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第五节提升作文表达能力的技巧——增加细节(2019·全国卷Ⅱ)假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：1．比赛信息；2．赛前准备；3．表达期待。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【写作思路】题目要求给队友写一封电子邮件，通知近期将参加比赛。第一和第二个内容要点是重点，也是难点，需要把它们写得具体。考生如果能把比赛的时间、地点、对手、赛前准备、注意事项以及期待写清楚，就符合写作要求了。【参考范文】DearChris，AreyouexcitedaboutourcomingvolleyballgameagainstYucaiMiddleSchoolnextFriday？①HereI'dliketoinformyouofsomedetailedinformationsothatyoucanmakefullpreparationsforit.②Firstandforemost，thecompetitiontobeheldinourschoolstadiumwillbeginat2pmandlastforroughly3hours.Sosignificantisthegamethatitisrequiredthateveryoneshouldpresentthemselvespunctually.Further，itisnecessaryforyoutotakeagoodrest，whichwillprovideenoughenergyforyou.Tosumup，Iwishyoucouldliveuptotheexpectationsofourschool.AndIfirmlybelievehardworkwillpayoff!Lookingforwardtoourvictory!Yourstruly，LiHua【一句多译】①表达方式一：NowIwillgiveyouanintroductiontothegamewithaviewtomakingyoufullyprepareforit.表达方式二：NowI'llkeepyouinformedofsomedetailedinformationtohelpyoufullyprepareforit.②表达方式一：Tobeginwith，thecompetitionwillbeheldinourschoolstadium，lastingforabout3hoursfrom2pmto5pm.表达方式二：Firstofall，thecompetitionisscheduledtotakeplaceinourschoolstadium，beginningat2pmandendingat5pm.这是一篇带有邀请信特色的告知信，作为学校排球队队长的李华要告诉队员即将参加的比赛，具体细节包括比赛内容、比赛前的准备等，并期盼它的到来。事实上，“告知信”是近年高考英语作文的热点。大家在平时的写作时要多加训练，同时也要熟悉告知信的格式要求，尽量表达清楚，也要适当增加细节，使短文行文流畅，内容充实丰满。增加细节的5大策略在英语书面表达中，增加细节内容的描述是必不可少的。在信息提纲类写作中，考生一定不能简单地翻译或者仅仅完成所给的条目的指定内容；在看图作文中更不能只是对图片内容轻描淡写，否则很有可能造成内容不充实、字数要求不达标或者结构不连贯等问题。适当增加细节内容，能够使习作流畅、丰满，达到应有的表达效果。1．列举具体的实例进行补充说明(1)(2019·全国卷Ⅱ)因此，迫切需要充分的准备。Asaresult，adequatepreparationisurgentlyneeded.→Asaresult，adequatepreparationisurgentlyneeded，includingpractice，nutritionandaperfectplan.(2)(2017·天津卷)我是一个充满活力的健康男孩，我非常喜欢体育运动。I'mahealthyboyfullofenergysoIlikesportsverymuch.→I'mahealthyboyfullofenergysoIlikesportsverymuch，especiallyoutdooractivities.WheneverIhavetime，I'llgohikingormountainclimbingwithmyclassmates.(3)我要花一些时间和父母在一起。I'llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents.→I'llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents，chattingwiththemanddoingsomehousework.(4)我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。I'dliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.→I'dliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.Ifpossible，wecantraveltogetherorsharetravelingexperiences.2．增添与所写信息相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容(1)(2017·全国卷Ⅲ)大家知道，打乒乓球对我们有很多益处。ItisknownthatwecanbenefitalotfromplayingPingPong.→ItisknownthatwecanbenefitalotfromplayingPingPong，anexcitingsportwhichtrainseyes，brainsandmusclesandsoon.(充实细节)(2)我有时去村西的小河游泳。Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.→Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.Thewaterintheriverisveryclear.(背景渲染)→Weatherpermitting，Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.(相关背景描述)(3)我发现了一些不良行为。Ifoundsomebadbehavior.→Ifoundsomebadbehavior.Somepeoplescribbledonthewall；someplayedsocceronthelawnandsomepeoplethrewrubbisheverywhere.(相关行为描述)(4)晚饭后，这位男士走向了卧室。Aftersupper，themanwenttohisbedroom.→Afterarichmeal，thefatmanslowlymadehiswaytohisbedroom.(神态、动作描写)3．增加相关信息的时间、地点等内容(1)此外，你最好带些礼物。(2018·全国卷Ⅰ)Besides，you'dbetterbringsomegifts.→Besides，you'dbetterbringsomegifts，likeabookoraChineseknot.(增加内容)(2)我已经带来了你让我归还的这两本书。Ihavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturn.→IhavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturntotheCityLibrary.(增加地点)(3)我要和父母一起去超市购物。I'mgoingtodosomeshoppingwithmyparentsinthesupermarket.→I'mgoingtodosomeshoppingwithmyparentsinthesupermarketandwon'tbebackuntilabout5：00intheafternoon.(增加时间)(4)(2017·全国卷Ⅱ)这次展览的主题是“中国美”，将在我们学校举办。Theexhibition，thethemeofwhichis“beautyofChina”，willtakeplaceinourschool.→Theexhibition，thethemeofwhichis“beautyofChina”，willtakeplaceintheschoolhallfrom2to5ontheafternoonofJune21.(增加时间、地点)4．适当增加与所给信息相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的、地点等内容(1)因为我谙熟中国书画文化，所以我精通中国绘画。(2019·全国卷Ⅰ)IhaveagoodknowledgeofChinesepaintingsbecauseofmyfamiliaritywithChinesepaintingculture.→Besides，havingagoodknowledgeofChinesepaintingsbecauseofmyfamiliaritywithChinesepaintingculture，Icangetforeignfriendsandthelocalstoknowmoreaboutit.(因果关系)(2)我需要很好地休息。我要阅读。Ineedagoodrest.I'lldosomereading.→IneedagoodrestbecauseIdofeeltiredafterthehardworkofalltheseyears.Ofcourse，I'lldosomereadingforfun，andforknowledgeaswell.(因果关系)(3)我要参加一些社交活动。I'lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.→IfIhavefreetime，I'lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.(条件状语)→Ifpossible，I'lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.(条件状语)→Ifpossible，I'lltakepartinsomesocialactivitiessothat/inorderthatIcanknowmoreaboutthesociety.(结果状语)(4)Tracy来电话说咖啡屋(BoltonCoffee)见面取消。Tracycalled，sayingthatshecouldn'tmeetyouatBoltonCoffee.→Tracycalled，sayingthatshecouldn'tmeetyouatBoltonCoffeeasshehassomethingimportanttodo.(原因状语)(5)帮助邻里的孩子补习英语。IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.→IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.Tomyjoy，theymaderapidprogressandtheirparentsthoughthighlyofme.(增添结果)5．结尾适当发挥，写出个人感受、评价、希望愿景、倡议等(1)(2019·全国卷Ⅲ)Ireallyhopethatyoucanattendthemusicfestivalandpleaseletmeknowyourdecisionsoon.(个人感受)(2)(2018·全国卷Ⅱ)Later，wewillchoosesomeofyourcommentsandshareyouropinionswithourreadersinthe“EnglishWorld”columnnextweek.(希望愿景)