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Unit8Myfavoritewriter（我最喜欢的作家）写作话题：Famouspeople(名人名家)WritingGuidelines(写作方法指导)1.评价人物的说明文写作线索一般叙述的线索可分为以下几种：(1)以时间为线索，描写名人成名的心路历程。(2)以人物的成就或作品为线索，对名人展开叙述和正面的评价。(3)以人物的思想行为及认知的过程为线索来展开。①works②agreatsuccess③difficultyinlife④oneofthemostsuccessfulmusicians,⑤inAmericanhistory⑥afanof⑦thebestbasketballplayerinChina⑧singlive,⑨goodolddays…1.Languagebox（语言工具箱）名词词块:（1）Chunks（词块）（）生活中困难，（）一位成功的音乐家，（）巨大成功，（）一位粉丝，（）现场演唱，（）作品，（）在美国历史中，（）昔日好时光，（）中国最好的篮球运员④②⑥⑧①⑤⑨⑦动词词块：①beinterestedin②overcomedifficulties③havefundoing④nevergiveup⑤thebook/recorded/songwaswrittenby⑥work...as⑦enjoysuccess(in)⑧setanexcellentexampleto⑨remindsbof…（）担任（）克服困难（）永不放弃（）由…写的书/唱片/歌曲，（）享受成功，（）享受干某事,（）对…有兴趣，（）让某人想起⑥②④⑤⑦③①⑧形容词词词块：①asuccessfulsong/CD/book②amazing/interestingbook/movie③fantastic④excellent⑤fabulous⑥well-known…（）有趣的书/电影（）成功的歌曲/CD/书（）极好的（）美妙的（）出名的（）优秀的②①③⑤⑥④介词词块：①inthefuture②inlife③notonly…butalso④including⑤suchas…（）将来/未来（）不仅…而且…（）在我们的生活中（）包括（）例如①③②④⑤（2）Patterns（句型）1.Ihopeto...;2.Asweknow…;3.…have/hasdone/been...since;4.It’sone’sdreamto…;5.Iwill…;6.Thereisanoldsaying...;7.Doing…isexcitedandenjoyable;8.Sothat;9.Itmakes…thinkabout;10.Itremindthat…;2.Extensivelanguages（拓展性语言）(1)Nopaid,nogain.没有付出。就没有收获。(2)Themanwhohasmadeuphismindtowinwillneversay“impossible”.(BonaparteNapoleon)凡是想决心取得胜利的人是从来不说“不可能的”。(法国皇帝，拿破仑.B.)(3)Progressistheactivityoftodayandtheassuranceoftomorrow.(Emerson,Americanthinker)进步是今天的活动，明天的保证。(美国思想家，爱默生)(4)Keepongoing,nevergiveup.勇往直前，决不放弃。(5)Youthinkyoucan,youcan.你认为你行，你就行。(6)Holdontoyourdreams.追逐梦想。(7)Constantdroppingwearsthestone.水滴石穿。(8)Thereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成。Chooseoneofthefamouspeoplethatyouareinterestedinandfillinthemindmap.Task11.FamouspersonLuxun2.Personalinformation(age,birthplace…)bornin1881inShaoxing,Zhejianganddiedin19363.Experiencethatyouknowabouthim/herquotedmedicinestudiesandbeganwriting4.Worksorachievements“TheTrueStoryofAhQ”,“AMadman’sDiary”,“KongYiJi”and“medicine”.5.Whatyoulearnfromhim/herhard-working6.YourgoalsordreamsbecomeafamouswriterPossibleversionTask2Accordingtothemindmapthatmayhelpyourwritinginthepassage.BeginningEndingBody1.LuxunisagreatChinesewriter.2.HeisfromShaoxin,Zhejiang.3.Hewasbornin1886anddiedin1936.4.IhavereadLuxun’sbookssinceIwasaprimarystudent.1.Luxunisathinkertoo.2.Hewrotealotofnovels.3.Hisnovelhasbeentranslateintoseverallanguages.4.LuxunwenttoJapantostudymedicine.5.Luxunquotedmedicinestudiesandbeganwriting.1.IhavebeenafanofLuxun.2.IwanttobeawriterlikeLuxun.3.Itrymybesttomakemydreamcometrue.Task1审题While-writing每人都有自己仰慕崇拜的偶像和心驰神往的文学艺术作品，请你以“myfavorite...”