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水彩风简约时尚汇报总结通用模板—POWERPOINT—高中英语写作01考试要求02评分标准03写作步骤04写作技巧CONTENTS目录考试要求—01—高考考纲要求：2.使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯的表达自己的意思。1.准确使用语法和词汇；评分标准—02—英语作文评分细则对比表档次规定任务覆盖内容要点语法结构、词汇复杂结构、高级词汇连接成分与结构写作目的完成情况第五档（21—25分）完全完成覆盖所有应用较多尽力使用（语法结构或词汇有些许错误）有效使用连接，全文结构紧凑完全达到第四档（16—20分）较完全完成覆盖所有，漏掉有一两个次要点满足任务要求语法结构或词汇方面基本准确，些许错误是尝试复杂结构和高级词汇所致简单使用连接全文结构紧凑达到第三档（11—15分）基本完成覆盖所有，但漏掉一些内容基本满足任务要求语法结构或词汇方面的错误有一些，但不影响理解，简单使用连接全文内容连贯基本达到第二档（6—10分）未恰当完成漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了无关内容语法单调，词汇有限语法结构单调，词汇项目有限，语言语法错误影响对写作内容的理解较少使用连接成分，内容缺少连贯信息未能清楚地传达给读者第一档（1—5分）未完成明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容语法单调，词汇有限语法结构或词汇方面错误较多，影响对写作内容的理解缺乏连接成分，内容不连贯信息未能传达给读者第零档未完成与要点内容无关内容太少无无未能传达任何信息层次不乱句式多变亮点若干高分作文基本特征：巧妙串联蠢错不犯整洁卷面1.内容:要点完整，观点阐述清晰，思想积极向上。2.结构:段落层次分明紧凑，逻辑清晰，衔接自然连贯。3.遣词造句:词汇丰富（避免一词多用），语法结构多样（如：定于从句、状语从句、名词性从句，并列句和非谓语等），衔接过渡词的恰当有效运用。4.卷面：美观性（卷面书写规范，清楚，干净、整洁）尽量高级词句，但“先无错，再精彩”！高分作文关键因素：写作步骤—03—审题题目要求？体裁？要点？几段？人称和时态？特殊要求？（用笔圈出重要信息）草稿结构（写几段，每段写什么）关键词（关键单词和短语）句式（高级句式）成文注意语言的自然流畅，清楚正确地表达。注意书写和卷面的美观性（规范，清楚，干净、整洁）检查检查是否有单词拼写，大小写，标点等错误。（消除过失错误，避免自杀行为）写作技巧—04—一、“起”好开头表示“起”的词汇常用在段落或文章的开头，用于开篇引出扩展句。常见的词汇有：first,firstly,firstofall,atfirst,inthefirstplace,aboveall,tobegin/startwith,today,now,nowadays,atpresent,currently,recently,generallyspeaking,accordingto等。感谢信开头常用句型1.Thankyousomuchfor…….2.Iwouldliketothankyoufromthebottomof(从心底)myheartfor……3.I’mwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudefor……4.I’mgratefultoyoufor……5.Itrulyappreciateyour……6.Wordsfailtoconveymygratitudetoyou.道歉信开头常用句型1.Iwouldliketoexpressmyapologyfor……2.Pleaseacceptmysincerestanddeepestapologyfor……3.I’mterriblysorrytotellyouthat……4.Willyoubegoodenoughtoexcusemefor……5.Iamwritingtoapologizetoyoufor……6.IwishIcouldbegivenachancetomakeupformyinconsideration(粗心).邀请信开头常用句型1.Iamwritingonbehalfofallthestudentsofourclasstoinviteyoutogivealectureon……2.Iamwritingonbehalfofallthemembersofourclubtoextendto(给与)youourformalinvitationtovisit…3.Wewouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldgiveatalkon……4.Thehonorofyourpresenceisrequested...5.It'sagreathonor/pleasureformetoinviteyouto...建议信开头常用句型1.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning……2.Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout……,andIwilltrytomakesomeconducive(有益的)suggestions.3.Iwouldliketosuggestthat……4.Iamwritingtoputupsomesuggestionsconcerning……5.It’smygreathonortorecommend……申请信开头常用句型1.Iamwritingtoyouthislettertoshowmykeen(强烈的)interestinthepostof……whichyouadvertisedin...2.Inreplytoyouradvertisementin……,Ibegtoapplyforthepostof……inyourcompany.3.Iwouldliketoapplyforthepositionof……4.Iwouldliketoapplyforthescholarship(奖学金)thatyourschoolmaybeoffering.5.Iamverygladtoavail(利用)myselfofthechancetorecommendmyselftoyou.