingtosharemyinnerthoughtswithmyteachers.Theyshowloveandconcernfortheirstudentsandaregoodlisteners.Ialwaysfinditeasytoseeksupportandadvicefromthem,fromwhichIbenefitandlearnalot.Inthiscase,anidealrelationshipbetweenteachersandstudentsisveryimportant.Inmyopinion,thisrelationshipshouldbeonefilledwithlove,care,understanding,andrespect,sotheycanexchangeideasfreely.Tobuildarelationshipofthiskind,teachersshouldbecomefriendsofstudentswhilestudentsoughttotrusttheirteachersandgivevoicetotheirfeelingfrankly.Onlybyjointeffortscanweenjoyawarmrelationshipbetweenteachersandstudents.