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2020/2/292原因型作文:用来解释某种现象和情况,可以是说明自然现象比如:Whyareflowerssored?也可是某种新社会现象,比如:WhydoesChinesedivorceraterise?WhydoesChinesepeople’sdietchange??Theyarejustsomequestions,ifrequiredtowritesomeessaysaboutthem,Howtotitle?WhyFlowersAreSoRed?2020/2/294英语标题一般采用名词短语或句子,不采用动词短语.ABoominAdultEducationEnthusiasmforExtremeSportsChildren’sSchoolbagsAreGettingHeavier介绍中国新年国外学生如何轻松愉快地过寒假告诉你一个真实的美国2020/2/295ThestructureofthiswritingPIS(1)describethephenomenonandbringaboutthegeneralproblemtobediscussedS(2)morespecificforthephenomenonPIIS(3)Thesis(论题),prepareforthefollowingexplanationsS(4)CauseIS(5)DetailIS(6)DetailIIS(7)CauseIIS(8)DetailIS(9)DetailIIPIIIS(10)Conclusion(common)/solution(badthings)2020/2/296Theinformationconcerned:学生为什么会逃课WhyStudentsDon’tGotoClassesDescribingthephenomenon:下午1点30分，《药学信息检索》老师面对偌大一个教室稀稀拉拉只坐了二十几个人，不由伤心流泪。她说：“我很想知道原因。”全年级五个建制班，150余人，只有不到1/5的人到场。Listingthereasonsreason1reason2Supportingdetails:教学方式“涛声依旧”。长期以来，教师教，学生学，靠点名来强迫学生上课，全然不考虑市场的需求变化，全然不考虑学生的实际需要，这已经成为许多大学教师的授课模式。教材陈旧Supportingdetails:比如，《运输与保险》是10年前的教材,《运筹学》是1987年的教材。2020/2/299Conclusionorsolution:一些大学生们为什么不愿上课？或许，应该反思的不是学生，而是教师。面对学生从课堂上大量流失的严酷现实,到了老师及相关教育部门应该采取一定的措失的时候了.2020/2/2910逃课:Theexpressionsconcerned:beunwillingtohaveclasses,skipclasses,studentabsencefromclasses,leaveclasses,cutclasses教学方式:teachingstyle,teachingmethod涛声依旧:一成不变,老样子Theyjustkeep/sticktotheoldstyleduringtheirteaching.Theirteachingstyleremainsunchangedforages.Theirteachingmethodbecomesoldfashioned.与市场需求严重脱节Itcannotmeetthedemandofoursociety.照本宣科Theteachersjustrepeatwhatthebooksays.Theyarejusttherecorderofthebooks.2020/2/2911Inoneclass,thereweremerely20studentsattending,lessthanonefifthwhoarerequiredtocome.Theteachershouldbeverysadwhenfacingit,whileitisneverasurprisenowadaysinourcampus.Infact,ifwelistentothestudentspatiently,wearenothardtogetreasons.Thefirstreason,isthattheteachersdon’tchangetheirteachingstyleandmethodatall,remainingtheout-of-datedones.Theyjustrepeatwhatthebookssayandforcestudentstolisten,notcaringstudents’needandfeelings.Thisphenomenonalsoisduetotheoldteachingmaterialswhichtheteachersareusing.Somebookswerewritten/theversionsseveralyearsago,orevendecadesago,whichcannotmeetthedemandofthesocietychangingquickly.Students’NonattendancefromClasses2020/2/2912Whyaresomanycollegestudentsunwillingtoattendclasses?Maybeitistheteachersratherthanthestudentswhoshouldponderuponthisproblem.Whydosomanycollegestudentschoosetoskipclasses?Ithinkitishightimeourteachersandrelatedpeopleconsideredaboutthisproblemandtakesomemeasures.2020/2/2913如何对材料进行初步整理加工•刘翔不能从艺的四个理由2020/2/2914下一页上一页SampleWriting1-2TheBoominStudyingAbroad透过出国留学热这一现象阐明其深层次的原因2020/2/2915下一页上一页TheBoominStudyingAbroadParagraphWriting1-21)Atfirstglance,theboominstudyingabroadisindeedsuggestiveofgreatsuccessinourall-roundreformaswellasmuchimprovementinpeople’slivingstandards.2)Butadeeperandcriticallookintothephenomenoncanrevealsomethingworthyofcarefulconsideration.3)Tothebestofmyunderstanding,theboomisaproofoftheurgent2020/2/2916下一页上一页ParagraphWriting1-2needforustoimprovethecurrentsystemofoureducation.4)Comparedwiththewesterneducationalconcepts,typicalofbuildingindividuality,ours,distinguishedbyexam-orientedculture,shouldkeeppacewithchangingtimes.5)Itisalsoanindicationoftheincreasinglyintensecompetitionamongjobmarketathome.6)Asagrowingbodyofevidenceshows,thecompetitionmakesfeaturesofrequirementofastrongeducationbackground,degreesfromthefamousuniversitiesabroadpreferred.2020/2/2917上一页THEENDParagraphWriting1-27)Andaboveall,itisaside-effectofblindbeliefintheeducationabroad.8)ImpressedwiththesuccessofsomeoverseasChinese,moreandmoreparentscherishasweetillusionthatstudyingabroadwillensureabrightfuturefortheirchildren;butinreality,foreveryoverseasChinesekissedbyfortune,therearethousandsmorewhosedreamshavenevercometrue.2020/2/2918Writing1-3（原因分析类）写作模式参考范文WhatCausesSomethingNew1.近几年在社会上出现了······2.导致该现象的原因3.分析该现象的社会影响2020/2/2919写作模式（原因分析类）Para.1:1)Believeitornot/Likeitornot,theseyearshavewitnessedaboomin…/apopularity(resurgence/worsening/crisis/decline/growth/revival/spread)of…inoursociety/ontheChinesecampus.2)Accordingto…,people,especiallycollegestudents,areshowingmoreandmoreinterestin…3)Togetabettersenseofit,itisnecessaryforustofindoutitscauses.(划线部分可被替换)Back下一页2020/2/2920Para.2:4)Acloseranalysis/study/observationofthephenomenoncanfindthatthreemainfactorsarewellworthourconcern/shouldcallformoreofourconcern.5)Inthefirstplace,itistheproductof…,forwhich…(原因I)6)Inthesecond,itisseen,among…,asanidealwayof…,since…(原因II)7)Andaboveall,itisaninevitableresultof…(原因III)8)While…,infact,…(划线部分可被替换)Writing1-3Back下一页上一页2020/2/2921Para.3:9)Theeffectsofthischangeonoursocial/collegelifearepositive/negative/amixedone.10)Ontheonehand,...(分析I)11)Ontheother,...(分析II)12)Withmoreandmore…added/attachedtothetrend,Iamfullyconvinced/Iamdeeplyworried,itwillcertainly…/isboundto…inthetimetocome.(划线部分可被替换)Writing1-3Back下一页上一页2020/2/2922Writing3-7Back下一页上一页WhatCausesaBoominCelebratingForeignFestivals1.近几年大学校园出现了一股过洋节热。2.阐明导致该现象的原因。3.分析该现象的社会影响。2020/2/2923Para.1:1)Beli