满分作文范例IamsorrytosaythatIcannotgotothebookstorewithyouonFridayafternoon.(2016•全国卷丙)Asastudent,Icantellyouthatthereisnothingbetterthanbeingpraisedbymyteacherbeforemyclassmates.(2015•湖南高考)I'mgladtohearthatyouwillcometoourschoolasanexchangestudent.(2014•天津高考)二、“承”好上下表示“承”的词汇常用于承接主题句或第一个扩展句。常见的词汇有：second/secondly,besides,inaddition,soonafterwards,afterthat,what'smore,furthermore,moreover,what'sworse,tomakemattersworse,forexample,inotherwords,especially,particularly,obviously,meanwhile,atthesametime等。常用衔接句型1.Asisoftenthecase,…2.Buttheproblemisnotsosimple.…3.Butitisapitythat….4.Inspiteofthefactthat….,they….5.However,….6.Inaddition,….7.Similarly,….8.Ashasbeenmentionedabove,…9.Onthecontrary,….10.Ontheotherhand,….满分作文范例Besides,IhavesuchagoodcommandofEnglishthatIamelectedasassistanttomyEnglishteacher.(2015•陕西高考)What'sworse,somedrivers,cyclistsandpedestriansdonotthinkitvitaltoobeytrafficrules.(2015•江苏高考)Moreover,itseemsthathealwaysthinksmoreofhimselfthanofothers.(2014•重庆高考)三、“转”好过渡表示“转”的词汇常用来表示不同或相反的意见或情况。常见的词汇有：but,yet,however,while,otherwise，or(else),onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,contraryto，inanycase,though,although,as,evenif/though,despite,inspiteof,regardlessof等。满分作文范例However,whatamazesyoumostisthefollowingnewfunctions.(2014•湖南高考)Otherwisewe'llhavetoanswerforourselfishnesssoonerorlater.(2014•重庆高考)Butnow,becausemyleftfootwasinjured,Icannotgowithyouasplanned.(2014•北京高考)四、“合”好结尾表示“合”的词汇常用于小结段落中上文的内容，引导最后一个扩展句或引导结尾句表示段落的结束。常见的词汇有：finally,lastbutnotleast,inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,ina/oneword,tosumup,allinall,onthewhole，ingeneral等。常用结尾句型1.Iwillconcludebysaying…2.Therefore,webelievethat…3.Witheverythingtakenintoconsideration,we...4.Itmaybesafelysaidthat….5.Inshort,….6.Tosumup,…7.Inmyopinion,….8.Allinall,….9.I'dappreciate/Iwillbegladitifyou….满分作文范例IamsurethatIcanperfectlyliveuptoyourexpectations.(2015•陕西高考)Inaword,mylifewillbemuchricherandmorecolorful.(2014•全国卷Ⅱ)I'llbegladifyoucanconsidermyrecommendation.(2014•浙江高考)010203040506非谓语五、简单句到高级亮点句的蜕变复合句并列句其它句式高级、亮点词汇固定句式结构1.非谓语在写作中的运用todo(作目的状语，作后定表动作未发生)doing（表伴随，原因和结果，方式状语，作后定表动作正在进行）主动关系done（表原因和方式状语，作后定表示被动或完成）被动关系Eg:Withalotofworktodo,heworkedfrommorningtonight.Facedwithsomuchschoolwork,wehavetostayuplate.Whenmeetingproblems,wecanturntoteachersforhelp.Eg:Ourteachersshouldn’tbetookindorstrict.Ourteachersshouldbeneithertookindnor(theyare)toostrict.Neithershouldourteachersbetookindnor(theyare)toostrict.2.并列句在写作中的运用两个或两个以上的简单句用“连词”连在一起构成的句子，叫做并列句，各个并列句中的各简单句意义同等重要，相互之间没有从属关系，它们之间用连词连接。Eg:Protectingoure