TEM_4_Note-Writing专四便条写作

TEM4WRITINGNOTE-WRITINGDEFINITIONANOTEissimilartoashortletter,buttheformofthenoteissimplerandthelanguageusedisoftennotsoformal.FORMATTimeSalutationMessageComplimentaryclosureSignature专四作文要求：格式正确，语言得体，时间为10分钟，单词为50-60个单词评分往往从格式、内容、语言、字数这四方面来考虑。TEM4便条评分标准1.格式(3分)包括日期、称呼和结尾三部分，各占1分。其中每一部分有“正确写法”和“正确位置”组成，各占本部分的0.5分。1)日期(1分)正确写法：April18April18,2009April18th,2009正确位置：右上角2)称呼(1分)称呼是指写便条人对收便条人的称谓，一般都以Dear开头，写在日期下一两行、留出左页边空白，顶格写。TEM4试卷中一般对写便条人与收便条人之间的关系作了提示。提示中的“you”指的是写便条人，提到的另一方便是收便条人。称呼时，一般只需在其名字前加Dear即可，如DearSusan，DearTom。若此人有头衔(socialtitle)，称呼时，便要保留其头衔，例如Dr.Pierce，要称DearDr.Pierce，不称DearPierce。如果提示中的另一方是以Mrs.Wang或Mr.Wang出现，称呼时也只需在其前加Dear便可，即称DearMrs.Wang或DearMr.Wang，若只称DearWang则视为不妥。当对方为亲属时，在Dear后面加上表示亲属关系大写的字眼即可，如DearGrandpa，DearAunt称呼后面要用逗号。3)结尾(1分)如前所述，结尾包括结尾套语和签名。(1)结尾套语结尾套语的位置一般是在正文最后一行的下面，从便条的中央部分开始，稍向右缩进。开头字母要大写，末尾要用逗号。结尾套语为写便条人对收便条人的谦称或客套以示礼貌，措辞的变化按照不同的关系而定。现分述如下：①致不熟悉的人，宜用较庄重的套语，如Yourssincerely，Sincerelyyours，或Sincerely等。②对上级、长者，除了可用上述较庄重的套语，也可用Yoursrespectfully或Respectfullyyours。③对一般朋友或熟人可用①中提到的较庄重的套语，也可用Yours等较为随便的套语。④对密友则采用较随便的套语为宜。例如，Yours，Love，Withlove，Bestwishes，Bestregards等等。⑤对亲属可用下列任何一种：Love，Withlove，Allmylove，Yoursaffectionately，Affectionatelyyours，Lovinglyyours，Yourslovingly，但对亲人，不宜用Sincerelyyours~由于TEM4便条写作一般是针对考生日常生活或学习相关的事情，写作的对象一般是其朋友、老师、熟人，因此，TEM4通常只接受Yourssincerely，Sincerelyyours，Sincerely，或Yours这几种结尾套语。(2)签名即写便条人署名，位于结尾套语下，偏右。有时TEM4指定了写便条人的名字，签名时应采用那个名字。若无指定名字，考生也不宜用自己的真名。一般只需写英文名不写姓。TEM4便条评分标准2.内容与语言(6分)1)情景描述2)具体的言语行为表达3)首句需用自己正确的语言表达，完全抄提示扣1分4)语言表达较差(语法和拼写错误)，扣1－3分3.字数要求:50－60字(80,40)2008WriteonANSWERSHEETTWOanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:Jane,yourclassmate,isthinkingofsubscribingtoanEnglish-languagenewspaper.Andyouwouldliketorecommendonetoher.Writeanote,tellingherwhichnewspaperitisanddescribingtwofeaturesofthepaper.Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.3分Jane：IhearthatyouarethinkingsubscribingtoanEnglish-languagenewspaper.IthinkChinaDailyisverygood.Youcanhavealookatit.It’sonlymysuggestion,youcanconsideritcarefullyanddecideyourself.Mary,4.225分April,22,2008DearJane,DoyouwanttosubscribeaEnglishnewspaper.Isuggestthatyoucanhave21Century.ItsaboutChinesemattersandyoucanbuywithothertogether,sothatyoucansavesomemoney.What’syouropinion?YourMary9分Apr.22DearJane,IheardthatyouaresubscribingtoanEnglishlanguagepaper.Istronglyrecommendthat21Centurybeagoodchoice.Foronething,itslanguageisveryidiomaticandwecanimproveourEnglishbyreadingit.Foranother,itcoversawiderangeofcontents,politicalnews,sportsnews,andevensomejokes.Itshouldbeusefultobroadenourmind.Manystudentshavesaiditworth.Yours,MaryTYPERequestInvitation,AppointmentComplaint,DissatisfactionApologyCongratulationThanksMessageTransfer&ForSaleNotice&PosterGreeting命题方式年份主题或题目体裁1995自行车出售告示1996祝贺同学演讲获奖祝贺1997为没邀请人而道歉道歉1998入场券转让留言1999安慰病人安慰2000留言劝说应聘劝说2001爽约道歉道歉2002询问所转让的随身听的情况留言2003婉拒晚会邀请婉拒2004对同学考试失利安慰安慰2005邀请参加音乐会邀请2006请求加入索要信息请求2007婉拒加入游戏俱乐部婉拒2008给同学订阅一份英语报纸提建议建议2009给同学推荐一份兼职建议2010给同学举办party提出意见建议2011邀请同学去你的家乡度假邀请INVITATIONMay5,2008DearMrs.Li,WeshouldbeverymuchpleasedifyouandMr.LiwoulddinewithusonWednesdayat7o’clock(诚挚邀请对方参加晚宴).Itwillbequiteasmallparty,aswehaveonlyaskedMr.andMrs.AndersonandMissChangLing,allclosefriendsofours(简单介绍晚宴内容与参加者).Wetrustyouwillbedisengagedandabletogiveusthepleasureofyourcompany（再次表示诚意）.Trulyyours,Tom邀请函一般应该包括以下内容：诚挚邀请对方参加某一活动；概括介绍的内容和安排；再次表示诚意。ACCEPTTHEINVITATIONApril18,2009DearAmelia,It’ssokindofyoutoinvitemetothedinnerparty.Iwouldliketocome.Iwillgototheplace(Ishallbeveryhappytocallatyourhouse)rightafterIfinishmyworkatabout5p.m.thisevening.ThankyouagainforyourwonderfulhospitalityandIamlookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.Yours,Fiona表示接受的便条至少会包括以下内容：感谢；确切表示会赴宴。Wearedelightedtoaccept…Itiswithgreatpleasure…Wearesincerelyhappytojoinyou…常用表达方式：DECLINETHEINVITATIONApril18,2009DearAmelia,It’ssokindofyoutoinvitemetothedinnerparty.IwouldliketobutIhaveameetingtoattendthisevening.PleasegivemybestregardstothemallandIhopemyabsencewillnotcauseyouanyseriousinconvenience.Havefun.Yours,Fiona常用句型：1）Ishallhavetosaynotoyourkindinvitation…2)Veryregretfully,…3)Unfortunately,itwillbeimpossible…4)Becauseof…,wefindwecannot…CONGRATULATIONApr.18DearMartin,I’msopleasedtohearthatyou’vegotthescholarshiptotheUniversityofColumbia.Congratulationsonyoursuccess.Youreallydeserveitbecauseyouaresuchanintelligentandhardworkingstudent.I’veneverdoubtedyourabilitytoachievegreataims.Youwillhaveabrilliantfuture,andIwishyouallthebestinyourlifeandacademicstudiesintheUSA.Yours,Mary常用句型：1）Iamwritingtoexpressmyheartiestcongratulationsonyour…2)Acceptmysincerecongratulationsfromthebottomofmyheartonyour…3)IwishtocongratulateyouonyourfinishinghighschoolandenteringQingHuaUniversity…4)Iammuchdelightedtohear/learnyouhavepassed/won.AsoneofyourfriendsIamveryproudofyou.5)ItiskindofnewsIliketohear,becauseitprovesonceagainahard-workingmanalwaysgetsahead.Letmeoffermywarmestcongratulations.Iknowyouaregoingtobeagreatsuccessin…EXERCISE你的朋友Shirley通过努力，终于考上上海外国语大学成为硕士