Aletterofgivingadvice建议信写作ABC如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三部分1.Heading点题;一两个句子;概括性;暗示性2.Body中心记述部分;层次分明3.Ending小结;呼应主题建议信写作的注意事项:a.这类文章一定要符合英语信件的基本格式。b.这类文章的基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。建议信的模板(1)提出写信的原因或提出对方面临的问题(2)过渡句引出建议第一段第二段(3)提出第一条建议;(4)第一条建议的理由;(5)提出第二条建议及理由;(6)提出第三条建议及理由第三段(7)总结并表达本人的愿望•注意衔接词使用:•表先后次序:•First,second,third….Finally•Firstly,secondly,…eventually•tobeginwith/tostartwith,atlast•递进关系:furthermore;what’smore;notonly...butalso...;not...but...;,besides;inotherwords;ontheonehand...,ontheotherhand...;meanwhile;atthesametime;假设你是李华,你的笔友张明来信说他英语学的不大好,请你给他写一封回信,提一些建议,帮助他学好英语。内容提示:1.课堂上认真听讲,记好笔记2.课后认真独立完成作业3.每天进行英语听说练习4.加强课外阅读扩大词汇量建议信模板●Para1I’msorrytohearthat…../I’msorryyouarehavingtroublein……however,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou./Iamsorrytohearthatyou…..soIwritethisletterwiththepurposeofgivingyousomeadviceonhowto●Para2First,whynot…..?Ifyoudothis,…../First,you’dbetter…..Otherwise,youwill…..Secondly,youshould/can….Then/ThatwayThirdly,itwouldbeagoodideaif….Bydoingthis,…●Para3Idohopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful./Idohopethatmysuggestionswillbehelpfultoyou.IamsorrytohearthatyouhavetroublelearningEnglish,soIwritethisletterwiththepurposeofgivingyousomeadviceonhowtolearnitbetter.First,youshouldattachgreatimportancetolisteningcarefullyinclassandtakingnotes.Second,whatworriesmeisthatmanystudentscopythehomework,whichisbadfortheirstudy.Soyoumustmakeupyourmindtodoitbyyourself.Besides,itisofgreatimportancetopracticelisteningandspeakingeveryday.OnlybypracticingmorecanwelearnEnglishbetter.Thelastbutnottheleast,you’dbetterreadmorearticlesafterclass.ItisawidevocabularythathelpsyouimproveyourEnglish.AsfarasIamconcerned,practicemakesperfect.OnlywhenyoutryyourbestwillyouhaveagoodcommandofEnglish.连接词•First•Second•Besides•Thelastbutnottheleast积累好词好句•①havetroublelearningEnglish•②withthepurposeof•③attachgreatimportancetolistening•④whatworriesmeisthatmanystudentscopythehomework,whichisbadfortheirstudy.•⑤makeupyourmindtodo•⑥itisofgreatimportancetodo积累好词好句•⑦OnlybypracticingmorecanwelearnEnglishbetter.OnlywhenyoutryyourbestwillyouhaveagoodcommandofEnglish.•⑧ItisawidevocabularythathelpsyouimproveyourEnglish.•假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。•要点:1.参加中文学习班。2.看中文书刊和电视。3.学唱中文歌曲。4.交中国朋友。注意:1.词数120左右2.开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。DearPeter,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TryandwritemeinChinesenexttime.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua•DearPeter,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou’llbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapersandmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou’lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.TrytowritetomeinChinesenexttime.BestwishesLiHua练习•假如你是李华,从你的美国朋友Peter来信中得知,他一直因为自己身体太胖而苦恼,请你用英文给他写一封Email,提出你的建议。主要内容包括:•1.保持饮食平衡,不要吃的太多;•2.适量运动;•3.不吃垃圾食品。•参考词汇:过重overweight名词;保持饮食平衡keepabalanceddiet练习•DearPeter,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishesforyou!Yours,LiHua