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Englishwriting初中英语新课程标准五级写作目标：能根据写作要求，收集，准备素材能独立起草短文，短信等，并在教师指导下进行修改能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系能简单描述人物或事件能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明7-9年级分别完成三、四、五级目标中考英语作文8个常考话题一、介绍人和事件（自己、家庭、朋友、老师、个人变化、个人感受等）二、介绍地点（旅游等）三、校园生活（春游、校规、科目、学习困难等）四、课外生活（家庭生活、家务劳动、电影、个人爱好等）五、假期安排（计划、过去经历等）六、节假日活动（志愿者活动、过去经历）七、环境、健康（环保、疾病、食品健康等）八、个人观点建议（提建议、劝告等）DearDr.Know，I’mpleasedtowritetoaskforsomehelp.IwanttotellyousomeproblemswemeetinEnglishstudy.First，someofusaren’tinterestedinEnglish.WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing.Andthenit’ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.Solotsofusdon’thaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.What’smore,therearesomanynewwordswehaven’tmeetbeforeinthepassage.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecan’tunderstandthemainidea,letalone(更不用说)answerthequestionsaboutthem.Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.Canyouhelpus?HowcanweimproveourEnglish?Pleasegiveussomeusefuladvice.Thankyouverymuch.Pleasewritesoon.Mary(thebeginning)(theending)thebody（正文）basicstructure(基本结构安排)basicsteps(基本写作步骤)search（审）list（列）add(加:开头和结尾)connect(连)beautify(美：谚语/例子)健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。审(search)travelstayathomevisitfriendsorparentswork•如何度假•调查报告•倡议假日休闲stayathomeworkvisitfriendsorparentstravel列(list)根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。•Alotofpeopletravel.•Somepeoplestayathome.•Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.•Afewpeoplework.•Enjoyyourvacation.列(list)•Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.（thebeginning）•Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.•Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.（theending）加(add)•加首尾，使结构完整。•可以采取总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。•Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.•Accordingtoit,alotofpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.•Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.连(connect)Writingskills（“写”的技巧）方法一:善用词汇甚至善用高级词汇Whichisbetter?他们在海滩上听音乐。ATheylistenedtothemusiconthebeach.BTheyenjoyedthemusiconthebeach.Whichisbetter?我希望你能帮助我。AIwishyoucanhelpme.BI’mlookingforwardtoyourhelp.Whichisbetter?他们很早就到了。ATheyarrivedearly.BTheyarrivedasearlyastheycould.Whichisbetter?最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。AHisdogwassavedatlast.Hewasverysurprised.BTohissurprise,hisdogwassavedatlast.AIthinklearningEnglishisinteresting.BIfinditreallyfuntolearnEnglish.我认为学英语很有趣。我们应该保护环境。AWeshouldprotecttheenvironment.BIt’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.方法二:活用多种句型Writingskills（“写”的技巧）她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。ASheisveryyoung.Shecan’tcarrytheheavybox.BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.CSheissoyoungthatshecan’tcarrythe…DSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe…方法三:妙用关联词Writingskills（“写”的技巧）1.表示并列或递进:and,aswellas,both…and,what’smorenotonly…butalso,neither…nor2.表示选择:or,either…or3.表示转折:but,however,although\though,afterall,anyway4.表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,asaresult5.表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比:instead,not…but,while,inthesameway,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand7.表示解释:forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords,totellthetruth8.表示顺序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend9.表示强调:also,besides,especially,actually,infact10.表示结论:allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,inshort关联词(connectionwords)Let’stry•_____________Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.•Hedidn’tgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert______.•Welikedoingkindsofsports_____swimming,runningandhiking.•_____,hestoodup.Thenhegotout._____,hewentback.____________,hesmiled.Though\AlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinally\Atlast•Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.•Accordingtoit,alotofpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.•Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.连(connect)美(beautify)Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(beautify)Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(beautify)Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.Proverb（谚语）/saying加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。锻炼对学生有好处Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise…Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise.集中注意力于学习Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies.Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies...加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