Unit-1-Great-Scientists-Writing

WritingPersuasiveWriting——Letter英语高考作文评分标准1.本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。4.评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。6.如书写较差，将分数降低一个档次。7.内容要点可用不同方式表达，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。第五档(很好)；(21-25分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.覆盖所有内容要点。3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。第一档(差)：(1-5分)1.未完成试题规定的任务。2.明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4.较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。5.缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。6.信息未能传达给读者。Whatshouldwedo?•格式：正确•字数：90-110(80-120)•书写：美观，整齐•内容：要点齐全，层次分明，重点突出用词准确、得体、高级。写的句子：应用较多而且正确的语法结构和词汇，较复杂结构（避免只使用简单句，尝试使用带从句的句子）句子之间：有连接词，致使句与句之间通顺连贯段落之间：有过渡语，致使全文结构紧凑1.2.3.4.文体时态人称信件一般现在时Thefirstperson（第一人称）Thesecondperson（第二人称）审题的步骤:内容：主题，结构PersuasiveWriting——Letter格式和内容称呼：正文（三段论）结束语写信人DearBob,I'msorrytolearnthatyoulikecomputergamesverymuchandoftenstayuplateplayingthem.I'mwritingtopersuadeyoutochangethishabit.Itiswell-knownthatthecomputergamesareveryexciting.However,theycangreatlyinfluencebothofyourhealthandstudiesifyouspenttoomuchtimeonthem.First,itisbadforyourhealth,especiallyyoureyes.Second,ifittakestoomuchtimeofyourfreetime,youhavenotimetodosomethingimportantlikereading.Third,ifyouoftenstayuplate,youwillfeeltiredthefollowingdayandwon'tbeabletodowellatschool.SoIhopeyouunderstandthebadeffectsofplayingcomputergamesandstopit.Yours,LiHua（引出话题，表明目的）（总结全文，表达祝愿）（阐述理由;给出建议）•I'msorrytolearnthatyoulikecomputergamesverymuch•youaresocrazyaboutcomputergames.•thecomputergamesareveryexciting•playingcoumputergamesisveryexcitingandalsocan...____________.•First,•Second，likereading(比如说阅读，除了阅读还有别的比打游戏更重要的例子吗？)•Third,....Yours,——————？DearJohn,I'msorrytolearnthatyoulikecomputergamesverymuchandoftenstayuplateplayingthem.I'mwritingtopersuadeyoutochangethishabit.Itiswell-knownthatthecomputergamesareveryexciting.However,theycangreatlyinfluencebothofyourhealthandstudiesifyouspenttoomuchtimeonthem.First,itisbadforyourhealth,especiallyyoureyes.Second,ifittakestoomuchtimeofyourfreetime,youhavenotimetodosomethingimportantlikereading.Third,ifyouoftenstayuplate,youwillfeeltiredthefollowingdayandwon'tbeabletodowellatschool.SoIhopeyouunderstandthebadeffectsofplayingcomputergamesandstopit.Yours,LiHua劝说信模板DearXX,I'msorrytolearnthat...Inmyopinion,itisanotgoodwayto...SoI'mwritingtopersuadeyouto...(点明主题，说明目的)Herearemyreasons.Thefirstoneisthat..../First,...Second,...Third,...Therefore,Isuggestthatyoushould...Besides,ifIwereyou,Iwould...(说明原因，给出建议)Inconclusion,Ihopeyou...Pleasetakemyadviceintoconsiderationandmakeafinaldecision.(总结祝愿)Yourssincerely,LiHua