2017年高三英语一轮复习书面表达写作训练之五写好非谓语动词,提升写作档次

2017年高三英语一轮复习书面表达写作训练之五写好非谓语动词，提升写作档次众所周知，作文中出现过多的简单句会让人觉得单调乏味，句子与句子之间的关系显得松散；而文章中过多地出现复合句又显得累赘，读起来费劲。恰当地运用非谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换，不仅句型多样，句子活泼，而且读起来结构紧凑，言简意明。一、运用非谓语动词转换简单句1．我为那事感到非常遗憾，开始考虑做些什么来帮一下。Ifeelquitesorryforthat.Ibegintothinkaboutwhattodotohelp.→,Ibegintothinkaboutwhattodotohelp.（现在分词作状语）2．另一方面，我将帮着建立英语角，提供给我们学生一个练习英语口语的平台。Ontheotherhand,IwillhelpsetuptheEnglishcorner.IwillprovideusstudentsaplatformtopracticeouroralEnglish.→Ontheotherhand,IwillhelpsetuptheEnglishcorner,usstudentsaplatformtopracticeouroralEnglish.（现在分词作状语）Feelingquitesorryforthat,providing3．这儿的人都喜欢汤姆写的那本小说。Allthepeopleherelikethenovel.ItiswrittenbyTom.→.（过去分词作定语）4．我们应该多讲英语。我们认为这是很重要的。WeshouldspeakmoreEnglish.Wethinkitisveryimportant.→.（it作形式宾语，不定式作真正宾语）5．我们应该如何提高我们的英语口语水平？这是个问题。HowshouldweimproveourspokenEnglish?Itisaquestion.→（不定式短语作主语）→ThequestionishowtoimproveourspokenEnglish.（不定式短语作表语）AllthepeopleherelikethenovelwrittenbyTomHowtoimproveourspokenEnglishisaquestion.WethinkitveryimportanttospeakmoreEnglish对点训练运用非谓语动词转换简单句1．Weweretouchedbytheteacher'swords.Wedecidedtoworkhard.___________________________________________________________2．Ididn'treceiveherletter.Ihadtowriteagain.___________________________________________________________3．Theboycametoschoollateagain.Thismadetheteacherveryangry.___________________________________________________________4．Theboysweremakingthemostoftime.Theywantedtofinishtheworkearlier.___________________________________________________________5．Isawanoldgranny.Shelayontheground.Iwentovertohelpher.___________________________________________________________答案：1.Touchedbytheteacher'swords,wedecidedtoworkhard.2.Nothavingreceivedherletter,Ihadtowriteagain.3.Theboy'scomingtoschoollateagainmadetheteacherveryangry.4.Theboysweremakingthemostoftime(soas)tofinishtheworkearlier.5.Seeinganoldgrannylyingontheground,Iwentovertohelpher.二、运用非谓语动词转换复合句1．惊诧于他们的熟练程度，我决心要像他们一样好。BecauseIwasamazedathowskillfultheywere,Ideterminedtobejustasgood.→（过去分词作状语）2．看到一辆车朝她而来，我伸出手把她拉了回来。WhenIsawacarrunningtowardsher,Ireachedmyhandoutandpulledherback.（现在分词作状语）3．练习了接近两个月篮球后，我们强烈渴望获得一场胜利。Afterwehadpracticedplayingbasketballforalmosttwomonths,weStronglydesiredtobethewinner.→（现在分词作状语）Amazedathowskillfultheywere,Ideterminedtobejustasgood.→Seeingacarrunningtowardsher,Ireachedmyhandoutandpulledherback.Havingpracticedplayingbasketballforalmosttwomonths,westronglydesiredtobethewinner.4．这里曾有一家化肥厂，位于城市的南边。它每天释放出大量有毒气体，污染环境。Therewasalargefactory,whichproducedfertilizer.Everydayitgaveoutalotofpoisonousgas,whichpollutedtheenvironment.名师点拨“原句”中分别由which引导两个定语从句，重复且单调，将第二个定语从句转换为现在分词短语作状语后，不仅表达多样，而且言简意明。•→Therewasalargefactory,whichproducedfertilizer.•Everydayitgaveoutalotofpoisonousgas,•pollutingtheenvironment.5．由于老师的帮助，我的英语进步很大。因为我的英语进步很大，我确信我能考上更好的大学。Becausemyteacherhelpsme,myEnglishhasgreatlyimproved.BecausemyEnglishhasgreatlyimproved,I'msureIwillgotoabetteruniversity.→Withmyteacherhelpingme,myEnglishhasgreatlyimproved.BecausemyEnglishhasgreatlyimproved,I'msureIwillgotoabetteruniversity.名师点拨“原句”两处重复出现由because引导的从句，读起来很别扭。换用“with＋现在分词的复合结构”后，读起来给人的感觉大不一样。对点训练Ⅰ.运用非谓语动词转换复合句1．Assoonastheysawafewpeoplestillintheburninghouse,theyrushedintoittosavethemwithouthesitation.→_______________________________________________________________________,theyrushedintoittosavethemwithouthesitation.2．Wethinkitisnecessarythatmiddleschoolstudentsshouldlearnaforeignlanguageandwealsothinkthatitispossiblethattheycanmasterone.→Wethinkitisnecessarythatmiddleschoolstudentsshouldlearnaforeignlanguageandwealsothink_______.3．Itookpartinthemeeting,whichwasheldinBeijinglastFriday.Itwasveryinstructive,whichwashostedbyamanagerwhocametoourcompanyyesterday.→Itookpartinthemeeting__________________lastFriday.Itwasveryinstructive,whichwashostedbyamanager_________________.4．Motherwenttoworkinahurry,andshedidn'thavebreakfast.Shewasasbusyasabeethesedaysandcamebackhomeverylate.→Motherwenttoworkinahurry______________.Shewasasbusyasabeethesedays,__________________________.答案：1.Onseeingafewpeoplestillintheburninghouse2.itpossibleforthemtomasterone3.heldinBeijing;comingtoourcompanyyesterday4.withouthavingbreakfast;comingbackhomeverylateⅡ.运用非谓语动词转换短文（根据一般表达写出该短文的高级表达）1.北京市有大量的出租车司机，他们每天全心全意地为乘客服务，对北京市的交通发挥着重要作用。他们起早贪黑，赚钱养家糊口。有一次，我下车时不小心把手机忘在了车上，但当我和司机同志联系上之后，他立即开车把手机送到了我的家门口，让我感动不已。一般表达：TherearealargenumberoftaxidriversinBeijing.Theyservepassengersheartandsoul.TheyplayanimportantpartinthetrafficofBeijing.Theymakesomemoney.Theyworkfromdawntillnight.Oneday,IleftmycellphoneinthetaxiItook.Igotintouchwiththedriver.HedrovetomyhomeandgaveitBacktome.Iwasveryexcited.高级表达：_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：TherearealargenumberoftaxidriversinBeijing,servingpassengersheartandsoulandplayinganimportantpartinthetrafficofBeijing.InordertomakesomemoneytosupporttheirFamilies,theyworkfrom