为题，写一篇80词左右的名人偶像介绍。文章内容包括：1.人物的生平简介，人物的作品及成就;2.作品的影响和个人的感受。体裁：_______________________人称：_______________________时态：_______________________第一人称和第三人称一般现在时，过去式和现在完成时说明文Task2写一写:写初稿。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Task3查一查用词方面:代词主格,宾格；名词单复数；动词搭配；副词位置句子方面:篇章方面:细节方面:句子完整；主谓一致；动词时态；连词使用内容完整；要点齐全；布局合理单词拼写；标点符号；大小写After-writingTask1:欣赏与评价①请交换习作互相欣赏，用红笔划出对方的亮点,并对不足的地方进行适当修改。②你能给同学什么建议，使得对方的习作更好呢？③根据worksheet上的评分标准，给同伴的习作打分。评分表项目标准自我评价同伴评价教师评价结构（3分）段落合理（2分）衔接自然(1分)内容（8分）人物的生平简介（2分）人物的作品及成就（2分）作品的影响和个人的感受（4分）拓展合理(1分)语言（3分）词汇丰富(1分)句法正确，语言优美(2分)卷面（1分）书写工整（1分）注意使用修改字符：优美句子～；漏词∧；错处：○；去掉／；语法错误G,人称错误P，时态错误T.MyfavoritesportsstarYaoMingisawell-knownbasketballplayer.Hewasbornin1980inShanghaiandhisparentswerebothbasketballplayers.YaoMingbegantoplaybasketballfortheShanghaiSharkswhenhewasateenager.In2002,hewenttoAmericaandplayfortheHustonRocketsinNBAasacenter.作者勇于使用复杂句高度概括名人的基本情况，可谓切入独特。Task2:参考范文1AsoneofthestarsinNBA,YaoMingworkedhardtorealizehisdreamandChinesepeopleareproudofhim.NowheisretiredandbecomesageneralmanagerinCBA.IhopethatYaoMingcanlivearelaxingandpeacefullifeafterretiring.【点评】文章主题部分词块、句式运用自如：well-known、asoneof、beproundofIhopethat...;殷实的文章内容折射出作者对名人素材精打细算。文章最后不忘表达对名人的祝福，结尾别具一格。MyfavoritesingerHaveyoueverheardthesongDaoxiang?Yes,itisfromJayChouwhoseChinesenameisZhouJielun.JayChouisoneofmyfavoritesingersandIhavebeeninterestedinhissongsforyears.ThesongDaoxiangencouragespeoplenottogiveupevenwhenlifeisdifficult.文章开头以现在完成时一般疑问句提问并自问自答道出名人作品，从而隆重推出自己的名人偶像，创意新颖Task2:参考范文2JayChouwassotalentedandcreativethathebecamefamousforhisspecialtraditionalChinesestyleR&BandRapafterafewyears’effort.Aspeoplesaid,“Constantdroppingwearsthestone.”Apartfrombeingoneofthemostsuccessfulpopsingersandsongwriters,thesedays,JayChouhasalsobeeninthemoviesasanactor.IalwaysintroduceJayChou’ssongstomyfriendsandclassmates.IhopetoseehimsingliveonedayandIhopeJayChoucanbringmoreexcellentworkstohisfansaroundtheworld.【点评】丰富的词块：beinterestedin,so…that,encourage,nottogiveup,apartfrom,afterafewyears’efforts等，使文章读起来流畅自然，免于重复累赘。Summary1.Howtowriteanarticleaboutfamouspeople.2.Learnsomeofth