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主题：给交友有困难的同学提建议。I’msorryyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.[引出建议]Herearesometipstohelpyou.[列举建议]First,whynotgoandtalktopeoplestandingontheirown?Iagreethisisdifficultbutthatpersonmaybelonelytoo.Ifyoudothis,Iamsureyouwillsoonhaveanewfriend.Second，youcanbegintheconversationbyaskingabouttheirlikesanddislikes,(理由)whichwillmakeyoufindpeoplewiththesameinterests.Finally，youshouldtrytojoininadiscussion,(理由)lettingpeopleknowhowfriendlyyouare.Ihopeyoufindtheseideasuseful.一、篇章结构引出建议→列举建议与理由(→希望)二、句式模板1.引出建议可以用：⑴Herearemysuggestionsonhowto...⑵Suggestionson...canbelistedasfollows.⑶Thewaysforyouto...canbesuggestedasfollows.2.列举建议可以用：⑴firstofall/first/tobeginwith；second(ly)/then/besides/inaddition/what’smore；finally/lastly/lastbutnotleast⑵foronething...andforanother(thing)3.在列举的建议后常常会用起补充说明作用的分词短语、定语从句等说明提出此建议的理由或原因。三、语篇模板Itisknowntousallthatnothingismoreimportantthantokeephealthy.[引出]Thewaysforustokeepfitcanbesuggestedasfollows.[列举]Firstly,weshouldhaveahealthydiet,whichmeansavarietyoffoodincludingmeat,freshfruitsandvegetables.Secondly,drinkmorewaterinsteadofalotofdrinks.Lastly,dosomeexerciseeveryday,suchasrunning,swimming,playingbasketballandsoon,fortheyhelptorelaxourselvesaswellasbenefitourhealthalot.二、基础写作假定你是李华。在一个英文网络论坛上,你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖(post)寻求帮助：[写作内容]请根据以上帖子内容,给Grow-up回贴,并包括以下要点：1.你对这一问题的看法(已给出)；2.告诉Grown-up要理解而不要伤害母亲；3.给Grown-up提出解决问题的具体建议:多与母亲交流;行动上证明自己已成年。Hi,Grown-up，...Hi,Grown-up，Asastudentofyourage,Iunderstandyoursituationandtheproblemyouarefacingiscommonamongusteenagers.However,youshouldunderstandyourmotheranditiswisenottodoanythingthatmayhurtyourmother’sfeelings.[引出建议]Suggestionsonhowtodealwiththeproblemcanbelistedasfollows.[列举建议]First，it’sadvisabletotalkmorewithyourmom，(理由)whichwillhelpyouunderstandeachotherbetter.Second，youshouldlearntodoyourownthingswellbyyourself，(理由)provingtoyourmomthatyouarealreadya“grown-up”.It’sevenbetterifyoucouldsharemoreofthehousework，(列举)suchascleaning，washingandcooking.读写任务阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150个词左右的英语短文。ShiFangspendsmorethan4,000yuanamonthshopping,butsherarelygoestotheshoppingmall.“WhyneedashoppingmallifyouhaveTaobao?IamaTaobaoer,”saysShi,28,afreelancewriter(自由作家)inBeijing.Taobao,China’slargestonlineshoppingsitehasbecomeanessentialpartofShiFang’slife.ShespendshalfofhermonthlysalarytoTaobao,loggingontothewebsiteeveryday,evenwhenshedoesn’tneedanything,simplyto“stayupdatedtothelatestitems”.AgrowingnumberofChineseInternetuserslikeShihavediscoveredthejoysofonlineshopping.TheChinaInternetNetworkInformationCenter(CNNIC)announcedinDecemberthatmorethan87millionChinesemadepurchasesontheInternetinthefirsthalfyear,whichmeansoneoutoffourChinesenetizens(网民)haveonlineshoppingexperience.Itisestimatedthattheannualconsumptionfromonlineshoppingwillreachmorethan250billionyuanthisyear,and80percentofthisiscarriedoutthroughTaobao.com,China’sfast-growinge-commercehub(电子商务中心)establishedin2003.[写作内容]1.以约30个词概括短文的内容要点；2.然后以约120个词就“网购”为主题发表你的看法,内容包括:(1)叙述你自己或身边朋友的一次网购经历。(2)分析现实购物与网购的各自的好处。(3)对于购物你有何建议?ThepassagemainlytellsusthatmoreandmorenetizensinChinalikeShiFangbuygoodsontheInternet,amongwhichTaobaoisthelargestonlineshoppingsite.Almosttwomonthsago,Iwantedtobuymymotherabirthdaypresent,butIdidn’thavemuchtimetogoshopping.IsurfedtheInternetandfoundapinkhandbagwhichIthoughtwouldfitmymotherperfectly.Ipaidandreceiveditsevendayslater.Tomydelight,mymotherlikeditverymuch.Thereisnodoubtthatshoppingonlinehassomeadvantages.Firstofall,it’squiteconvenienttoshoponlineforweneedn’tgofromoneshoptoanother,sowecansavelotsoftime.Inaddition,,shoppingonlineisalsocheaperandmorecolorfultousandtheInternetprovidesuswiththegoodscominginallshapes,sizesandcolors,whichcanmeetourdemands.However,traditionalshoppingalsohasitsownbenefits.Foronething,ourpersonalinformationmaybeletoutwhenshoppingonline.Foranother,whengoingshoppinginperson,youcanexperiencethecolor,shape,andqualityofgoodsandenjoydiscussingyourchoiceswithfriends.Inmyopinion,shoppingontheInternetandbuyinginstoresarebothimportanttousinourdailylife.Weshouldconsidercarefullyandchoosewhatwewanttobuyaccordingourownsituations.