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漫画作文讲解•漫画作文、图片作文写作步骤：读图---1.仔细观察图片2.认真阅读提示句子解意---联系生活，辨明褒贬，反映现象谋篇---PartI---PartII---PartIII---图画描写（4-5句）（过渡句）反映现象（1句）--原因或后果(4-5句）个人看法（解决方法）（2-3点）漫画作文谋篇——三步走•拿到漫画类作文，首先精读文字部分，确定写作主题，其次根据中文提示，按照“描述图片”“联系生活”“个人见解”三步走战略来谋篇。•1.紧扣漫画主题，描述图片•（.抓住画面有效信息，合理发挥想象•尽量用一些新颖词汇、句型结构•确立人称、时态）•2、由图画到生活（特点：把握漫画的寓意，揭示事件的本质或分析问题产生的原因）3.个人见解提出对策Part1DescribethepictureAsisvividlyshowninthepicture,…Asisvividlybetrayedinthedrawingabove,..•Aswecanseeinthepicture…•Thepictureistryingtotellusthat…•Inthepicture,thereare…/…is(are)doing…•Thepictureaboveisabout…•…Let’slookatthepictureabove/first.Fromthepicturewecanseeacatstandingbyawaterpipethatispouringwastewaterintotheriver.Obviouslythecatrepresentsthegovernmentofficialwhomonitorstheenvironmentalprotection.Whenheisaskedwhythewaterissodirty,herepliesthatthemoredevelopedtheeconomy,thedirtierthewater.Practise!Practise•Asisvividlybetrayedinthedrawingabove,astudentistryinghisbesttoreachthefullscoreofimportantsubjectsincludingEnglish,maths,physics,andChinesewhileneglectingthemoreimportantaspectssuchaspsychologicalqualityandmoralstandards.Thisdrawingmirrorsacommonsocialphenomenon,whichhasarousedoursocialconcernandisinfactthought-provoking.Asisshowninthepicture,awomancarryingachildisstandingonthebus,strugglingtokeepabalance.Thepeoplesittingontheseatspretendtolookoutofthewindows,wearinganindifferentexpressionontheface,whichleavesthewomanhelpless.Asisbetrayedinthedrawingabove,standinginthemiddleofthebusisamothercarryingachild,whoisignoredbytheotherpassengersseatedontheirownseats.Thereisapicturewhichshowsusatruesceneonabus.Whatwecanseefromthepictureisthatamotherwithababyinherarmsisstandingdangerouslywhileallthepeopleonthebusignoreherasifnothingisassociatedwiththemselves.Inthepicture,alltheseatsare________.Amothercarryingherlitterbaby___________unsteadily,_______tokeepherbalance._____________,ayounggirlissittingandlookingoutofthewindow,__________nottoseethem.________________,alltheotherpassengersalikeare__________________tosuchascene.occupiedisstandingtryingBesideherpretendingAtthesametimeturningablindeyePart2Interpretthepicture必背常用过渡句•Itseemsveryridiculousthat…However,thiskindofstoryisperformedeverywhere.•Thepictureshowsthat…Itistheexactreflectionof…•Thepictureindicatesthatwe…Nowadays,itisacommonphenomenonthat…•Thisisasatirical(讽刺的)cartoonwhichdescribesvividlyakindofcommonphenomenonamong…Thispicturereflectsacommonphenomenonthat…Thisphenomenonisespeciallycommonin…Thepicturemirrorsacommonphenomenon,whichhasarousedoursocialconcernandisinfactthought-provoking.Whatthepicturewantstostressisthatsomepeopleinsocietyare-----.There’snodenyingthatthepictureshowsarealphenomenoninsociety.Thispictureisthought-provokingandwhatitreflectsisanincreasingphenomenoninoursociety,onethatshouldbegivenseriousthoughtto.Thishasbecomeacommonphenomenoninourcountry,whichweshouldgiveseriousthoughtsto.•Howpoorthechildis!Hislifeissupposedtobecolourfulandmeaningful.Studyingshouldbeonlypartofhislife.Heneedn’tworkroundtheclock,whichisnotgoodforhisgrowthanddevelopment.Justastheoldsayinggoes,allworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.Hedeservesahappychildhoodasotherkids.PartII:反应现象，原因•Whatisreallyshowninthepictureisthefactthatchildrenarefacedwithmoreandmorehomeworkandhigherlevelofstressofstudy,andaretiredbothphysicallyandmentally.•Theyaretooyoungtoputupwiththis.•Parentsandteacherspushthechildrentomemorizepiecesofinformationaimlessly,whichdoesgreatharmtothembothphysicallyandmentally.Part3Giveyouropinions•Ithink/believethat•AsfarasI’mconcerned,•Inmyopinion,•Frommypointofview,musthavetoDo/Don’t…besupposedto…Itisbetter/advisableto…Iconsideritnecessary…Onlyinthiswaycanwe….Onlywithcombinedeffortscanwe…PartIII个人观点（做法）•Nowadays,inChinathisisacommonphenomenon,whichisdeeplyrootedintheeducationsystem.Whatweneedtodoismakesomeimmediatechanges.Thesociety,schoolsandfamiliesshouldn’tputtoomuchpressureonchildrenandshouldgivethemenoughtimetotakepartinsocialactivities.Onlyinthiswaycanchildrenbesetfreeandliveahappylife.下图描绘的是目前许多孩子的苦恼，请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，描述一下造成这种现象的原因并发表你的看法。Consolidation:ThepictureshowsthehelplessnessfacingmanychildreninChina.Hehastogotosomanytrainingclassesbesideshisschoolclasses.Heisforcedtoputasidewhathereallylikes.Lifeisnofunatallforhim.Holidaysandweekendshavebecomedullwork-days.Heistootiredtolearntheselessonswellwithnointerest.Thisisasatiricalcartoonwhichdescribesvividlyakindofcommonphenomenonfacingmanychildren.Asweallknow,manyfamilieshaveonlyonechild,soparentsputmuchexpectationonchildren.Theywanttoequiptheirchildrenwithallkindsofknowledgeandskillssothatchildrencanbewellpreparedforthechallengesofthefuture.Inmyopinion,spare-timetrainingcoursesareawasteoftimeformanystudents.Theymightdobetterwhentheyshowinterestinwhattheyarelearningstudentsshouldn’tbeforcedtodowhattheyarenotwillingto,andwhenlearningisfun,surelytheywilldobetterthanexpected!第七部分书面表达（共l题，满分15分）假如你是一名高三学生,最近你看了一则央视公益广告Family且深有感触。请用英语根据下面的图给你校英语报写一篇立志学习,感恩父母的文章,描述图片要表达的内容和意义并谈谈你的感受。注意:1.词数150左右,开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,thewordfamilyrepresentsthreepeople,whoare