专题限时集训(十九)读后续写训练2(对应学生用书第193页),,)A(2017·浙江吴越联盟二模)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。“Willyoutakemetogotrickortreating,Chad?”ZoeaskedwhenIcamehomefromschool.Mylittlesisterwasalreadywearingherfairywingsandtakingawand(魔杖).“Mom'stakingyou,”Isaid.“Mommyslippedonthematandhurtherankle,”mysistersaid.Momlimped(一瘸一拐地走)downthehallwayjustthen,andherleftanklewaswrappedinabandage.“I'llbeOKsittinginthecar.ButcouldyoutakeZoefromdoortodoor?She'sreallybeenlookingforwardtoHalloween.”“I'vebeenlookingforwardtoit,too,”Isaidanddidn'twantanythingoutofexpectation.Ihadtoadmit,though,ZoewasmoreexcitedthanIwas.She'dbeentryingonhercostume(化妆服)everydayforaweek.“I'mafairy,”shesaid,twirling(旋转)around.“Ihaveplanswithmyfriends,”Isaid.Ourplansconsistedofracingaroundtheneighborhoodtocollectasmuchcandyaswecould,notbotheringtoomuchwithcostumes.“Please,Chad,”Zoebegged.“Fine.”Therewouldbemychanceforfunandcandy,Ithought.Zoetwirledonhertoes.Later,ZoewalkedtothefirsthousewhileIhungback.“Idon'twantanyonetoknowthatI'mtakingyoutogotrickortreating,”I'dsaidtoher.I'dtoldmyfriendsthatIcouldn'thangoutwiththemtonight,butIdidn'ttellthemwhy,beingafraidofbeinglaughedat.“Takeacandybag,”saidMomsittinginthecarattheendoftheblock.WhenIturnedback,Zoewasalready15stepsahead.“Zoe,wait!”Zoestoppedandturnedaround.“Hurry,hurry,”shesaid.Irantocatchup.LookingafterherwouldbemoreworkthanI'dexpected.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:“Trickortreat!”shesaidatthenexthouse.Paragraph2:Onourwaytothecar,weranintomyfriendJeffonthesidewalk.【写作指导】原文讲的是妹妹请求哥哥带她去玩万圣节的游戏,哥哥刚开始因为和朋友们有约定而不愿带她,后来禁不住妹妹的再三请求而决定带她玩。根据第一段的提示句可知,本段的主要内容应该是妹妹到邻居家“Trickortreat”的过程的描述。而第二段则是遇到了哥哥的朋友之后的故事。第一段描述情景较为简单,但是第二段的故事一定要和原文中哥哥的心理变化保持一致。【参考范文】“Trickortreat!”shesaidatthenexthouse.Thedooropened.Awomansteppedout.“Aren'tyousocute?”Zoehelduphercandybag.“Areyoualone?”thewomanasked,lookingaroundworriedly.“No,”Zoepointedafingeratmyhidingplaceinthebushes.“Oh,no,”Ithought.She'sgoingtoannouncemetotheworld.“Canhehaveacandy,too,please?”Zoeaskedinstead.Thewomanlaughedandgavehersomemorecandies,whichwasoutofmyexpectation.People'sfaceslitupassoonastheysawZoe.Onourwaytothecar,weranintomyfriendJeffonthesidewalk.“ThisishowyouspentHalloween?”hesaid.Buthedidn'tlaughatme.Onthecontrary,hesaidIwasluckytohavealovelysister.“YoubecameaHalloweenherobecauseoflookingafteryoursister.”“Yes!”IsaidIwasZoe'ssuperheronow.Aswerodebackhome,Momsmiledatme.“Anddidyouhavefun?”“Actually,Idid,”Isaid.HalloweenwithZoehadturnedouttobeprettymagical.B【导学号:38144070】(2017·浙江温州中学期中)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。TheeightyearoldCarollivedwithherfatherDavid,motherMayandelderbrotherRob.Thelittlefamilyhappilylivedinabeautifulvillagesurroundedwithbeautifulnature.Thevillagewasatthefootofamountain,withbeautifulviewsofthesnowymountain.Thefamilysurvivedongrowingseasonalplantsandtrees.Theirlifeistotallysurroundedbynatureandbeauty.Whiletheylivedaveryhappylife,Caroldidnotlovethebeautifulatmosphereofthevillage.Shereallywantedtomoveintothecityandenjoythecitylife.Shewantedtoshop,movearoundthecity,watchmovies,andeatinfantasticrestaurantsandcafes,etc.However,therewashardlyanychancethatCarol'sfamilymovedtothecityastheyhadeverythinginthevillage.Oneday,Carolfellasleepduringtheearlynoonandshehadasoundsleep.Ofcourse,shehadastrangedream.Shesawhergrandmotherinherdreamasafairyandherdeceasedgrandmothergrantedherawish.Carolrequestedherthatshewouldlovetoenjoythecitylifeasshealwaysdesired.GrandmotherunderstoodthedesireofCarol,butstillwantedtoconvinceherthatthepeacefulvillagelifeisbetterthanthecitylife.ShetoldCarol,“Baby,youcannothaveaccesstofreshfruitsandvegetablesfromplantsasyouhaveatyourhome.Youcannotbreathefreshair.Youcannotplaywithanimals.Youcanhardlyfindanytrees.Youwillnotfindpeaceasyouseehere!Doyoustillwanttogotothecity?”Withouthearingtheconcerns,Carolaskedhergrandmothertograntthewish.Grandmothergrantedherwishbutwithacondition.Carolwastoldthatshewouldonlyhave6hourstospendinthecity.Later,shewouldreturnbacktothevillage.Carolagreed.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Carolthenfoundherselfinthecitywithherfriends.Paragraph2:Carol'sbrotherRobwascallingherforlunchandCarolwokeup.【写作指导】原文记述了一个生活在山村的女孩渴望过上城里人的生活的故事。原文的后半段写这个女孩有一天睡着了。而之后的描写都是梦境。根据原文的结构以及第一段的提示句,本段应该是描述这个孩子梦中在城市生活的故事。而第二段的提示句暗示本段应该描写梦醒了之后发生的事情。【参考范文】Carolthenfoundherselfinthecitywithherfriends.Carolandherfriendswenttowatchmovies.Afterthattheyatedeliciousfoodinarestaurantandshoppedinahugemall.Carolwashappythatshehadthechancetoexperiencethelifeinthecity.Yetatthesametime,sheunderstoodthateverythingtoldbyhergrandmotherwastrueinthecity.Therewasnopeaceandnosilence;thecitylifewasfastandrushing.Theairqualityisnotsatisfying.Shecouldhardlyfindanyanimalorevenatree.Carol'sbrotherRobwascallingherforlunchandCarolwokeup.Sherecalledwhathappenedjustnowinherdreamandrealizedthatherlifeinthevillagewithherfamilywasfarmorewonderfulthanthecitylife.Carolunderstoodthatshewashavingamorejoyfullife.Shesharedherdreamwithherfam